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Reviews for Descent

By : ZaKai
  • From ANON - Azumi-chan on February 28, 2008
    Gomensai, it's taken me so long to review to this story. I am truly addicted to it, it flows well and there are so many emotions that go through me when reading it. Mustang is an idiot really, sometimes more than not so is Ed. Al is so sweet, you can tell he loves her so much and in this story the pairing doesn't bother me at all. That was just so romantic and thoughtful, Al is so adorable. Anyway I wanted to tell you how much I love this story and apologize again for reviewing so late, I was so caught up in it. It's wonderful and you are a genius to be able to write this so well and stay very well in character with everyone.
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  • From yeagerbomb on February 22, 2008
    arrrg. *smashes head on desk* this is so angsty!! i hate envy/russel. ...i fell so far behind in my reading. this chapter has been sitting in my inbox for a long time. *sigh* i hope things get better soon!~
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  • From BishounenKrazed on February 17, 2008
    i hate russel.


    well, i hate envy as russel. damn hermaphrodite. oops, sorry, humunculus, or however you spell it. *hmph* and this entire chapter i kept thinking about ed and roy getting married, haha. i am a pervert, ne?

    oh, dearie, you're building up to something fierce here, and it's so got me on the edge of my seat waiting for reunions and action. action of any kind, at that. you know, the fighting kind or the loving kind. XD keep up the great work, and i eagerly await the next chapter!!
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  • From alleycat88 on February 17, 2008
    Poor Winry...I want to cry for her. The wedding was beautiful by the way. Albeit very sad... THanks for updating!
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  • From ANON - stupefiedNarutard on February 16, 2008
    Oh, I feel so horrible for not reviewing in so long. I just don't have the time anymore. Everything is so crazy with school and trying to find a job... urgh... But, at least there was a beautiful, if not painfully sad, wedding to read! I hate that I haven't seen Ed in forever, but I know that this is just as important. (I'm a little biased, aren't I? Rooting for Ed the whole time...) I can't believe Alphonse is STILL so freakin' dimwitted... even after all the people that has betrayed him and Ed over the years. Surely he would know deceit by now? And the way "Russell" is acting... I just don't understand his logic at all. Of course, Al was always generous and forgiving to a fault. I feel bad that Winry didn't have a proper wedding, but at least Al was romantic enough to say some damned good things. So much has happened in the past chapters... jeez. You're trying to kill me!!! *A*

    Oh well... I can't wait for the next chapter either. With Al traveling now too, who knows what's in store. And good Jesus I still want to know exactly what Ed did!!!! (no, i haven't forgotten about that...grrah.)

    lovelovelovelove,
    stupefiedNarutard
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  • From MustangsHavoc on February 15, 2008
    ugh! The ANGST! It's like a hard slap right between the eyes!

    So good!
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on February 15, 2008
    *sobs* I don't know why but I always cry at weddings. I sniffled thru the whole ceremony here and when Winry collapsed at the end, that's when it really hit me. I really felt her pain. T_T I just hope Al manages to stay out of as much trouble as possible. But, he is an Elric and trouble always seems to find them wherever they go. GAH! I'm gonna start crying again at this rate! ;_; The only thing that kept me from breaking down completely was Russell/Envy being a jackass. RRGH! I can't wait for that bastard to get what's coming to him!!
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From eeriansadowthefallen on February 15, 2008
    the wedding was short, sweet and to the point, rather like my own. i knew it was coming that way, and yet it was still refreshing to see that in writing. so many people would have tried to drag it all out anyway. you did a lovely job with it.
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  • From Aibu on February 15, 2008
    It was good, just as I expected, but I almost cried when I got to the end their was no Eddy! I love little Edward way too much for my own good. I gotta know what's happening to him. Please, do try to update soon!
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  • From Aibu on February 08, 2008
    I would love for you to continue your story. It's very plot based, but the pairings are perfect. I sorta wanted to skip parts, and I did, but I couldn't after a certain point, it just got that good. Please, update as soon as you can. Please e-mail me updates at sasuxnarufan@gmail.com Thanks again
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  • From SarahTaylor on January 29, 2008
    I didn't find this story until friday and have only just finished reading all 43 chapters. I love it, I bow to your obvious talent, I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm dying to know what's happened to Roy, about what chapter should we expect him back?? I feel so sorry for Fuery, being taken advantage of like that. Keep it coming please, I look forward to the next update.
    Please can you let me know when you update, my email is sars1@myself.com
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  • From ANON - chelzi on January 28, 2008
    chapter 43:

    great chapter! al... *sigh* oh, al. it's okay... you're just beginners. hope to see more soon! this is an awesome story, though i want envy to DROP. DEAD.~
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  • From ANON - chelzi on January 28, 2008
    great chapter! al... *sigh* oh, al. it's okay... you're just beginners. hope to see more soon! this is an awesome story, though i want envy to DROP. DEAD.~
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  • From BishounenKrazed on January 27, 2008
    i stumbled upon your update this morning, and had i had more coffee in my system, i might have squealed in joy. that being said, i didn't read it right away, because angst is so not what i need first thing in the morning. now, while the chapter itself wasn't that angsty, the potential for angst is so great, that even after such a comical event as their first time, my heart is still crying! i mean, what will happen to al when he gets to the people's army? will envy and lust expose themselves and blackmail al into helping them? will al be brainwashed into fighting against the military? if either of those, what will happen when he runs into ed, who's still in the military and is now lt. colonel, in charge of mustang's troops? and where the hell is roy???!!

    and you know how my imagination can run away with me! i don't care how long the story is, but i need answers!! DX though, i'll wait patiently like any good fangirl, because this story ROCKS THAT HARD.

    (btw, i was having an FMA conversation the other day, about fanfics, and i totally said yours is the best damn story there ever was. no lie. just thought you should know how awesome an author you are! ^^)
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  • From MustangsHavoc on January 22, 2008
    "Did he just get between her legs and do it like the farm animals did?" -Bwahahahhaa! Ed and Al really are hicks aren't they? Well atleast Al is. Poor Winry.
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