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Reviews for Descent

By : ZaKai
  • From ANON - stupefiednarutard on May 27, 2007
    OH yes! We got an all perspective view here!! Poor little Edward... he's like a little love sick puppy, thinking about Roy all of the time. And Roy-- the poor dear... with all the things going on with the military and Edward being gone he HAS to be stressed. I just wish alcohol wasn't his comfort. I hope that soon he figures out it isn't good for him.

    I wonder what Fletcher would've thought about Edward having a relationship with Roy. I know he doesn't really know Mustang, but would he think, 'wow, he likes guys too?' or 'didn't think Ed was like that' or something else. I loved how you referenced to the all is one thing. That was one of my favorite things in the anime. I'm glad Edward had Izumi to teach him those things. And now Fletcher knows it too.

    I'm concerned now for Fletcher as well. With that look-a-like stalking around who knows what will happen to the poor boy. He's a skilled alchemist too, Fletcher I mean.

    Aww-- two little virgins experiencing their first... love... and sexual... healing. XD
    Just do it!! (*winks at Winry and Al*)

    I feel so bad for Fuery!! The poor man has to go through all of this crap because of the damn 'bad people'. Blech. I hate bad ppl. (not really... I always like the villains for some reason... mmm, Scar, mmm, Kimblee...yes I like Kim-sama... BWAHAHAH, he's crazy good!)

    HAHA, I loved the doctor. He was all like (and i paraphrase), 'Take this pamphlet and read about alcoholic side effects you durn alcy. Just keep telling yourself you are not a drunkard. Just wait-- one day you will wake up and find that you have been abducted by hobos and they've named themselves fuhrer in your absence. Bwa ha ha.'

    Well, he didn't say it like that, but he wanted to!!

    Thank you for updating, I love it!

    lovelovelovelove,
    stupefiedNarutard
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  • From ANON - Outcast Martyr on May 27, 2007
    AAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!

    /me kills Envy before he hurts Fletcher.

    Russell I've never liked anyway, but no hurting Fletcher-kun!

    But then, in your story, Russell actually acts like he cares about Fletcher, and isn't just stuck with him.

    Also, I'd love if you resent that original reply, I couldn't find it anywhere...

    If you have MSN Messenger / Windows Live Messenger, add me (diabolical_1@hotmail.com), and when I get that, it'll remind me to check my spam folder just in case (and anything else you send will hit my Inbox =D)
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  • From BishounenKrazed on May 26, 2007
    omg! i was right! envy was the urayami-whatever-his-name-is boy! oh, the fist thing i said when i saw the update was "oh, dude, snap" and read it immediately. i am so in love with this story, and it's got so many twists and turns in the plot that i can hardly tell just what's going on. and ed seems so damn mature smoking and drinking applejack in the moonlight. so cool. keep up such excellent work, and i'll see you in the next chapter!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on May 26, 2007
    Well, Al got some, not really much but it was something. God! I hate Envy! Once again you have given us just enough to torment us but not satisfy us. More please! If you want begging I can do that! I'm not to proud!
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  • From ANON - Arara on May 19, 2007
    OMGZ! You don't know how much I love this story!!! Please please continue it!!
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on May 18, 2007
    LOL! Well, that's one way to quit smoking! I think if I had Izumi staring me down I'd definitely quit! XD Quite frankly, I'm surprised she didn't kick his ass on the spot. It was kinda funny imagining Ed and Fletcher sparring. I just see Fletcher as this frail little thing - no match for Ed at all, which is what he proved himself to be once Ed got serious and stomped him good! :) I liked the little kick Ed gave Fletcher after the match - typical Ed to take something one step too far! :D A talk with Izumi (or a beat down from her!) will do Ed a world of good. He already seems to know what he should do but he just needs her to make him accept it and act on it. Was that Lust that Bartholomew was talking to? I don't know much about this Colonel Douglas but I can't stand him already. Having Roy take him down would make me very happy! :) It's sweet (and a bit devious!) of Al to try teaching Winry how to defend herself. With Kimblee skulking around it's best not to take any chances!
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
    P.S. Will you be updating "Blind Obsession" and "The Sound of Silence" soon? "Blind Obsession" has just sooo many delicious smexy possibilities and "The Sound of Silence", well, I just gotta know what happens next! Does it make me too much of a masochist to want to read something so psychologically painful? hmm...probably! :)
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  • From MustangsHavoc on May 17, 2007
    GAH! That was so short! *snickers at The "S" word* You just love tot orment us don't you. I love Izumi that woman is one tuff bitch!

    poor fletcher! I no one free from sexual angst?
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  • From TrulyWished on May 17, 2007
    I'm reasonably ceratin I've reviewed, but I'll do again just in case. I do love this story, and poor Ed, confused and captured by teacher.
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  • From MooMoo382 on May 17, 2007
    Nye, I didn't really think that Ed had been given a specific birthday date either (Aside from it being Alisia's birthday as well)
    Good chapter, though. Mustang's getting grumpy :D
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  • From BishounenKrazed on May 17, 2007
    another awesome chapter! maybe with ed's lesson from his spar he can get some answers to his dilemma with roy. and all those disappearing bodies... it may actually have nothing to do with the story line, but i totally thought gluttony - like he was eating them or something. oh man, this story is so frickin' mysterious. i just want all the answers! but even though it makes for a very frustrating after-effect, it's good that they come slowly and deliberately throughout the plot. great job. see you next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Windchild on May 14, 2007
    Long time no see Zakai-san! *huggles* Waiii! Another awsome chapter! Love the way you put Al and Winry pairing ^^ Is Ed going to be there at their wedding? I'm sooooooooo curious now! Hope to see the updates soon! ^o^ Ciao!

    ~Wind
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  • From ANON - Brenna on May 12, 2007
    This chapter was so beautiful, you really got the point of them being happy, I have little tears in my eyes. When a writer is talented enough to bring such strong emotions like this to a reader, that means great things are going to happen for you in the future.
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  • From ANON - Tracy on May 09, 2007
    ohhhh, i cannot wait until the next chapter. I am rather eager to see what happens. Especially between Ed and Roy.
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  • From BishounenKrazed on May 04, 2007
    oh! so sweet! and it's always good to know i was right in my conjectures. ^.~ at least one, anyway, heh heh. while this chapter was uber sweet (and totally squickish with kimblee wanting al *shivers*), i was so set to read more about ed and/or roy. *sigh* i guess i'll just have to wait for the next chapter. i was so toally thinking al would run into russel as well and be kept from returning to winry. haha, guess i'm just so very impatient, ne?

    i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update as soon as you possibly can.
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on May 03, 2007
    I think this might be the first time I've reviewed, but I just wanted to say AWWWWWWW!!!!! I'm not a girly girl but that just made me just squeal, it was so sweet. And so cute. And that poem. I loved it:D

    I love this story all together. Though Ed's half of it isn't nearly as sweet I love it too. I can't wait to see where you go with it.

    And also I think you mentioned an update alert list, I'd love to be added to it.
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