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Reviews for You Belong to Me

By : squallstorm
  • From ANON - Tati on January 20, 2009
    Oh, if I could just slap some sense into Roy...
    Lovely, lovely. I loved how you started showing Winry's gears turning. Does she realize that Roy might
    be more emotionally involved than normal? I can't wait for you to update. This story is getting better and better.
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  • From ANON - Briryan on January 18, 2009
    Wonderfull chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Wulfie89 on December 31, 2008
    *screams and runs around in circles.*OMFG WHAT'S GUNNA HAPPEN WHAT'S GUNNA HAPPEN?!?!? I have a feeling Roy's gunna go after Edward but that's just me....oh god I hope he does....please make him go after Edward.....PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Briryan on December 27, 2008
    Poor Ed. That idot Roy. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on December 26, 2008
    Stupid Roy, stupid stupid stupid Roy.
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  • From KayceHurd on November 21, 2008
    i loved it. sorry it took me so long to read. skool has been a hassle
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  • From MustangsHavoc on November 08, 2008
    Loved this chapter! But damn what a tease! You give us "spread your legs" and leave us hanging! I feel so bad for both Ed and Al. They both stand to be hurt alot.
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  • From MustangsHavoc on October 16, 2008
    Poor Ed! That has to be the most painful thing a parent can say to a child!

    Duh, Edward. People are staring at you cause your hot! I can't get the image of him in a pin-stripe shirt and slacks, with his golden hair pulled up, out of my mind! Yummy!

    Another great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Cat on October 11, 2008
    Wow...chapter 21/20 had a few twists that I did not see coming. Cool. I really did not see how Da was going to react to Ed's gay news. That was a surprise. I expected Da to be loving and calm like he was in the past but like in real life you never know how anyone reacts to any type of news. The other twist I did not see coming involved Scar's family...that was interesting. And special. Maes and his family impromptu visit was unexpected but Maes and intelligent work will always be hand in hand no matter what universe. Like how Gracia in any world still is a powerful lady....just with a glance she can change Maes's direction. It is sweet how Roy is with Ed right now but it is a little bittersweet knowing what is coming. Still...why do people think they can intermingle the personal with business? (like marriages...etc...too many people go for the materialistic...so sad.) Cannot wait for the next chapters. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Briryan on October 11, 2008
    That was a great chapter. Poor Ed. I hope his da comes around and accepts him. I also hope things work out well between Ed and Roy. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From KayceHurd on October 06, 2008
    i am sorry. i love this story. for me if i start a story i read it all the way through and then leave a review. I guess i should have left one at each chappie. i appologize.
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  • From ANON - Orion117 on September 06, 2008
    Yay, another chapter! The poor boys—they're each suffering in their own way, and judging by Roy's plans, there will be more ahead. I liked the scene between Roy and Pinako very much. Seeing Roy lose his temper for once was powerful. It was fun to see Alex in this chapter, too. Looking forward to the next one . . .
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  • From ANON - briryan on September 02, 2008
    This is a wonderfull story. So glad I started reading it. I was so glad that Ed and Russell didn't sleep together. Can't wait for Roy and Ed to really get together. Hope that Ed does agree and moves back to Paris with Roy that would be great! Looking forward to the next chapter. Also I was wondering if you could email me when you post the next chapter. Pleas and Thanks.

    Briryan
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  • From ANON - Holly on August 28, 2008
    I'm loving the story, can't wait to see what happens in your next chapters. I have no complaints/criticism to give, everything is great. :) Keep it up!

    *wants to see Roy and Ed all happy* ^_________^
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  • From ANON - MustangsHavoc on August 26, 2008
    Dismal reviews? This story? THAT'S JUST NOT RIGHT!

    I adore this story. It's got everything a reader could want and I stalk AFF looking for updates daily.

    I liked the cliffy ending, you left not only Ed but Roy as well at an impass.

    and I absolutly can't wait for them to get to Paris! to see where you take this!

    More please!
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