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By : squallstorm
  • From Rucina on April 11, 2008
    wooow i love your story! i haven't read this in a year cause of busyness while talking to a friend i remembered about this story and decided to find it!

    i really love how the story is moving its really close to the movie but really different! this has been one of my favorite movies sense i was little! i really wanna see ed and roy get closer and i wanna see what happens with the fight with scar that will probably be really intense!! it would also be interesting to see Russell back in the story that will probably make roy really jealous! (i know that doesn't happen in the movie but it would be interesting!)

    i hope you update soon this is a really really great story!! X3

    i cant wait for the part where everyone realize that roy loves edward i love that part!!! but thats a while away! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 09, 2008
    Alright, first review didn't go through (I really hate that -_-) So the nice long review I wrote you is no more and I am too tired to try and do the whole thing over again D:

    In a nutshell;

    1. This story is amazing.

    2. When you update, could you possibly send an email my way so I know? mizu-benten@hotmail.com

    3. I've spent the last six hours reading this, it's almost 5 am and I need to be a work by nine. The best part is that I enjoyed every moment of my shortening sleep time XD

    Love the story! Cannot wait for more chapters! Good luck!

    mizubenten
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 09, 2008

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  • From ANON - Lucious Coulter on March 19, 2008
    Wow. This is an amazing story. I am very impressed by the use of characterization and emotional sequences. I like the way you have portrayed all of the characters. They seem to fit the story line perfectly. I encourage you to continue writing this story. Not only because I absolutely love it, but it has the potential to be one of the best Roy/Ed stories out there. I am very impressed. Keep up the good work.

    Sincerely,

    Lucious Coulter.
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  • From ANON - Fluffy1322 on December 28, 2007
    Ah!! I love it!! The whole story is soo well written and I have never seen any story like yours before. I hope they get together soon though, the suspense is killing me. If you would update soon that would be GREAT! :D
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  • From radcat on December 25, 2007
    What a way to leave us....Ed and Scar in the ring....just about to fight...and then you say see you next year....cannot wait for the new year. Merry Christmas. Cat
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  • From mikoserena on December 21, 2007
    Oh no! Cliffhanger! Write more quickly! Please? :)
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  • From ANON - Tati on December 14, 2007
    Excuse me! What kind of an evil cliffhanger was that? Now I have to wait until the next update. I won't have any nails left, only bloody stumps for fingers. AGH!
    What a great chapter. The emotions, action, and tension were very well written. Now to start the countdown to 2008.


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  • From Velvetina on December 14, 2007
    Wow, I'm new to FMA but I loved this fic. I read it all in one go and now I can't wait for more. I love the movie Sabrina and think they way that you've written this fic is very clever. I enjoy seeing the same basic plotline with so many twists and turns thrown in. I'm looking forward to what comes next. Surely Ed can beat Scar. I hope so!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Alair<3 on December 08, 2007
    This is great! What's taking so long? Keep going! Plz?
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  • From Evermist on November 25, 2007
    I love this story, and can't wait for more! =^.^= And that last chapter alone...oh, God...I don't think you meant to, but my perverted, gutter-lining brain stuck in three different little innuendos while I was reading it. ^^;

    ...Do amazing things with his body...*giggles* ^///^
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  • From Yaoigirl69 on November 08, 2007
    That was a great chapter. I enjoyed it very much. I really like how this follows the basic story line of the movie and yet at the same time has so many unique points. I can't wait to read the next few chapters. =)
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  • From alleycat88 on November 07, 2007
    YAY! Updaate! awesome chapter! shows the growing relationship between Mustang and ed! and I AM waiting on A Little Light of Love! I cant wait till you update it!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on November 07, 2007
    I enjoyed that very much, it was a good building chapter. There was just one thing wrong with it. It was too short! I want more!
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  • From Starspear on October 25, 2007
    Hey, I'm out here! I'm reading! This is my official review to letcha know I love this story and am paying close attention to your updates. Are Russell and Roy gonna duke it out over Ed? Seems likely. WOOT!
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