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Reviews for You Belong to Me

By : squallstorm
  • From ANON - Orion117 on May 01, 2007
    I'm catching up with this story after several weeks away, and I'm really enjoying reading it. It's fun to see Ed develop some of the qualities he has in the anime (the fighting skills, the interest in research) in a different way and a different time. I like that he sings, too. The way you've worked in other characters like LIng and Paninya is also entertaining.

    I also like what you've done with Ed and Russell. I thought you did a great job with both sex scenes. Drunken Russell was pretty funny, too. The only thing I'm dying to know is, what has Roy been doing all this time?
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  • From ANON - dana on April 17, 2007
    i want you to know that your lemon wasn't bad so please do not feel that you are doing a bad job in fact you are doing great (you have me hooked). i can't for the next update. by the way are we going to visit roy soon or are you going to have them not interact at all until ed goes back to the states like in the movie. thanks
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  • From ANON - stupefiedNarutard on April 15, 2007
    Oh God, I love this story!

    For a little while there, for some reason, I couldn't review, but now I can and I'm happy! Woot! Okay, so this was an outstanding chapter, and I like the pairing, but I'm just wondering how you are going to transition from RussxEd to RoyxEd (isn't that what's going to happen, or am I mistaken) Anyways, I love the tournament and everyone included in it. I hate when I get so excited about a story I begin to shake. Isn't that really, really weird? Oh well, I just really got anticipated on who would win the match, because, you know, everyone wants Ed to win. Oh and I LOVE the little smut, you did a GREAT job. Mmm, RussxEd.

    I doubt Edward would say anything about it to his da... or maybe he would... but not about.. certain things. I wonder if his da would be against the idea of him with another man... I mean, it would take his obsession from Winry. I like Drunk!Ed... mmm RussxEd.

    I hate Winry anyways.

    I somehow knew Russell and Fletcher had been together, it's impossible not to make them in some kinda relationship, be it romantic, brotherly, friendly, etc. It's cute though. I wonder what will happen with Fletcher and Riza...that's kind of an unexpected couple, but very fresh I suppose. ^_^

    I love all of their personalities... ED IS SO ADORABLE!!! He's... well, plain and simple, a uke. XD

    Anyways, I'm really diggin' this story, so please e-mail me when you update please!!! shitake_shroomz@yahoo.com

    lovelovelovelovelove,
    stupefiedNarutard
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  • From milky on April 14, 2007
    Hey, I liked the sex both then AND now! This AU is amusing in that I really really am rooting for Russell here. He and Ed are sweet together ;-; Thanks for writing it!
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  • From Yaoigirl69 on April 13, 2007
    I Loved it! That was great, very smexy! I love Sabrina! Your doing a really good job with this. Continue Please. XD
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  • From ANON - The Candy Made Me Do It on April 13, 2007
    Loved it, loved it, loved it, loved it... And I loved the last one, too, don't bum yourself out about it. I love the blonde pile thing. (Meaning... Edward with Russell, Heiderich, Al... that thing XD)

    Can't wait for an update, love this story to death, and, Winry has to die... The end :3
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  • From BishounenKrazed on April 13, 2007
    yes! an update! and even though russel/ed isn't one of my fav pairings, i did like how you handled the lime, and their relationship in general. though i am waiting on pins and needles for my dear roy's reappearance. i look forward to the next chapter very much! until then!
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  • From milky on March 13, 2007
    Mmmm, that was wonderfully hot! I like how awkward they were around each other, until finally they just got carried up in the moment and put two and two together *_* Nice to see a fic where the First Time isn't anal and where no one is quite sure what's going on afterward. Very tasty! Hope to see more.
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  • From BishounenKrazed on March 12, 2007
    these last two chapters were great! though i'm so waiting eagerly for roy to come into the picture! when you said LA, i was seriously like 'ROY!' but he could be in greece too right? *puppy dog eyes*

    keep up the great work!! XD
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  • From milky on March 06, 2007
    Aww, poor Ed...I'm on the edge of my seat here, wondering what is wrong with him. You do a great job of pulling us into his head and letting us know just how he feels and how well he is/isn't doing. Please do continue!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 04, 2007
    Sick!Ed is so cute! *cuddles sick!Ed* I love how Russell takes care of him like that. Although... I'm very curious about the whole 'not calling in' thing... hmm... Do I sense... PLOT? *gasp!*

    One little technical thing, though... you put 'tinnitus shots' Tinnitus is ringing in the ears (can be a precurser to major hearing loss or deafness). I think you mean 'tetanus' is lockjaw (can be caused by scratches).

    Can't wait for more! Evil cliffie!!!!!
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  • From Rucina on February 08, 2007
    Hey this is getting really really good i am curouise about how you are gonna get winery to sit on the glass?? XD

    and i wanna see where the ed/russle is goin!

    Pleasssssse update sooon!!!!!!!
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  • From milky on January 27, 2007
    Aw, I feel so sorry for Ed here! It's rough to be that sick...hope they take good care of him!
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  • From BishounenKrazed on January 26, 2007
    yay, another chapter!! and with a story like this, these chapters that seem not to advance the plot are great, in my opinion. i mean, it certainly puts to rest some doubts and confusion russel and ed share, and add to the realistic pace that most stories lack. keep up the great work, and update soon!!
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  • From nomdeplume on January 26, 2007
    I think this is such an interesting idea. I love the movie Sabrina (both versions) and was curious how you would manage it. So far, it's very good.
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