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Reviews for Breaking Havoc

By : WaterWalker
  • From rizennyves on March 28, 2011
    I effing adore this story and I was wondering if there's any chance for it to be continued since it's been almost TWO years... Like I said, I love this and I really want to know what happens next.
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  • From VampireHaku on November 11, 2009
    I do hope you update soon :( this is my favorite fic that I read that is currently ongoing... hope to read more soon!

    -VH
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  • From Koigokoro on August 20, 2009
    This is really good! I love it. I hope I can read more.... to bad there isn't a story alert on this site (that I know of), because I want to keep reading. You are a good writer, your chapters are long and detailed and keep me interested. You have a natural talent with words and I hope you do something brilliant with it, wether continuing this or starting something original.
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  • From mw0627 on July 03, 2009
    Yay, I was happy to check in on this story after keeping it in my favorites for a long time and now there was more to read. Thank you and please keep going. Poor Havoc...I wanna hug him.
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  • From gingermaya on April 29, 2009
    This is truly exquisitely written, despite the sad subject matter. You don't beat around the bush and you don't sugar coat things! I truly enjoyed reading it so far! You probably get that a lot, but I hope you update soon!

    Just one small thing - you have an excellent grammar, but from time to time you make spelling mistakes. For example, "manour" (spelled like that it means a large country house, usually a possession of some sort of an aristocrat) should be spelled "manner" (behaviour, way, etc.etc.) I am only pointing out because your fic is so good already, avoing these little mistakes can make it absolutely perfect! :D
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  • From ANON - Anise on April 25, 2009
    (8) I love how you wrote Ed and Al, you got their characters down perfectly, actually all of the characterizations work so well. Havoc feeling trapped and backed into a corner and yet he still has a bit of his defiance and then Archer, despite how horrible he is, I can't help but appreciate just how manipulative he's being. Mustang seems truly floored by Ed's observations about Havoc, his reaction when he finds out they're 'dating' (i wonder if he'll be jealous) and then of course what is truly going on isn't going to be pretty. Have I mentioned that I can't wait to see Mustang light Archer's hair on fire (for a start) for what he's done to Havoc, I'm so looking forward to the save Jean part of the story :) Another great chapter, I'm just sorry that I had missed it when it first came out, hopefully that means I won't have to wait as long for the next chapter ;)
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  • From VampireHaku on April 23, 2009
    Just read chapter 8! When I saw it was up I squealed with excietment, I'm always so happy when you update! But wow, this whole chapter was really intense. I loved the talk between the elrics and roy, so full of tension, they're all so worried! And when Ed and Al ran into Havoc, his expressions and everything were so good :). Archer is such a sick jerk, can't wait to read more! Update soon pleeeease!
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  • From Evermist on April 15, 2009
    Finally, this is updated! I've been waiting so LONG to get the next chapter of this; it's so good. Don't leave us waiting for so long again, okay?
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  • From naturallymorbid on April 06, 2009
    I just stumbled onto this story last night, but I
    swear I was glued to the edge of my seat the whole time!
    So twisted and dark, but most excellent ^_^
    I hope you update soon!
    I'm dying to know what happens next!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on March 03, 2009
    Wow. Archer is one sick twisted puppy. Obsessed with Havoc much are we, Archer? Guess I can't blame him though. Havoc is hot as hell. I hope Mustang can save him!

    Great chapter!
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  • From VampireHaku on March 02, 2009
    When I saw you put up chapter 7 I totally fangirled and squeeled for joy. Instead of going directly to that chapter though I reread the whole story. Wow must say though the lemon is not what I expected! More twisted. I figured it'd be more rough and painful like I think Havoc expected it, very nice twist! I hope you get the next chapter up sooner than this last one, I went nuts with waiting. God I wonder what Roy is going to do... Eee! I love this, more please!
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  • From CrimsonTears030 on September 30, 2008
    I love the story so far!
    Please please please update soon!!!!
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  • From yeagerbomb on September 04, 2008
    ack!! i'd forgotten about this story! it's so good. please update soon, i really want to see more of it! mustang has to save poor havoc, he just has to!! well, havoc should have been more... uh... i completely forgot how this story started, so i don't know why archer started it in the first place. hmm. i'll have to reread, but anyway, please post more!!~
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  • From VampireHaku on June 30, 2008
    Just read chapter 6 again, you so have to update, this fic is extremely addicting! I must know what happens @_@!!!
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  • From Jdee on June 18, 2008
    I have to say I adore this fic... I'm a Havoc Fangurl he's always been my fav FMA character and to see a story that centers round him made me go all fangurl like.... I hope to see some more I'll bookmark to check back in on it I promise...

    Keep up the good work
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