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Reviews for Blind Obsession

By : ZaKai
  • From ANON - Lovely Spell on November 05, 2008
    Nyan! I love it. Awesome and as always it is written beautifully! Thanks a lot for sharing this story.

    ja
    LS
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  • From on November 05, 2008
    Beautiful, ZaKai. I'm both glad and sad you completed the story; glad because of closure, upset because, well, let's face it, Ed and Roy are hot!

    On a more serious note, extremely well written, and I enjoyed it thoroughly
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  • From IntHellsing on November 05, 2008
    Awww. I LOVE the ending!!!
    It's so sweet, and I'm thrilled that everything worked out well for them. T_T

    You've got me feeling all sappy now.
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  • From ANON - MaryLover on October 26, 2008
    Hi, it took me forever to finally sit down and write a review here.
    The whole plot was very good, and so were the characters and the super duper hot scenes, but... let me tell you what my head was thinking while reading this last chapter.
    My first thought when Roy didn't feel anything when he saw Ed without the glasses was 'What? he's so insensitive! isn't he seeing Ed's blind and he doesn't even feel a little tiny shocked? The super hot scene your dirty mind schemed distracted me a lot, but in the end, I didn't feel okay, something was missing somewhere.
    And then I got it. People use to think everything comes from the eyes, I mean, when somebody loses their sight, the first thing you notice is the unfocused eyes and the lost intensity of them. Of course Roy knew how Ed's look was, but during the scene when he proposes Ed to continue doing what they did, I'm sure he wasn't looking at Ed's eyes but his body, because he hadn't paid any attention to the blindfold during their intimate sessions. And for Ed, he didn't have to search for his lover's eyes either because of the same reason: the blindfold. That's the only explanation possible and I think I'll keep it.

    Now that there's just the epilogue left to go. I'll dare tell you what I'd like to happen (I don't use to do that, but I can't resist)... I want Ed to recover his sight or even part of it... eventually... I want him to finally look at the other's eyes and viceversa... sight may not be a reliable sense, but they both need it to make the coupling even more perfect. There's nothing better than good sex (or love making depending on the step they were) looking at the other's eyes.
    Telling I want them to fall for the other is too cliché, you can keep it implicit but not having them saying or even thinking about it. This fic is too to-the-point to let the fluff fill the room...

    Now I'll shut up my own babbling and only wait for the epilogue to appear sooner than later... bye.
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  • From serpensortia on October 21, 2008
    bother... only the epiloge left... >.< but i want more... oh well the reader can't have everything...

    i hope you start another one soon add me to that list when you have it i love your writing... ^_^

    serpen
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  • From BishounenKrazed on October 17, 2008
    wonderful chapter. wonderful story. i'm very pleased with the outcome :D i'm also very pleased that he didn't miraculously get his eyesight back and all. it may have been nice for him to see again, but a very long recovery would be better than he suddenly having sight. anyway, i'm rambling, but it was very, very good. i love this story so much. and i look forward to the epilogue.

    great job, deary, and i look forward to your other works as well!
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  • From SarahTaylor on October 17, 2008
    I'm so glad that they worked something out. I love how you ended this and I look forward to the epilogue.

    I really love your writing style, you have a real talent.
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  • From MustangsHavoc on October 16, 2008
    God I love this story! And I love how you ended it! Not with mush or them faling in love, but with them still barley being friends and just wanting to keep fucking eachothers brains out! The whole story is just so DIRTY and I LOVE IT!
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  • From ANON - Jill on October 15, 2008
    Oh good good good i was so worried you would separate them i'm not happy about the date other people but i am thrilled they are together yay cant wait till a finds out if ed tells him!!!!!!!!
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  • From on October 15, 2008
    Beautiful, absolutely BEAUTIFUL. I loved it, Zakai! It's a very nice way to tie things up, and I cannot WAIT for the epilogue!
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  • From Kuragari75 on October 15, 2008
    I'm excited to see the epilogue! As well as bummed this story has come to a close. It's been awsome... and I may end up reading it a few times over. lol.
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  • From gatherer818 on October 15, 2008
    Aww, they're so cute together...

    Awesome story, looking forward to the epilogue, except that it means it's over, lol...
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  • From ANON - empress_eerian_sadow on October 15, 2008
    delightful, honey. you could leave off the epilogue and everything would be just fine.
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  • From ANON - Briryan on October 15, 2008
    That was a great chapter. I can't believe that Mustang let Ed do that to him. But go Ed, finally getting to top Roy. Looking forward to reading the last chapter.
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  • From antilogicgirl on October 15, 2008
    Very nicely done. Not sure how I missed this one for as long as you've had it up. You've done a very good job here, and I wouldn't be opposed to reading the epilogue, necessary or not. Thanks for the nice read,
    --A
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