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Reviews for Pull the Trigger and the Nightmare Stops…

By : Yuukichan

From Diane on April 05, 2008
Ah der. Of course he wore that. Now I feel blond. Well that was a great way to not go into detail. It really was more real that way. And I don't think you could write a boring chapter. I love your stuff.

Ah, damn Relena, the drunk whore. Would have served her right if Heero had slapped her, but I can totally understand Duo stepping in for her and I love him for it. It breaks my heart to see Heero like that, beating himself up. I love this Sally. She's... strong, still feminine, and level-headed... and apparently not a threat to Heero. ^_^ Heh, and funny that Duo's the one to sum it all up so simply. Oh man, I love the scene with "Dougie." I laughed so hard at the fuck my ass, sitting on his ass, kicking your ass thing. That was pure brilliance. The shark thing was a little odd for foreplay, but a good analogy none the less and I do love the biting. And as always your sex was very hot. I like the hurried, I need you know, flavor to it. And Heero crying again breaks my heart... again. I'm proud of him, though, that he was able to tell those for lies without Duo trying to convince him. That's a really big step for him. *cough* kill her *cough* Okay, maybe that's over reacting, but still. Stupid should hurt.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
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From fujinakaheero on March 31, 2008
you know what else I just realized.. Quatre was a fan of Duo yet he never noticed that Duo was actually his fav. pop star?
Gah!!
I guess blonds really are dumb... and I'm one to talk, i'm a natural blond trying to be a brunette.
But jeez... oh did I also mention that I liked the parts in chapter 19 when you have all the different conversations going on and they're all choppy.. just like if you were walking through a crowd and just catching bits of the conversation, I really liked that. It just made it seem more realistic and as if you were actually there listening in. _
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From Rucina on March 30, 2008
oooh yaaaaaaay your feeding my addiction again thank yooouuuu!!!!!! ^__^

i love how duo became a pop star and heero never noticed! XD

now though quatra is really gonna try to play with him along with some others probably!!

i cant wait for more your story is soooo good i love the twist and turns i hope you keep it up and cant wait for more!!! X3
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From fujinakaheero on March 30, 2008
gah! When you mentioned The Last Song in Chapter 20, it was bothering me cause it was reminding me of a song that I really liked and I finally figured it out while I had my music going today.
Not sure if it's correct or not, but it made me think of Last Song by Gackt, which is probably one of my favorite songs by him.
But yah.. it was bothering me for a while.. and now I figured it out and am curious to see if i was on the mark with that or if the song is by someone else and it's a different song.
XD I know
I feel like I'm being annoying now.
I shall leave you to it then.
Until chapter 21,
ja ne!
fujinakaheero

(btw, did I mention that Chapter 20 was damn good? I really liked the twist, i am sure I mentioned that but I am going to mention it again. Keep up the awesome work. I shall stay supporting you and your story for sure :D )
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From Diane on March 30, 2008
*runs out of the room crying with a nose bleed* *comes back like nothing happened* Well, I think that was my favorite chapter so far. I love Savage Garden to start with and I love that song. You painted Duo singing to Heero so well. I can't believe that's what Duo's been doding since he left Heero. Or that Quatre was a fanboy for him and didn't notice. And that flirting at the end, delicious. I don't have a single negative thing to say... wow... that almost never happens about anything. Ah, I think I'm going to read it again. It was that good. I love you.
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From Diane on March 30, 2008
Ah, I'm sorry I went AWOL for a while there. I got distacted by something shiny. Chapter 19 first. I'll do what I did last time and post two reviews. I don't know if I forgot or if you just didn't mention, but what did Duo end up wearing to the party? An actual dress? Maybe I just forgot you said something about it in another chapter. Also, I was a little surprised by the number of typos. I don't remember you having that many before. They weren't a big deal, but they're there. I'm really glad to see Heero being more confident with Duo's love. It was also different to see Duo panicking about his job protecting Heero. Oh, and bring on the kinky sex! I can't wait for that. i love how you chopped up the party gossip. Just enough to get the idea, but more realistic than having full sentences.
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From fujinakaheero on March 30, 2008
O__O such a twist. I was not expecting Duo to be a pop singer, and again, you have awed me with another plot twist.
Gah!! I love it so much. (and by the way, Savage Garden is awesome. I actually recently made my gf give me her savage garden cds so I could put them on my ipod to listen to.. though i still say the 1st cd is better then the 2nd one.) But I like the song, Truly, Madly, Deeply. I'm glad you used that song
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From fujinakaheero on March 27, 2008
ok, so no idea if I reviewed or not but just leaving a small one behind right now to let you know i have read the newest chapter :D it was really good too, I look forward to the next chapter too.

Sorry it's taken me so long.. I had a friend over for almost a week now because she broke up with her bf and was moving out of their apartment.. and having problems with him (we think he's bipolar.. he had really bad mood swings and really abusive) yet she went back to his place today even though all her shit is gone, which was like a total slap in the face to myself and my gf. We were just like, wow. Totally pissed off at that.

But ja, I will leave an awesome comment behind next time, I promise!
AH now I feel so bad for this crappy comment.
I'm really sorry, I do promise to leave a much better comment behind next time though, I will make it worth reading.
until next time,
Ja ne!
talk to you again!
Fujinakaheero
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From Rucina on March 19, 2008
that was really awesome and i find everyones reaction to them at the party really funny!!! XD

how could you not love heero and duo they are just to damn sexy for their own good!!

thank you for updating and feeding my addiction!!! i cant wait for more!!! X3
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From Dragon7 on March 17, 2008
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

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From Rucina on March 16, 2008
OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!

i haven't read any gundam wing stories in a long while cause when ever i look threw them i dun see any that really sound interesting and i also love the heero duo ones!! X3 well i decided to look at them again and i stumbled upon your story!!

you have me sooo addicted to your story! its kinda funny how into it i get into it i get soo excited that i have to turn away but only briefly and then i scream and get giggly like the lil fan girl i am!!!! XD

i am completely addicted and i am soo looking forward to more! i cant wait to see what happens next with these two i mean those two!!!!!!! X3
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From Diane on March 10, 2008
Oh that was a good one. I love the middle/nick names for Heero and Duo. And I love the attempted bet between Trowa and Quatre. Oh, and Duo's outfit is nosebleed worthy. Thank you and yes I'm feeling better if a bit tired because I didn't do some homework I should have started a week ago. And just because I speak a tiny bit of french, it's déjà vu. Let's see... what else... ah yes, you really had me jumpy for a minute there before Duo realized that it was Heero in the room. I actually thought it was another attempt on Duo's life. See you next chapter!
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From fujinakaheero on March 07, 2008
gah, I am so sorry for my absence these past few chapters.. I have not really been on that much lately due to the fact that i have been nothing but sick, so I have been sleeping away this past week or so.
but anyways, lovely, lovely chapters. I definitely like the newest chapter and the little bit of Quatre-Duo-ness that was in it (not my fav pairing.. but good for the story) I am anticipating when everything comes down between them. I cannot wait o see what happens. Haha, I know I feel lame.. i am thinking this is a pretty lame comment coming from me this time.
But anyways, more heero-Duo fluff :D I always love the fluff, though the hard, love making they do too is pretty hot.
I liked the newest chapter though, it was subtle in the sex scenes, only really describing the important parts of the sexy bits. But anywho, letting you know you have not lost me yet, I am still here! Thanks for the few new chapters and the regular updates, you are one of the few authors i read who actually regularly update their stories to keep their readers.
Anyways, keeping in touch.
Until your next chapter!
Fujinakaheero
p.s. hope you have not forgotten me lol
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From Diane on February 29, 2008
To start with, I want to point out that I'm sick and a bit out of it. I've been working myself up all day to be able to read this and not have to watch the pretty letters move around the screen. I didn't expect things to go easy between the boys, but I'll follow you anywhere. I love this story and what you've done with the characters. It's never boring and it's always emotionally charged. Hey, it's my own little soap opera without the stupid. I'm glad Heero wasn't hurt, but hopefully that car accident woke his brain up a bit. It's good to see them talking things out. They're never going to understand each other otherwise. Oh, and my new favorite quote, "The devil himself would probably run away from Duo screaming after a week." I just love that. I think it's time for my medicine again. Thanks for update this. It made me feel better. *huggles Yuuki-chan* *thinks* Isn't that the name of the girl from Loveless?
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From Diane on February 24, 2008
Ahh! You were all over that chapter emotionally. I feel like I'm PMSing now. I was laughing at the beginning from your responses. I missed you too and your story. I wish I could draw so I could make you some pretty art. I consider what we do here artistic. Then I'm practically drooling in my happy place from dessert. You got a hot lemon and some nice banter, a Duo in the door way that I would rape on the kitchen table regardless of having a fiance, then the drama starts. Ah! And it was good drama, heartbreaking too. I can't see them doing this job at all without Duo getting the crap beat outta him. *gets a plushie and a blanket* I wanna cuddle Duo just thinking about it... I also wanna spank some sense into Heero. I can't blame either of them though. P.S. HOW CAN YOU STOP THE DRAMA THERE? AHHH... so much screaming in one review.
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