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Reviews for The Foreign Exchange Student

By : animegamergirl
  • From ANON - Drew on February 24, 2009
    Please cont soon :)
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  • From ANON - Demonskid on October 21, 2008
    OwO GACKT FANTASY!! xD I love that song >w< I have the music Vid on my iPod XD Mmm Duo dressed as Gackt.. =D~ yummy *runs to read the next chapter*
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  • From electricfeints on February 25, 2008
    I've only read the first two chapters so far, but what I found was most of your story is telling us what happened, what the characters are thinking etc. instead of showing us, which makes even the most interesting events seem kinda dull. If you used dialogue and more descriptions, it would improve the readability of your story.

    Also, when Heero was in Japan with his mom, why were they speaking a combination of English and Japanese? Probably they speak Japanese that you, the author, translated to English for your readers. When you use both, it seems like they randomly speak English around the house, except for a few commonly known Japanese phrases. It was a bit jarring.

    So I hope this hasn't seemed cruel and I fully plan to read the rest of your story. The only reason I left a review like this is because I can tell your story could be better than it is. The frame is there, you just need to fill it out.
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  • From ANON - Tiffy on February 24, 2008
    Awesome story!!!
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  • From ANON - joyce on January 19, 2008
    i love this story!! very unique premise and well written as well!! please update.
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  • From Drew85 on January 11, 2008
    Nice Angle, wonder how they will think of eachother when they meet. and 1x2, I don't think she's going for the angle of 100 acuracy of how thing are in Japan.
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  • From ANON - prussianblue1x2 on January 10, 2008
    so far it is very good. i have a questions though. since heero isn't 18 in japan he can't drive so why would he have a car, and it is very unusual to have more than one car per family in japan since most non rich people either walk, take the bus, or take the train where ever they go.
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  • From ANON - person on January 10, 2008
    This is really interesting, I'm having so much fun reading it. Just one thing, in chapter two it said that putting Duo's hair in a high ponytail was easier than braiding it. I have hair the same length as his, putting it in a high ponytail is hell on earth. A low pontytail is ok, but there's just too much of it to put it in a high one without a lot of effort and pain. By the time your hair gets past your ass, braiding is like breathing.
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