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Reviews for Cost of a Secret

By : nomdeplume
  • From AlaiaFay on May 06, 2009
    I really liked this new chapter. The info about Roy's past with Melissa was a nice touch. The explanation about his fixation on Karma also provides a good insight into why he acts the way he does. I feel bad for Roy, but at the same time I think he needs a reality check! lol. I hope he and Ed can work things out in the end, and I also hope Roy can learn to accept that good things CAN happen to him and that the world won't burst into flames because of it :) Roy really got a wake up call there at the end though. Maybe the fact that all of his assumptions were wrong (and the knowledge that he hurt people with them) will keep him from being so quick to judge later on.

    The part where they're all sitting at the table was funny. Men are such babies sometimes! lol. The little exchange between Liam and Ed was adorable too. It would be cute to see Ed spending more time with him.
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  • From AlaiaFay on May 01, 2009
    Oooohhh very nice story. i'm looking forward to seeing where you go with the rest of it. so far i find the relationships to be very believable, which is rare among fics of the RoyXEd pairing. generally it's all smut and no plot. and somehow the two just magically fall in love in a matter of minutes, regardless of having no prior interest in one another and/or other men. i'm very interested in your approach with this fic, and i'll definitely suggest it to other RoyXEd fans like myself =)
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  • From ANON - Erika on April 29, 2009
    Awwwwww, Miko i bet you're right! Gah, now i feel bad T___T I'm sorry i ever doubted you, Edward!!! *hug*
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  • From ANON - Miko on April 28, 2009
    Ahh, but perhaps Ed is not being passively active about this at all. I was reading the reviews above and it brought some interesting questions to my mind. After re-reading that last chapter I think I picked up on a few things that I missed before (how I missed it I have no idea though, lol). At first I thought Roy's description of how pale and sick looking Ed was, was because of the horror of what he had just seen his brother experience, or something of that nature. But combine that with the fact that his voice was raspy (an indication of raw vocal cords from screaming) and his certainty that Roy would scream "despite a high tolerance of pain" (helloooo! Automail surgery! Ed went through that as a kid and it was said to make grown men cry!), I now believe that Ed did, in fact, take part of the circle from cat Ed. Guess i'll find out if my observations are correct later. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Erika on April 28, 2009
    ... I'm confuuuuuused!!!... I thought that Ed would be taking a more active role in the whole circle transferance thing, not just moving them to other people. Though I guess I'm just used to the self-sacraficing, 'take the world on his own shoulders' Ed lol... hmmm... idk, guess I'll just have to wait and see what happens next. As always, I'll be anxiously anticipating the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Adel on April 24, 2009
    Yay! My internet has been down for so long now that i missed the last few chapters. I was super happy to see more chapters to read once i got it back though!!! That last one was pretty great, but i'm a little confused as to what Ed's intentions are. I mean, when i thought he was up to something i assumed he was going to take the circle himself... Now that that theory is out the window i don't know what to think! In any case, i'm really enjoying this story! Normally the plot of the fanfics i read are predictable but this one never does go the way i expect, which makes it all the more fun to read :) Keep up the super amazingly great work!!! I look forward to seeing what happens next!
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  • From Evermist on April 22, 2009
    Ah, this is so good! You're an amazing author, why do I ever put off anything written by the ones I know I love? *huggles Liam* He's such a sweetie, and I hate kids! With a passion. But I'm loving Roy's! Karen needs to be castrated repeatedly.

    ...What do you mean, you need multiple penises for that? Grr....Methinks it's time for a transmutical sex change, in that case, THEN we can have our castrations!
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  • From ANON - Miko on April 21, 2009
    Uggghhhh.... why did it have to end there!!! Gah! Great chapter, but you are totally evil when it comes to the endings T_T Can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - Erika on April 21, 2009
    Aww, how cute. I love how this story is progressing! I feel bad for poor Ed. Roy too, of course, but for now mainly Ed because of that last chapter. It's so cute how he unconsciously moved closer to Roy and his son, wanting to feel like he was a part of the family, however small it may be. :3 Squeeee, love it!!! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! And the one after that... and the one after that... and... all of them!!!! ^____^ Thank you for writing such a magnificent story!!!! Your skills as an author surpass anything I've read on this site thus far.
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  • From ANON - Miko on April 17, 2009
    Watch the new episoes of the brand new FMA anime series, Fullmetal Alchemist: Brootherhood ---> http://www4.funimation.com/video/?page=video&v=1832 yaaaaaayyyy! the style is really different and it kinda bothered me at first, but i think i'm really going to like it much better than the first, assuming it really is going to follow the manga lol. in any case, check it out!!!!
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  • From ANON - Miko on April 15, 2009
    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.......... how cute :3 i loved this chapter. keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - radcat38 on March 30, 2009
    I like this last chapter. Liam needing both Roy and Ed and of course his cat Ed. Roy using Ed as a pillow and both of them sleeping on the floor...cannot laugh...I have fallen asleep on the floor before while studying, working, etc...The old feelings still lingering. How much a child can change your thoughts and how you feel. I knew that Karen was ready to do her brand of alchemy and that those circles were complete enough for it. I do not think I will stop worrying until those circles are off Liam and cat Ed. I know Karen is out there somewhere...she has been way too quiet and no on has seen her. Something bad is on the horizon. Too bad Roy did not see her for what she was but she probably was still sane then...people change and not always for the better. Sometimes there are parts of people we never get to see and I bet that is probably what happened here. Cannot wait to see what happens. Thanks for updating. cat
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  • From ANON - Adel on March 26, 2009
    great chapter :) ... but oh what a terrible place to end it. lol. i really want to find out what Ed is up to. i think it would be cool if he just transferred it completely to himself. that sounds like a very "Ed" thing to do. sacraficing his own well-being for the safety of someone he loves.
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  • From edoelrickun on March 15, 2009
    that's a godawful evil place to stop it...but very good, best fma work i've read in a long while.
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  • From ANON - Orion117 on March 04, 2009
    Another good chapter! This is such a good story, and I've not been very consistent about reviewing, but I am certainly enjoying it. You always do such a good job with Ed, Al and Roy, and Liam is a great addition to the mix. I like what you're doing with the alchemy, too—very interesting. Is Ed thinking that he'll transfer some of Liam's tattoo to himself, in spite of what Roy thinks? I'll just have to keep reading to find out. :)
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