Click Here!

Reviews for Wishes of the Fallen

By : SaiyanGirl
  • From Bikutoria1313 on July 06, 2008
    Wow, the emotion in this chapter is overpowering. I feel so lost with Vegeta and the little flicker of hope at the end was uplifting to say the least after such an emotionally draining chapter. I love the way that you get into Vegeta’s head and can portray him so well.

    I am really intrigued to see what Vegeta is planning for the memorial and to figure out more about the flashbacks that seems to be haunting the Prince. The story line is really gripping me, and intriguing me as well. I can’t wait to see what is going to happen and how everything is going to plan out.

    Report Review

  • From topbear1974 on July 06, 2008
    this is a great story and it got me soo hooked. I like how you describe Vegeta's sorrow of the most important person in his live. There are so many mistery as well.Please update soon.
    Report Review

  • From Zofo on July 06, 2008
    Gosh Vegeta is really tearing himself up isn't he. He really needs Kakarot. Turning Goten into a mirror image won't be enough, though it will be good for Goten.

    I'm still waiting for Goku to return as you say this is a Vegeta/Goku fic, but I'm having doubts now on how he will reappear, as surely Vegeta could have used the dragonballs by now :(
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MewMew2 on July 06, 2008
    Breath taking as always. Please update once more when possible. Thank you.
    Report Review

  • From Bikutoria1313 on June 30, 2008
    SaiyanGirl,



    I have to say that I am absolutely in love with your story. The characterization is so perfect and I can't help but find myself enthralled with the story and inhaling it like nothing else. I am intrigued by your concepts and can't wait to see what they are revealed to be. I can't wait until I see it updated and I have some more of my new favourite addiction. Wonderful job and please, please keep going.



    Biku

    Report Review

  • From ANON - pleyade on June 27, 2008
    great story , please update!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - tryniamerin on June 08, 2008
    Finally, someone told Gohan what a dissapointment he was. That not the only thing I like about these last few chapters. I really like the fact that nobody here in the story is ashamed of their Saiyan heritage and trying to hide it. I often got the sense in many fanfictions where the Saiyans were 'domesticated' and 'nicely settling down' with wives like they showed in GT. That runs counter to what Vegeta's nature was originally portrayed as in the anime/manga. It's refreshing to see Vegeta portrayed bringing Saiyan Pride alive in Goten, and having him in turn emulating Vegeta. The connection between them makes so much sense. Now that Goku's gone Vegeta's the one that he would look to for guidance. And Vegeta's saiyan pride is so refreshing to see in this story I'm sad others haven't written it in theirs. A very kickass refreshing change of pace here.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - tryniamerin on June 08, 2008
    You're off to a good start with this chapter. Not with Goku, but with Chichi. Sets up things well here.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MewMew2 on May 27, 2008
    I love the bad ass Goten. Excellent job on this chapter. Thanks you so much for updating once more, I can't wait for the next one!
    Report Review

  • From Zofo on May 24, 2008
    Oh I love how Saiyan Goten is becoming, about time that he realized how pathetic humans are compared to him.

    But where is Goku? Can he be revived? What is Vegeta doing? Please post more.
    Report Review

  • From Zofo on April 17, 2008
    What an emotional chapter.

    I loved how you told it through Vegeta's POV, his disgust at them all, the realization that Goten was more Saiyan than he thought, and his growing protectiveness of him. Just wonderful.

    I'm hoping Vegeta takes him under his wing now but also hoping that Goku can come back and be with Vegeta somehow.
    Report Review

  • From LittleMustardSeed on April 11, 2008
    OMG!!! please please please update again soon! this is amasing! will Goku come back? arrgh! must.read.more.! wonderful story
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Mewmew2 on April 10, 2008
    I loved your latest update! Oh how I enjoyed a classic, primal vegeta just letting it all hang out. Excellent job, please update ASAC!
    Report Review

  • From Zofo on April 09, 2008
    How intense was that! Wonderfully written.

    Typical that Goku's friends turned on Vegeta and wouldn't believe him. I thought Vegeta was almost back to his planet purging self for a moment there, and I don't blame him with how they were behaving. Krillen wouldn't give him a chance and got what he deserved.

    So proud of Goten, behaving more Saiyan than Human and standing up for Vegeta. There's hope for him. Bet no-one apologises to Vegeta though.

    Where's Goku? He can't be really gone can he? Noooo! Quick someone get the dragonball radar.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Mewmew2 on April 03, 2008
    That was brilliant! All I can say right now is wow..........
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!