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Reviews for Wishes of the Fallen

By : SaiyanGirl
  • From Zofo on April 02, 2008
    Sorry you had such a mis-guided negative review, I hope they apologise, but I'm glad you didn't let it get to you and are still writing.

    I loved the extended shower scene. Vegeta's got it pretty bad hasn't he, everything reminds him of Kakarot. Slightly confused as to what the 'threads' are though. Oh but what was that vision about?

    Your description of Vegeta forcing his way to Kakarot was breath-taking, I was with him every step. You made me feel like I was in a hurricane trying to get to my loved ones. Outstanding!

    As for the end of the chapter, what the hell has happened. Why is Chichi there but no Goku? I blame you for me having no nails at this point!
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  • From CrimsonTide on April 02, 2008
    I was more than a little shocked by the negative review you recieved as well relating to the supposedly 'incestual' content in the last chapter. It's unfortunate that the reader was so presumptious and even stopped reading before they could fully understand what was going on. The worst part, however, was that they reviewed AGAIN when they realized there was no such content and didn't even bother to apologize.

    I know it's hard to read reviews such as that one. Whether this fic contained incest or not, someone's personal feelings on right and wrong should never be brought into play. If a fic contains material that you don't agree with, you simply stop reading and move on.

    As you luckily already know, it is not your job to cater to other people's tastes; only your own. You're being gratious enough to share you talent with others, and you should never be critizied for doing such.

    Anyway, this latest chapter was certainly intense! I could actually see the chaotic scene in my mind, and the emotions that rolled off of Goku were just so crazy!

    I have a lot more praise, but I'm late for work now ^.^ I eagerly await your next chapter, and don't ever let someone make you doubt your work.
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  • From KahlanN on March 27, 2008
    *snuggles SaiyanGirl and purrs* I kinda wished I had kept reading. :P

    Of course I'm biased, so Goten thinking about Vegeta that way is hawt. :P I'm such a Vegeta fangirl.

    Loved what you did at the end. A very bold move and one...well every G/V fan appreciates.

    I really want to know what's happening with Gohan now.

    And I love how it was rude for teenage girls to stare at a half naked man...when he was half naked in front of them. XD Poor Goku and his tail, such confused sexual thoughts.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on March 26, 2008
    Dun Dun Duuuuuuuuuuuuunnnnnnn! Nice job n the characterization of an older Goten. I really like how you made him a 3 dimensional person and not a simple happy go lucky peppy guy without any depth. And as for Chichi, you have me on the edge of my seat with trying to figure out just exactly what's wrong with her. Thank you for updating once more, I eagerly await the next chapter.
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  • From Zofo on March 26, 2008
    Loved Vegeta's shower scene, hot! Much more of that and he won't be able to keep his hands off Kakarot.

    The teenage girls embarrassing Goten and feeling Goku's 'belt' was funny. Looks like Goten rescued his dad just in time hehe.

    So what killed Chichi, will there be an autopsy? What will Goku do now? Will it affect how Vegeta acts towards him?
    Questions, questions.
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  • From ANON - Chichicken on March 26, 2008
    ...It is getting better and better O__O ...
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  • From ANON - SSJGotenks_81 on March 26, 2008
    That chapter was awesome! Is Chichi ok??? God, poor Goku :( Your writing's amazing! Please!! Update soon!

    (btw, to the last reviewer who thinks there's incest in there - did you even read it? There's no incest in there AT ALL! if you had actually READ IT, you would see that Goten has the hots for those muscles, not his dad! You missed the part where he realized that he was thinking those things about his dad, and STOPPED. Way to totally trash for nothing!)
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  • From CrimsonTide on March 25, 2008
    Awww! Did ChiChi have a brain tumor maybe? That would explain the odd behavior and her failing body.

    All and all, another excellent chapter! You manage to draw me into each chapter so deeply, and everything flows wonderfully. I actually winced in sympathy when Goku was pulling the shards out of his shoulder. How come those ditzy girls didn't notice his wound? o.O. Crazy chicks.

    You really should be getting more reviews than this story currently has. I hate it when you take all this time to write an excellent fic for everyone to read and they don't even take two minutes to give you a review. Very lazy and annoying -.-. Just know your work is appreciated and you have an extraodinary talent for writing.
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  • From Zofo on March 22, 2008
    Something has really stirred Vegeta hasn't it. His unrealised feelings for Goku are surfacing. Is Goku is doing/feeling the same?

    I'm still puzzled and very interested as to what has caused this.

    Great story, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Miala on March 21, 2008
    Excellent story! I love the shower scene with Vegeta. Excellent imagery, with plenty of realism to not make it seem so 'milk and honey.' It's the details that after all can really add to the story. The bit about the foreskin really added to the realism, considering that Sayians are more 'animal like' controlled by instincts, and thus probably would be natural adn thus still have their foreskin still attached. Good incite. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on March 19, 2008
    Thanks for giving the readers a glimpse of Vegeta's home life. I liked the segment about trunks becoming more 'human.' Very amusing. Please update when you can!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on March 12, 2008
    This fic has definitely caught my complete attention. I like how you went deeper into the personality traits of the characters and expanded upon them so they were much more complex than those portrayed in the series. Excellent job! Please update as soon as you can.
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  • From Zofo on March 12, 2008
    So much drama in this chapter.

    First it started off easy and I was enjoying Goku's thoughts on his connection to wildlife, Earth, friends, and family giving him strength. His description of Saiyans fighting styles, not wanting to be like them, and his admiration and eventually gratitude to Vegeta for showing him his heritage.

    Then the whirlwind started and I found myself feeling sorry for Chichi, which is definitely a first for me. What on earth could be wrong with her, sounds a bit like possession or schizophrenia, but at the end Goku seemed possessed too or was it his Kakarot side taking over?

    Oh I'm so intrigued by this and can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Alane on March 12, 2008
    Whoa! It's almost like ChiChi has a tumor or something!
    Great job with Chapter 5! Very smooth transition from a relatively calm and happy start to chaos. It almost leaves your spinning.

    Really awesome story so far. Keep up the good work!


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  • From ANON - darkserapha on March 12, 2008
    Whoa. Very, very intense. I didn't see this coming at all. Interesting start for a story, I'm curious as to how it will progress!
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