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Reviews for Wishes of the Fallen

By : SaiyanGirl
  • From ANON - Chichicken on March 12, 2008
    Wouh O_O I seriously love this fic of yours, you write so detailed way... And of course subject kicks ass! I'm so glad you just wrote new chapter, I am waiting forward the next one :3 Keep it on!
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  • From ANON - CrimsonTide on March 12, 2008
    Bah! I'd forgotten that I'd read this chapter too! But, I certainly didn't mind reading it again ^.^ ChiChi's behavior certainly leaves you wondering what is going on with her, and the emotions that passed through both her and Goku during their arguement were so realistic and believable. Wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - darkserapha on March 05, 2008
    Wow. Extremely intriguing. I have absolutely no idea where you're going to take this, but I do like your writing style. A bit too much on the adjectives at times, but otherwise.. very impressive. Very much looking forward to reading more of this!

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  • From Zofo on March 05, 2008
    That was very well written and intriguing. Your detailed descriptions paint a perfect picture in my minds eye.

    I wonder what is wrong with Chichi, sounds like an illness but she is having nightmares too. Do they tie in to what is happening to her husband?

    The interaction between Goku and Vegeta was totally in character, and I'm itching to find out what the visions Vegeta saw meant, why Goku can't remember what he did, and why the pose and techniques are affecting the both of them so much.

    Please update soon.
    xxx
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  • From CrimsonTide on March 05, 2008
    Wee! I read this story at 'The Saiyajin HideAway', and even e-mailed my compliments to you, so I'm thrilled to see that you decided to post it here as well ^.^ I'd already read up until this point, so I'm really excited about the next chapter!

    Keep up the fantastic work! Your writing skills are excellent and the flow is perfect!
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  • From ANON - Kahlan Nightwing on March 05, 2008
    Damn this is good. The level of detail and description, not to mention your grasp of the characters speaks of someone who is writing an original piece...a published original piece, and not fanfiction.

    I would seriously recommend you consider publishing an original work. You're good enough that I'd pay to read your stuff.
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