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Reviews for Wishes of the Fallen

By : SaiyanGirl
  • From topbear1974 on June 05, 2009
    Very interesting turn of story, I started to worry about trunks. Chichi died naturally and vegeta really missed kakarotto.will you bring him back? the universe most glory warriors.
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  • From MasterofPie on May 09, 2009
    haha Goten has a crush on Vegeta ... I hope he makes some kind of move ... and I do hope Vegeat doesn't kill him for it ...
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  • From MasterofPie on May 09, 2009
    haha I love your take on Vegeta's and Bulma's relationship ^__^
    And wow Chichi can't control herself ... haha what a bitch
    loving your fic ^__^
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  • From ANON - fayjay19 on April 18, 2009
    thank you i am so happy bulma found out goku didn't kill his chichi, so does this mean goku isn't dead, did he go somewhere else using his IT. and it was energy that was release that destroy the area and what about that morning what was goin on with goku and y is vegeta freak out about the new moves. i have so many questions,please email me back.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on April 18, 2009
    You've done an excellent job on your research of the human brain and the diagnosis of Chichi's cause of death. Thank you so much for finding the time to update this story.
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  • From Bluesake on April 17, 2009
    awesome! Was waiting for the update!~ :D Keep em coming. I see some hints of vegeta/goten XD hope goku comes back somehow. Good chapter
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  • From Bluesake on March 21, 2009
    That was ill...vegeta's speech had me in complete shock. I was caught between jumping up and screaming "tell them geta!" to those are some seriously powerful words. I was taken back. I can't wait for the next chapter I hope goku really isn't dead. xD
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  • From ANON - Kurok on March 01, 2009
    Great Writing, finally something different! Beautiful and angsty to the core. I hope you keep writing!
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  • From xxxVegetariaNxxx on January 17, 2009
    GOD THIS IS AMAZINGLY BREATH-TAKING!!!! PLEASE UPDATE....

    VEGETA IS GRIEVING SO MISERABLY THE LOSS OF HIS RIVAL, AND WELL... GOTEN'S THE ONLY THING LEFT OF HIM... SINCE GOHAN IS SUCH A JERK!!! WELL I LOVE THIS BECAUSE I JUST CAN'T IMAGINE WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN!! I JUST HOPE VEGETA AND GOKU GET TOGETHER SOO... SOMEHOW... (0.o)

    i don't see how that happens but i am willing to wait for you to update and share with us mortal people your writing gifted skills!!!

    THIS FIC ROCKS!!!! I
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  • From glasseyeviolet on January 11, 2009
    Wow, I have never seen it from Chichi's point of view like that. The start is
    very enticing, I want to know more! I love it!
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  • From Zofo on December 08, 2008
    Extremely moving service. Brought tears to my eyes.

    I think I now hate those humans as much as Goten and Vegeta, and as for Gohan, contempt is too light a word.

    Missing Goku already, hope he can come back somehow.
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  • From topbear1974 on December 07, 2008
    This a very very sad chapter. I felt for Bulma for her rememberance of the little wild and full of laughter kid. I love how Vegeta pay tribute to his only rival-- a man who is truly worth all his attention. It was very touching.

    There are so many mistery left in this story. please write more, I am so confused just now. Look forward to read more.
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  • From ANON - Gina on December 07, 2008
    I don't even know were to begin.
    This story is the best story i have ever read in my life. You are an amazing writer, with an amazing talent to captivate the reader.
    My hand are trebeling and my heart is pounding. The emotions in this story is simply wonderful The pride of the Saiyan. How wonderful it seem.
    And I love your way of describing the characters and there inner battles.
    This is really a fiction masterpiece!

    Keep up your fantastic work!
    I can't wait so see what will happen, now when Goten going to be raised by Vegeta.

    And again: A fanatic story!

    // Gina
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on December 02, 2008
    You have done an absolutely amazing job. The imagery for the memorial for Chi-Chi and Kakarot, was breath taking. I could see every detail of it in my mind. Please update once more when it's convenient for you.
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  • From Asper on July 18, 2008
    Very interesting story, I've really enjoyed reading what you've uploaded so far.

    Your story is vibrant, descriptive, and lucid. Your characterization is second to none, and while your story is venturing far from what I'd consider canon or 'in-character', I do think that in some ways, what you've depicted is more realistic and enthralling that what actually happened. I also am enjoying the slower pace of this story - sometimes I find things move so fast that it's exhausting (in a bad way) but this isn't like that. I also very much enjoy the raunchy descriptions you use - even if the description of Saiyan musculature/scent revolts your characters, the readers still think it's hot, which is a really nice balance.

    In terms of constructive criticism, I can't offer you any *objective* advice, though I can say what I find *personally* detriments the story. I think that your psychoanalytical introspection, while important for characterization, can become slightly overwhealming, in that you continue your description of their thoughts long after you've made your point or the point is redundant/repetitive (eg. puny humans!). Don't get me wrong, I LOVE the introspection, but I think sometimes you just go a *bit* overboard.

    I'm still wondering where you'll take this. The glorious battle stance, the armor, the explosion (which, by the way, is one way I think Goku was really out of character in the series, but perfectly in character for your fic; he seems not to care about Chichi in the series, taking off for years at a time, your description considers the repressed *Saiyan*), Gohan's past, Goten's future... an excellent tale in the making. Keep it up!
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