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Reviews for He goes running

By : Aestas

From ANON - Chibi on August 27, 2011
I LOVED that last chapter, had me giggling out loud! XD I look forward to reading more.
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From ANON - crayonbox on August 18, 2011
I read through this story in one go. As much as I wanted to review in between the chapters, I just couldn't stop reading.
And now here I am, after addicting 17 chapters and wanting to write a review of epic proportions, just to find myself utterly failing at finding the right words.
Your great writingstyle, witty humor and plot makes it enjoyable to read this funny, yet slightly love-angst-y story.
I just adore your Duo. I adore your Heero. I adore your Trowa and just want to cuddle your sweet, slightly sarcasm influenced, Quatre. I even adore your Noin/Hilde coupling. Never thought about those two as a couple. I despise your Milliardo Peacecraft and I hope he seriously gets it's shoved where the sun dun shine. *cough* yeah...
I hope your plotbunny will never die when it comes to this story. You got yourself another fangirl.
(In case of the next chapter... I fear for Duo's balls when Hilde gets them in her clutches..hehhehheh.)
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From ANON - Djargo on August 09, 2011
This was a fun chapter. I missed mischevious Duo. No one has funnier inner dialouge than him^^. I see Trowa and Quatre overestimated their ability to resist and underestimated Duo's ability to create situations to get his way. All he had to do was rub those two wires together and watch the sparks fly.
I totally see Trowa still trying to play it cool but once cutie pie Quatre is in the club,with men asking him to dance he won't be able to control his jealousy.

You rock so hard right now. That you were able to to write Duo simultaneously in different stories with two entirely different voices is awesome. Glad to see your inner mischief maker come out to play. Looking forward to your next romp.
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From on August 08, 2011
Okay...Sorry it has taken so long. I actually never had an account here, I start writing stories but never really finish. Not the point right now...

I felt the urge to finally review though. I have read almost all your fanfics and have loved them all. I have been eagerly awaiting updates for both this story and Trinity and I feel so lucky this week since they both got updated. You have made my favorite officially Trowa, though I like them all so he isn't too far ahead. I'm also amazed at how different this story is compared to your others. First-Person Duo is a lot of fun to read! I hope that you keep writing, and that you still feel the need to update here-on-out.

Onto what I think so far. A little jealously from Trowa or Quatre would be awesome, as I like seeing relationships have struggles and I really love when people fight that they like someone. I personally see someone hitting on Quatre and trying to teach him to dance more-so than Trowa looking for someone. I see a scene in my head where Trowa grabs Duo, urging him to teach him to dance or something like that. XD That's just me though and even if nothing like that happens I will still love to read what does. ^^ Hopefully I will get a story up here sometime. I've been thinking of a Gundam Wing version of Rapunzel/Tangled. It's been playing a lot in the house lately and been invading my head. ^^; Thanks for your great stories so far, can't wait to read more. Hope to get a review of Trinity up soon.
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From ANON - originalceenote on August 08, 2011
LOVE THIS! Love evil Duo! Wahahahaha!

Trowa and Quat ending up flush against each other in sexy awkwardness was made of win. Duo worried about his balls falling off was HYSTERICAL. I love his mental dialogue. I've missed this fic.

What's more, you are the awesomeness for being able to switch between two stories that run the extreme in opposite directions. Trinity is so brooding and suspenseful, even when it's being sexy, and then this is such a funny, heartwarming little romp. Duo's a brat, but he's very loving and warm here. Trowa's growing on me.

Is it awful of me that I want Zechs to make another appearance and stir things up?

Wait. Nah. I want more nookie from Duo and Heero first.
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From zekesbabe on June 06, 2011
Hi again! Within the space of 10 minutes :D I did read this earlier but I wanted to read both and then review :)

I like how Trowa's got a stick up his ass. A lot of people struggle when writing stories simultaneously. They tend to drag the character's personality over both stories making it seem...crass and unbelievable. Spesh when they start well and then trail off...I'm very happy to say you don't do this! Another reason you're my bestie author! I like how independant and tough Duo is, yet how soft and creamy he is in the middle...no I'm talking about him being a chocolate! Mind out the gutter! At the same time having Quatre so calculating and careful is adorable when he is trying to one up Trowa...but the silencer has a point about them working together...ouch! And Heero...well what can I say? Out of all 5 of them I'd say Heero's my least fave (but still a fave) but I absolutely adore how insecure he is while maintaining a strong vantage point.

I love your stories and am hungry for more!
Zx

P.s maybe I took 4 wappy pills :D
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From ANON - typhoonjane on June 04, 2011
I'm liking your stories, please continue. I wish i had more of my head to together to leave something more constructive.
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From ANON - Djargo on June 02, 2011
Oh,I really enjoyed this chapter. I liked how pissy Trowa was about being set up,only to be shut down by Quatre's cool,slighty disdainful attitude then sucked in by his sincerity. Cudos to Duo for swithching tactics after Trowa almost walked out. In situations like that,it is always best to never let a person know they're being led but to believe they are leading. Between the two they handled Trowa quite well^^.

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From CeeCee on May 31, 2011
Eep! Heh.

Cute. I love the ice between Quat and Trowa, it was nice to see two relatively mature, slightly jaded adult males both irritated to some degree about the set-up and having a hard time not taking it out on each other. But even with the friction, you could still see some chemistry between them, just a spark. I like that this wasn't a mushfest of "BOING!! OMG, I'm in love with you at first sight!" that some authors could have made it.

I'm glad you updated. Keep it going.
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From CeeCee on May 05, 2011
This was so cute. I love Heero and Duo having sleepy conversations on the phone, that reminds me of when I was still young, dating, and would get calls from guys I liked from weird locations or when they had been drinking and just wanted to say "what's up?!?!" Big risk, asking Heero if he was fine with a double date. Some guys would consider that a turn-off, but obviously he likes Duo. Lots.

Good stuff. Thanks so much for the update.
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From ANON - Djargo on May 04, 2011
Isn't Duo a sneaky devil? Even in the midst of a shaky moment,he finds the opportunity to play matchmaker^^.
I so get his wishy-washiness. Duo and Heero kinda put the cart before the horse and both ended up getting hurt. Duo strikes me as a person who completely trusted his instincts. Then when everything blew up with Heero,his confidence took a major hit. So now it's not just the question of can he trust Heero again but also can he trust his own instincts again.
I will admit to being one of those readers who enjoy filler as long as it gets me more into the story and characters. I'm just weird and nosy like that^^.
Looking forward to the next update.
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From ANON - cewo on May 03, 2011
Awww, it's baby steps, but they'll get there! Thanks for this; your writing two of my fav stories. Look forward to more soon!
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From ANON - Djargo on March 09, 2011
Dinner over the phone? Heero is nothing if not inventive in his methods to ease Duo into trusting him again. The whole scenario was really kind of sweet even though he is a ways from Duo being totally comfortable with him and sweetness will only get him so far. Though Heero is trying very hard,eventually the focus has to be on how how much he hurt Duo. It seems even Duo didn't realize how much it effected him until he almost had a panic attack at the thought of Heero being at his door.

The Trowa/Quatre first meeting was cute. That first blush of attaction is very potent stuff. With Duo doing his best to help it along it can't help but be interesting.
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From snowdragonct on March 07, 2011
Ah, still loving this. Glad you posted some more, and that Heero's being such a sweetie. He needs to make up for his prior bad act, big-time. But he seems to be doing well at it. And the Quatre/Trowa setup is very cute.
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From CeeCee on March 07, 2011
A dinner date via phone and delivery boy. Never seen that before. LOVE it.

Duo's POV continues to be so cute and so real. I love his reactions to Quat and Tro meeting for the first time, particularly the visuals like Trowa's hand gripping Quat's, the contrast in their skin, Quat's pink ears, etc. It was fun and charming.

I hope Heero gets through to Duo, but I hope he doesn't just pile on the sweetness without actually following through and being genuine and fixing the damage he caused. Looks like he's getting close.

Thing is, in the back of my mind, when and if Duo lets him back in, I'm picturing our long-haired friend laying a kiss on him that makes his brain short-circuit. But I'm jumping leagues ahead. :)
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