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By : Aestas
  • From CeeCee on October 03, 2010
    *applause* Bravo! Bravo!

    Quat's lunch date with Duo was cool; I love Duo's internal monologue again, it made me nod along in agreement with a lot of what he said. And Duo dealing with Heero's make-love-and-run was masterful; how many of us have dealt with that before??? It TOTALLY feels like that to know you've been used. I hope Heero steps up and makes this right, and if he doesn't, I hope Duo lets him have it.
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  • From ANON - Djargo on September 19, 2010
    I read this in one sitting;I couldn't stop reading. The story is so totally engaging that I couldn't wait to see what happened next. I can't believe I didn't read this before! A complete and utter oversight on my part that I beg your forgivness for^_^.

    Duo's internal dialouge is funny and realistic. You can just see yourself have some of those same in-your-head reactions. I absolutely loved how he called Heero on that bull he tried to pull at the club. Really! Trying to use him to learn how attract another man is so not cool. I appreciate that it wasn't glossed over and Duo didn't fall all over himself in a rush to forgive Heero. That being said ,their bedroom scene was the hotness. An assertive Heero and not-so-sure why he's being submissive Duo made for good lemon.

    Hilde's and Noin's get together hit all the right notes. All the uncertainness,awkardness,and shyness that accompanies a first time was there plus their reactions to each other. It made for a rather sweet scene :) .

    Even though you find it slighty frustrating that you can't write a story without adding character quirks and a deeper story line know that it is appreciated by your readers. The fact that you add depth to your story and characters and try to deliver not just on a physical level but also an emotional one is what keeps us coming back. Keep up the great writing. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From CeeCee on September 19, 2010
    Thank you!!!!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you for chapter eight! Let me peel you a grape, fan you with palm leaves and prostrate myself at your feet!

    I love Duo's uncertainty. I love his straight talk and his demands to know what Heero wants. I hate that Duo was right but it worked. Everything about this works so well. You can see that Heero chafed at having to explain himself and to be caught with his Zechs obsession hanging out.

    Duo as bottom with an aggressive Heero...*shiver* I'm still grinning in a daze over here. Wow.
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  • From Nadine21 on March 04, 2010
    I really wanted to go to a club and dancing and I really really wanted that I could see Heero and Duo dancing while reading this chapter.
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  • From Nadine21 on March 04, 2010
    Love all of your storys this is great I really hope you are going to update soon. I loved how in chapter 6 Heero takes the initiative and trys to explain to Duoeverything. I admit I was a litle disapointet that cahpter 7 was not the promised talk between Heero and Duo but I can't say that I hated it. I don't have anything against the chapter I just wanted to read what happens next between the two guys. Do you have a yahoo group or something that I can join cause like I said love all of your stories. Have fun writing and update soon please both of your storys!!!
    ;))

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  • From CeeCee on February 13, 2010
    Very beautifully written femslash, for two reasons. One, it was tentative and real, acknowledging the awkwardness and uncertainty of two people who are both new at it. Two, it was insightful, keeping in mind these women started out as close friends. I like how convincing both of them were and their physical, almost spiritual reactions to each other. I like that this was elegant and easy to read. So much femslash can be a hot mess, i.e. sweaty, heavy breathing, unrealistic fanwankery that consists of "we're both hot women! Let's get naked! And let someone film it!" I'll guiltily admit to having written a few of those, until reason kicked in.

    I can't wait til the next installment. Good work.
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  • From YojiKato on February 12, 2010
    ACK!!! I TOTALLY FLAKED ON YOU!!!! T_T I'm sorry, with all the packing, unpacking, estate sale, repacking, and packing of my own personal stuff, I completely forgot to get back to you. T_T I'm so, so sorry. But, even without my further imput, that was really great. ^_^ I very much enjoyed the scene between Lu and Hilde. I promise, if you need help in the future, I will totally make it my number one priority. It's just that I've got a gazillion things going on right now. I really am sorry. But, like I said, you did great without me. ^_^ Wonderful chapter and can't wait to read more.
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  • From YojiKato on January 23, 2010
    Just saw your review reply x.x Anyhoo, if you need some help with the yuri stuff, just email me. I wouldn't mind helping you out and I've got plenty of experience with lessie action. ^_^ If you want some help, my email is lady_malynn@yahoo.com
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  • From shevaleon on December 09, 2009
    I really love the story! And truthfully I hope you won't just wrap it up in a few sentences! I for one would really like see how Hee-chan deals with his own issues with Zechsy, 'cause the conversation they had in the bathroom just won't cut it. Also my lil' greedy self just yearns for 1x2 lemon as I'm a true fan of all manly Hee-chan and sensual (not girly, mind you) Duo-bear. ^_~
    Hope to read more soon!
    Huggles
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  • From CeeCee on December 07, 2009
    Lemons! Lemons! Lemons all around! Either couple, both couples, doesn't matter!!!

    Great dance scene, by the way. I love Duo's internal monologue.
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  • From YojiKato on December 07, 2009
    Suggestions? I have one. A HOT STEAMY LEMON WITH 2X1... Well, that's my preference, either way, I'd love to see more of this fic. I totally love it and can't wait to read more, no matter what you decide on. ^_^ Keep up the great work!! Oh, and I'm totally not opposed to some yuri action. ;p
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  • From CeeCee on October 08, 2009
    I giggled pretty hard over the "girl scream thing." That was hysterical and so, so true.

    I love club scenes because it reminds me of being college-attending, single and kid-free. Duo's POV is amusing and at times overly dramatic, but his mental narrative is so fun to read. I love the way he pulls the listener into his dilemma, and how you can see how long-suffering he is at the hands of his two best friends, even though he adores them like sisters.

    I can't wait til you give us more of this one. I'm still slavering over Prerequisite, but I like that this story is a complete one eighty from it, too. Nice to have a taste of both flavors.
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  • From ANON - shadowragon58 on October 05, 2009
    Wow! That is all the initially comes to mind. At first it was amusing, then just hot, now I am getting really drawn in on my happy fluffy side. More soup please!
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  • From YojiKato on October 04, 2009
    ugh, I left a review but it didn't post. I hate when that happens. Basically what I said was: LOVE, LOVE!! I hope things work out between Heero and Duo. I don't like poor Duo sad. Looks like it's gettin' to the good part and I can't wait to see what happens. Keep up the good work. ^_^
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  • From YojiKato on September 26, 2009
    Yay, me likes. *sighs happily* That was tons of fun and I'm glad there's gonna be another chapter of the club scene. Keep up the good work. ^_^
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