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By : Robyn
  • From maegerakawaii on March 15, 2010
    AAAAWWWW...I have a really cute image of Raditz totally glomping Goku. I love the last chapter. I wonder how Goku will react to the news. Will the Saiyans get angry over how the earthlings have changed Kakkarot? This is getting so exciting. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - anz on March 15, 2010
    love the family reunion!
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  • From ANON - achillona on March 02, 2010
    excellent as always!
    ~anz
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  • From maegerakawaii on March 01, 2010
    Yay! They might finally spar in the next chapter. Then maybe Vegeta will finally realize that Goku is Kakkarot. Woot! Please update soon! I'm so excited to read more.
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  • From ANON - ilex9 on February 17, 2010
    Great, fun read. I always enjoy a creative and well written AU. Can't help but wonder if Pilaf will show his face again for more comic relief or if Piccolo will cause some trouble, but that would just be icing on an already great cake.
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  • From ANON - achillona on February 16, 2010
    this is great! update soon!
    ~anz
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  • From ANON - achillona on February 08, 2010
    its about time! glad to see you finally published! a belated happy new year to you! love this story. looking forward to the next installment! Excellent, btw!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2010
    This is seriously an awesome story!

    I'm extremely pleased to have found it.

    Can't wait for more.
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  • From AeonAmber on January 26, 2010
    I'm really enjoying this so far. The alternative world has been set up really well and all the character and world dynamics are easy to follow. Love the Goku/Vegeta and Chichi/Raditz as well as the rest of the casts' characterisation. Admittedly it took me a little while to get that Eddie and Jane = 17 and 18 but I like their inclusion in the story too and your interesting take on their characters.
    Oh and the prologue, Frieza being turned into a set of Dragonballs? Genius. xD
    Looking forward to the rest!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2010
    I've never played Chess and it has always confused the hell out of me...but your fanfic makes it seem really interesting. I have always pictured Vegeta being an excellent Chess, checkers, poker player (basically any game that needs great concentration) and you have captured it perfectly.

    Now, I'm guessing that I've just been reading everything too fast...but is Goku a saiyajin in this story? In the second chapter Bulma mentions Goku being Capsule Corp's adopted son so I'm still sketchy as to whether they are real bro and sis. Or perhaps the vagueness is an intentional writing style in this story, which I can totally understand, too.

    Anywho, love the instant attraction between Goku and Vegeta. I enjoy the fact that you wrote that Bulma knew Goku was gay, but it has never been directly said if Vegeta is, as if it's a saiyajin cultural thing to not make a deal out of sexual preference. I love the AU characters like Pilaf and Eddie and Jane (17 and 18, I presume :), and I usually don't like AUs! Excited to see how the matches go. Especially if/when Goku and Vegeta play each other. :)
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  • From Ulrike on January 04, 2010
    I have to say, that is the most creative, genius way to get rid of Frieza I have ever read. It's so logical! BRILLIANT and hilarious at the same time. I'm usually not a huge fan of alternate universe DBZ fics, but this one is looking great! The two colliding stories (Goku's and Vegeta's) are working well together. I could totally see this happening in a movie :D Excited to see what happens next. Great stuff!
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