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Reviews for Heart Problem

By : havenoclue
  • From ANON - zer0 on July 24, 2010
    awwwwwwwwww thi is so fffin cute!!! i love it n_n lmfao, cant wait to read more of it, do you have a mailing alert list? if you do could you add me? my mail is zer0one_oz@yahoo.com thnks!
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  • From ANON - Noxinin on July 16, 2010
    It was very sweet :) I think you should definitely continue this fic.
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  • From ANON - deepgreen18 on July 08, 2010
    That was very amusing. I was wary of the dialogue format at first, but you did it well. Only a few small grammatical errors (allergic instead of allergy in one line). Please do continue this, I would love to see Wu Fei's reaction.
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  • From CeeCee on July 07, 2010
    It's actually cute. I like the fact that the whole story is told through dialogue, and the responses give you some clue as to the tones of their voices and facial expressions, you can imagine them as you read this.

    It does definitely need beta'ing. Just a bit. Let me know if you need help.
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  • From FujoshiRayen on July 06, 2010
    Oh! Oh! *falls over to floor laughing, then gets up and pats Heero on head* Poor Heero. You MUST update this! I need more! I have to see where this goes!
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