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Reviews for Sacrifice

By : xerosky
  • From ANON - erika on September 04, 2016

    Hello, this is one of the best stories i've ever read and i really wish you could finish it. I hope you haven' t lost your inspiration and continue this amazing work. Please don' t forget it, it' s an original idea and so far is very very good. Thank you.


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  • From IuvenesL on January 04, 2016
    I believe you started posting this one around the time I disappeared from the fandom a few years back. It's beautiful as always; I hope you finish it one day, because you're still the best writer in this fandom. Don't ever forget it! (I certainly won't.)
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  • From TristaML on September 14, 2015
    I really wish there was an update on this... it's brilliant
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  • From ANON - anon on September 20, 2013
    Aw, please come back :(
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  • From ANON - Guest on May 19, 2013
    It's almost a year, would there be more? I hope you didn't abandon this. Please come back soon
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  • From ANON - TristaML on June 21, 2012
    I want to say that you've posted this story once before...? I recall your name from a few years back, still I am so happy to read it and I can't remember exactly what happens anyways or if I ever finished it.

    I like the dynamics between the characters and how you've added Raditz and Turles into the mix. It makes sense that Goku's appearance into this world wouldn't go completely unnoticed and I want to see what you do with it.
    I did have a question though, if Goku cannot travel to the same place twice in time, how come he can go back to this particular Vegetasei when Vegeta turns 19? Not that I'm complaining, maybe I misunderstood exactly what happened- and in any case it doesn't matter.
    Anyways, I think it's interesting that you have all of these people of Prince Vegeta's side, sort of helping him through his rather odd situation regarding this "legendary"

    Great stuff!!
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  • From ANON - Zofo on June 14, 2012
    Thought they were going to do it in the shower, but I guess it's not time yet, intrigueing though that Kakarot no longer sleeps on the couch :)

    Kakarot is really trying to learn enough to cope with the royal lifestyle, not sure Vegeta understands how difficult it is for him. Hope Vegeta opens his heart soon :)
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  • From Broten on May 29, 2012
    Oh hi you're my favorite ever, mkay? No seriously, I think this is the most brilliant fanfic I've ever read. Please, do continue.
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  • From ANON - DeDay on May 27, 2012
    Yes you updated. I like your Vegeta and Im glad that he isnt crazy enough to take the painful root of becoming a supersaiyan. I also like the fact that thia Vegeta is doing baby steps in this courtship with Kakarot and see that he is starting to accept him.
    I love this fic and hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - darkshadowarchfiend on March 18, 2012
    PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!! I love this story!!!!!!!!
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  • From Zofo on March 12, 2012
    Glad to see Vegeta is going along with things, doesn't have a choice really, but it's not making him lose any of his character.

    Those religious zealots look like they are going to cause trouble, seems they want Kakarot to themselves :(

    I'm really loving how you are still showing how different this is for Goku and how he is putting up with things in order to show Vegeta that his intentions are honerable :)
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  • From ANON - fae on February 26, 2012
    Guh! I love this fic so much! I'm so glad you updated! I was thinking it would be a while considering how much time there was between chapters 5 & 6, imagine my surprise to be browsing and find that there was a chapter 7.
    Anyway, awesome work, please continue, can't wait for the next update. =)
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  • From ANON - Tristaml on February 20, 2012
    I also wanted to say that There's an intesity in your writing that I enjoy, and that comes off very subtly(it took me a moment to find the right word for it) but prominently.

    I loved the bits about Vegeta dieing 1000 times in Kakarot's arms, it was beautiful and I feel like your delivery was on point.
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  • From TristaML on February 17, 2012
    I have only read the first two chapters and I had to review before I went on... I am very impressed and altogether loving this story. You've set up a good tone and have done a phenopminal job with your background for the story from the tattoos to the vicious flowers I am enjoying being sucked into your Vegetasai.

    I think the idea of time travel for Goku is unique and that it works, I also like how you put in there you can never return to the same timeline, it's a kind of morbid and demented alternative but I like. Also, I feel like the story itself is very different, It's not the same story with a simple twist. I was looking for something with this pairing of interest and I've found it!

    I'm excited to read the next chapters!!
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  • From ANON - sm on February 04, 2012
    this story is so very utterly fascinating. can't wait for more
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