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Reviews for Sacrifice

By : xerosky
  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2012
    Damn girl - you write so well, we really ought to be paying for it. This story is so polished - it reads like genuine world-building scifi. And the TENSION between the characters! So good. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - nelfie14 on January 11, 2012
    Okay first off, I love everything about this story!

    Goku's transition into becoming Kakarot. His sorrow, his pain. The loss! You made it believable.

    I am wishing for an update! Please continue, I know many people will be very delighted to have a new chapter up soon!
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  • From ANON - YouKnowMe on September 20, 2011
    Pleeeeeease update. This is a wonderful story. You really understand the importance well thought-out story arc. You have covered everything from extremely interesting character dynamics to the minute yet extremely important setting details. I am looking forward to reading more of this. You are very talented.
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  • From Rowina on September 19, 2011
    It's such a gift to read a new story from you!! You haven't lost any magic in your touch. There's so much here to take me completely into your world, just like in your other stories--and each of them their own universe as well. They're just so damn believable. Your style and your imagination always captivate me, and I'm left wanting more, even from completed stories! More Trinity-ah hell yeah, but also Twisted Fates. I love the dark stuff....and you do all of it so well!

    I LOVE smart Nappa and cousin Turles, love the family interaction there and at the palace. Goku's dark aura is a wonderful change, and I adore young uke Vegeta. Delicious. Thank you for feeding your muse and sharing!
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  • From Lorichelle87 on August 06, 2011
    This is getting good ^_^ And I have a feeling its going to be getting better :)
    I love the way you've written Kakkarot in this - very deep, very emotional and descriptive. I feel like I am able to feel what he's been through.
    And I think you've portrayed a young Vejita very well - the attitude, the confusion, everything. Very well indeed.
    Can't wait for more, you are another of my top favorite authors.

    By the way... any chance we might be seeing more of Trinity? ^_^

    Keep up the good work - you're an awesome writer!
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  • From mjmusiclover on August 04, 2011
    ahh awesomely well written, this is very beautiful :D:D
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  • From Zofo on August 03, 2011
    Vegeta still in denial but had to give in to the lust. Don't think that's won him over yet though. I wonder if he doesn't really see himself in Kakarot's memories as he never went through the awful times that the original prince did :(

    I'm intriqued as to who the 'god' is in the Kings room, though I have an inkling. Will K/V IT straight into that?
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  • From ANON - sm on July 24, 2011
    this story makes me so incredibly happy and sends my imagination soaring~
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  • From ANON - shasha on July 24, 2011
    At last, some consummation lol. I can't wait to see what goes down when they get back home.
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  • From ANON - Dragon on July 20, 2011
    Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.
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  • From ANON - erika on July 20, 2011
    hey, i think your story is great i absolutely love it and i hope you update soon. n_n
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2011
    Yay for the quick update! Liking this fic a lot but want to read more! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2011
    Still eagerly following this story, and I was very happy with the new chapter! I love the insight and detail you're giving all the other characters rather than focusing on Kakarrot and Vegeta. King Vegeta taking advantage of royal outrage to clear the room and collapsing in an unkingly manner to think about if he could get a strong drink were a lot of fun to see, and the new look at running the saiyan empire with its enemies and expenses for soldiers and the political manuever of calling blood vengeance and the riots... it added a practical look and realistic minutiae to royalty and Vegetasei. Then, of course, the bit of a cliffhanger about another god coming calling to the king... Can't wait to see what that's about, as well as Kakarrot reacting to Turles and whatever happened to Bardock. Fun family dynamic already with Turles and Nappa.

    Great chapter, and I liked the extra steamy kiss we got out of the interaction with Kakarrot and Vegeta. I can't wait to see how the king reacts to leaning Kakarrot had no intention of forcing a slave bond because he likes the prince stubborn, sarcastic, and arrogant. Wonderful hint of how their relationship might turn out with the make out session, then the Prince's order that Kakarrot accepted with a smirk, "my prince" and obeyed to take them back to the palace. Looking forward to Kakarrot as the Legendary dealing with all the Saiyans around and their reactions when they realize who they had been attacking!
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  • From Zofo on June 26, 2011
    Really enjoyed this chapter :)

    Vegeta is so stubborn and would never have given in, so that was a great way for Kakarot to let him see why he was there. Must be very confusing for the prince but at least he does feel the connection even though he's trying to deny it. Kakarot still needs to tread carefully however as Vegeta is still a bit flighty.
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  • From ANON - shasha on June 23, 2011
    Yay for updates! Can't wait for the next one.
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