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Reviews for Sacrifice

By : xerosky
  • From bloodshound on June 21, 2011
    I feel sorry for the pair of them. What a head trip. Still, it'll come out right in the end I hope.
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  • From mjmusiclover on June 17, 2011
    ahh this fic is awesome, it's really well written :D
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  • From ANON - noon on June 16, 2011
    Yay! I am so happy this updated! And you worked in enough anger and angst and frustration on both their parts without making the reader want to bang their head against the wall until death. Loved the getting to know each other for Vejita and his denial and Kakarrot showing real feelings and not just too sappy happy. The hopeful note at the end, for more of a relationship with Vejita that kept the prince annoyed and frustrated as the original was and not right away in love was fun. Liked the reminder that Vejita could be attracted to Kakarrot, but if only he weren't being forced...

    And of course Goku would just mention time travel and death so casually like that! I wonder if Vejita still knows a little more than he about other things and wouldn't mind sharing, though to explain things. Surprised Kakarrot took them to Earth, but in the end it really fits, and is a great place for them to be alone. Wonder how everyone will react when Vejita sees his family again, or when any Saiyan gets glimpse of the Legendary! Or maybe in his normal form and they hit on him without knowing Vejita might get jealous? Oooh... And it so fit Vejita's character that he's annoyed he can't put too much venom into hating Kakarrot, but is comforted he can still be angry. Glad he checked that he could still say and think his own thoughts without hurting himself like the forced bond wouldn't have allowed.

    Looking forward to Goku trying to explain his crazy life, and what Vejita makes of it. Surprised by his mention of 'mongrels' but glad Goku defended their kids. It's sort of sad neither of them are child-bearers so they can have more of a family later, but maybe they can have students? Anyway, great chapter.
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  • From darkaura204 on June 16, 2011
    great chapter.
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  • From ANON - shasha on May 28, 2011
    Intriguing and well written. I REALLY hope you continue!
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  • From Zofo on March 29, 2011
    That was so tense, the moment they met, I almost thought Goku was going to claim him there and then, my heart was in my throat! Glad they are alone now, maybe Goku can calm him.

    I like the little side stories with Nappa and Turles, and descriptions of Saiyan society, thought the guards Oozaru switch was neat too :)
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  • From KillJoy2510 on March 29, 2011
    I am so on edge for this story. Your work is nothing short of riveting and i find myself rudely awoken when i finally read the "to be continued" at the end off the chapters. I will stop gushing now. Wow.
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  • From saiyanstardust on March 27, 2011
    Ahh Xero Sky, I'm going to assume that you Dominion and Trinity etc. If so, I love your stories. They're always so well written and creative. I'm excited to see another one, hopefully it's a long one!
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  • From ANON - dinamicus on March 25, 2011
    Your imagination is so ... Wonderful. It's amazing what you get trasmit , it's so vivid.
    i'm sad , mainly for Kakarotto: he does not know what to expect

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  • From PrinceJiita on March 25, 2011
    Oh my God, I can't believe the story stopped at that moment! You have me on edge here! Please update quickly, or I might burst!
    You have a great style of writing, and know perfectly how to describe emotions. I'm feeling so sad for Kakarot, and I so want him to get his Vejita this time. You picked my fav paring, Kakarot seme, Vejita uke. I love a dominant Kakarot, because I truely believe he has it in him, no matter how nice he is.
    I enjoy the way you make a connection between ancient civiliastion and rites and modern times, it feels very natural and believable. Your writings are a great source of inspiration.
    So, please, update this story again. And don't keep the two apart for too long, or I will suffer alongside them, ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2011
    Yes, an update! I was so excited to see another chapter, and after finished reading it I'm still celebrating. You covered a lot in this chapter and I enjoyed all of it! I really like Turles and Nappa together, and I'm really curious about any complications about Bardock might come up. The descriptions of saiyans and how Kakarrot feels their ki and how the security and surveillance teams worked was brilliant and real.
    I am of course now extremely nervous about this 'claiming' business. Were they speaking in a different language than on Earth, anyway? I get the feeling there's a misunderstanding about what Kakarrot wants, but I hate the thought of it dragging on for weeks and him feeling horrible and just not understanding. Please don't do that! Even if it's cleared up, Vejita is still prideful and angry enough at the decision made for him to cause some fun problems, and a decade of feelings he's worked up don't just disappear with an explanation of a mistake.

    Ah, I don't want Kakarrot to be in pain! (emotional pain, feel free to start some fights). At least let there be some good times in between if we're goin to put him through a lot! Please?

    Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - pallyndrome on March 24, 2011
    This story sounds great :)
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  • From ANON - chandu on March 19, 2011
    You are a genius- at world building, description, pacing, and creating an engaging premise. I love a story more from this series than I would have anticipated at my age - (Late twenties) - all because of your writing ability. Thank you!
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  • From MutantPoptart on February 21, 2011
    This is beautifully written. The idea is believable and innovative. It's a truly captivating read. Thank you for writing this! I can't wait for more!
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  • From saiyanb on February 17, 2011
    Hi, B here.
    Wow, can't believe it, an oldie with a newbie fic. God, I really miss the old school way of fic writing. Seems like so many fics are so cookie cutter now; been awhile since I read a fic that got me thinking. It’s actually inspired me to do a little writing myself, so thanks for the creative boost, B really needed it.
    I'm defiantly enjoying this one so far. I love your take on saiyan culture there’s just something so fascinating about the way you’re portraying them. Primitive, yet beautiful and cultured, nothing like ‘sacrifice the virgins to appease our god’. Although… that is ‘kind’ of happening. Still it’s Vegeta so who can blame them. The offering of gifts just seems so refined in a manner; Zen as to the barbaric nature some people portrays saiyan society. Still like the kinky biting and fight for dominance, but I like a little more culture then me ‘strong you weak’.
    I’m also loving the use of henna tattoos, like the ones Vegeta’s father painted on him. That appeals to my artist side. The little details like Vegeta’s father having an artist flair, make the characters more real and likable. I love that Vegeta has a big loving family in this and yet he’s still the same violent ill temper spit fire we all love. You’ve managed to keep his personality very close to what I think Akira was intending.
    Goku’s thoughts are also deep and sorrowful. The past you describe is pretty horrifying. Vegeta severing his son’s arm to save him, this ‘Death’ killing everything. Goku going back again and again and never able to save earth. Him watching Vegeta die over and over. Vegeta telling and yet not explaining about their bond. Poor guy has a lot on his plate. That part about him telling Bulma Vegeta didn’t really love her in one time, wicket. Especially, with her drunk and crying over him. Blunt and cruel. I can see him tired of fighting a losing battle and wanting to be selfish, to escape to something better.
    You have my attention, I’m defiantly keeping an eye out for more of this fic.
    Ja ne
    b-chan

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