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Reviews for Turning Back Time

By : saiyanb
  • From Rowina on September 28, 2011
    Finished Chapter 3, love the action. Yamcha is so cold-blooded, it's more than a bit scary. I love how direct he is with Vegeta, and Nappa's reaction. Looking forward to the rest!
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  • From Rowina on September 25, 2011
    Second chapter: Yay, he got away! And the other timeline's Goku shouldn't be a threat, but its Vegeta definitely might. Great fight-scene writing. Looking forward to the rest as time allows!
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  • From Rowina on September 24, 2011
    Well, I read the first chapter, and I'm glad it's Vegeta and not Goku that Yamcha is pining for! I can always go for some VxY, or YxV as the case may be. Kingdom Come by deaniebean and summerstarr really sold me on this pair. Goku as a complication scares me, because I am a firm believer that Goku can do anything he wants, so if he wants to stop this, he will! But I trust you... I have to trust you!
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  • From KillJoy2510 on June 01, 2011
    ^__^ yay happy ending! I was hoping Goku would sense something was off. I guess there'll be a whole string of universes all dedicated to getting a piece of Vegeta-ass lol. This was such a fun read, I wish there was more. I am happy with the ending tho. It's happy and hopeful ^_^ Great story!
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  • From Zofo on May 16, 2011
    I don't really like the pairing of Yamcha and Vegeta, being a Goku/Vegeta fan, but this was a very good story and it kept me interested, and I'm glad Goku got a chance at getting Vegeta too.

    Hope you do a sequel of Goku going to Vegetasai, wooing Vegeta and killing Freeza :)
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  • From ANON - sm on May 16, 2011
    omg i almost forgot! I wanted to praise you! cause you made it awesome how happy vegeta ends up no matter what! happy with bulma! happy with goku! happy with yamcha! happy with goku again! almost like karma was like: here you go vegeta. 3 lifetimes of happy for your bad childhood.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 16, 2011
    so i wrote a review and it got deleted cause aff.nets review system sucks... anyways. this was a great ending! i wish it would have been more detailed! like 5 more chapters or something with tons of preggos and unresolved sexual tension! either way it was a great story, even without the nut busting!
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  • From ANON - Hannah on May 12, 2011
    It was alright, but I feel like it was too easy to get Vegeta, it was too much of a happy ending maybe?
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  • From ANON - topbear on May 02, 2011
    The sex is all hot. But why do I have the dread feeling that he is Taoing goku rightful place. Very well written.
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  • From KillJoy2510 on May 01, 2011
    great fight scene. love how vegeta is so flexible but powerful--u make him almost flirty in his technique, which fits. no wonder everyone wants a piece. even when yamucha finally "defeats" him, vegeta is really still strategizing how to keep the struggle on, submitting to let yamucha have his way so he can get to hopefully reach super saiyajin status--tricksy thing lol. and yet yamucha turns it around in that unbelievable lemon o_o;; I was actually glad things were going the way yamucha planned tho I am kinda hoping goku tries to get in on this...gotta love the conflict. I'm sure yamucha will prove quite the challenge if goku tries to move in on the territory. poor vegeta caught in the middle of this, tho since he's so far from a helpless maiden waiting for the victor...i hope he plays a more active role in who ends up with who. but hey, a saiyajin threesome isn't too shabby either. sorry it took so long for this review. I twitch in anticipation...some more. lol.
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  • From ANON - chandu on April 30, 2011
    Wow. Goosebumps. You've done a nice job breathing life into the characters so that they grow from their source in a believable way. I love how you had Vegeta (love him!) turn the tables and claim Yamacha - interested to see whether his being the "claim holder" will influence the dynamic between the two and what other surprises he has in store for him. Yamacha seems to smugly assume that his superior power makes this timeline his little sandbox to play in, but his assumptions have turned out to be wrong more than once already... I'm wonder how badly he's messed up this timeline and who is going to fix it. (And what will Piccolo be up to when Yamacha is off-planet?) Can't wait to get to Frieza :) Keep up the good work!


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  • From ANON - sm on April 30, 2011
    fking hot~~~~~~

    i need to go through your old stuff... this is crazy good.

    aside from the amazing rapeing/smexying/mauling the part with goku is verrry interesting.

    I wonder if the same thing that happened to yamcha will happen to him. in which he will become obsessed with poor lil old vegeta. everyone in the universe wants a piece of that ass!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - sm on April 30, 2011
    poor napa, I felt bad about his death. He was only trying to protect his prince's virtue!
    i so badly want this fic to continue so im like pulling for yamcha to get his way but i just cant cheer for creepy/home wrecker/stalker/killed trunks and bra too!/desperate/still looserish/ yamcha! i hope vegeta kicks him in the balls at some point in this story @.@
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  • From ANON - sm on April 30, 2011
    And then yamcha just pops in and is all like. HI VEGETA IM HERE TO RAPE YOU!


    so full of win!

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  • From ANON - sm on April 30, 2011
    i hate this sites review system! but im doing it just for you! Poor goku! Yamcha is like delusional and its hot and creepy at the same time. Poor vegeta, caught in the middle of all this with no say in the matter. Oh how I love to see him tortured! ! !
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