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Reviews for Deceitful Allies and Trustworthy Foes

By : animeslave18
  • From topbear1974 on April 21, 2011
    This is an interesting turn of story. So Akuro wants kakaroto to take over? I am slightly worried that he actually wants to get kakarotto out and kill him. A bit like hamlet. He is the evil uncle who killed kaka's parents and then want him for life.

    I look forward to read more.

    Awww... you are going to leave this story for a while. I understand college is important. As long as you don't abandon it. I am patient. What I worry is auther lose the interest after a while and the story would not continue. That would be a shame.

    please make sure you come back when you can. thanks.
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  • From topbear1974 on April 20, 2011
    That is the interesting turn of story. i am so happy Kakaroto is also a noble. it felt like romeo found his juliet. So Kakarotto is framed? I look forward to see next turn of story. Please update soon.

    BTW, I was the anon above. Don't know why AFF don't show my name

    love from topbear
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 16, 2011
    Awwww...The confession between kakarott and vegeta melt my heart. I am so curious what kaka is hiding. Please let it be a happy ending.
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  • From Deathdeamon88 on April 14, 2011
    Wow great story so far ^^.
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  • From mjmusiclover on April 14, 2011
    ahh it's very beautifully well written, i love how well you portay vegeta as a ninja & goku as a samurai so well
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2011
    Thank god that guard arrive on time. I became worrie. I really love this story. It is incredibly cute. The drunken love is a pro. Can't wait to see next update.
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  • From Vegetaswriter on April 13, 2011
    Greetings my dear I have been waiting and waiting until you placed up more chapters to read and review your fic. I will be honest in the beginning it was slightly confusing on who was who but after the 3 chapter I knew lol. I enjoyed it I liked how you made a plot of conflict and still are proceeding the conflict plot and not having it solved too quickly. I liked how you used Goku in which I mean I love how you are using the name Kakarot instead! It is something I love seeing his sayian name not human name, it gives his character a more roughness that he do not have in the series. Though honestly I would like to see Vegeta in the end married to the 'bad' guy creates more angst (Yes it is true I like angst) Then creates another conflict to be solved lol. I like the lemons and it was great to see Vegeta/Kakarot finally come together and their interactions are very good. Keep writing girl I am enjoying.
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  • From topbear1974 on April 10, 2011
    this story is very enticing. I can not wait for next update. What is kakarotto's real identity? WIll he marry Vegeta instead?
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  • From PrinceJiita on March 30, 2011
    That was an intersting meeting. I think you have a fantastic villain in the making here. I really hope he does not end up married to the guy....or at least gets rid of him in the end.
    You can contact me via email: PriceJiita@kamisaru.de
    I also have a facebook account, you can find it in my profile
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  • From PrinceJiita on March 29, 2011
    I like the way this story begins, just the names are maybe a bit confusing at first.
    Vegeta no Hokoru means "Vegeta of the Proud/Pride" so it is rather fitting, I like it. But since it is often confusing, perhaps you should only mention the full names once in each chapter and then use a short form, as I think you have done so far.
    And Maybe it would help if you put the translation in brackets right behind the name when it is first mentioned so the people get the hidden meaning right away. If you want to discuss names beforehand, just contact me, I'm available to help you all I can.
    I think it is a pretty interesting start, a very different universe. But it would be interesting if you could try and bring in some of the others, even if it is just as a cameo, so some of us will have something to smile about atthe sidelines.
    Keep up the great work!
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