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By : arvan
  • From ANON - TristaML on October 16, 2015
    Yay!!!! Goku made a move!! And I think vegeta finally understand s that turles is goku. I can't wait for the next chapter this one was great thanks for the update
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  • From ANON - Dryu on October 07, 2015
    Chapter 22 was the best thus far; the depth and emotion of it much appreciated, for the truth would have to eventually come out. You and your team do well incorporating characters in different, intriguing ways. This was an excellent chapter to a great story; I look forward to the next.
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  • From TristaML on July 10, 2015
    I loved this chapter about explaining things to them like why the game is so strange what with them not being able to log out and ask.. you made some good points and put detail to what I hadn't even considered. I will say it made the story more interesting and I'm also so constantly surprised at the way that you introduce random characters from dragonball z. I do wonder how you plan to set things straight the very idea is scary..being stuck in a video game with an artificially intelligent mad boss. Thanks for posting!

    TristaML
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  • From Robyn on June 20, 2015
    Interesting update. I look forward to seeing how the real and created characters interact going forward. I hope they are able to maintain their solidarity until Goku and Vegeta are able to defeat the king and get out of the game!
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  • From Kiurei on June 16, 2015
    This latest chapter was excellently done. I was on the edge of my seat as the others were gut punched with the cruel truth that they are data in a game, yet sadly they all missed the large point the Sharpner told them, the AI has started to become more aware, meaning not everything they're going through is completely scripted. Hopefully this truth want break the team's spirit too badly. Looking forward to what is to come next.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 03, 2015
    Can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From Robyn on March 30, 2015
    That was an interesting turn of events. :D Goku and Vegeta have a small army now? LOL at Goku's hasty retreat. I wish their thoughts could have been better expressed after the kiss.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on February 09, 2015
    Great chapter
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  • From Robyn on February 03, 2015
    Oooooo - Goku was so cute beating around the bush, but I just wanted him to spit it out! LOL No. 17 joining them just in time was awesome. Looking forward to seeing how the dynamic might change with a 5th party involved.
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  • From ANON - Lily on January 31, 2015
    OMG!!!!! This is awesome! Loved the story line. Can't decide if I'm rooting for vegeta and goku or vegeta and turles.
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  • From Robyn on December 07, 2014
    I'm glad Tarble didn't go through with it! I also like that you had Goku forgive him almost immediately. It's in Goku's character to give everyone a 2nd chance (if not a 3rd, 4th and 5th. :P)

    I'm glad they were able to work together to free Tarble's friends so the same leverage can't be used against him in the future. Also happy to see that Tarble will continue the journey. Although having Zarbon on the team might be interesting, I think you've built a well functioning team to write about and disrupting it now would be more of a distraction, I think.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From Zofo on November 29, 2014
    Gasps! Why is Tarble going to poison them, what on earth did that note say, I'm on tenderhooks now!

    Nice to see Vegeta enjoy the coupling this time and I think it was making Goku a little jealous was it not.

    General Blue, gosh, a blast from the past I had forgotten about, but when I think about it this world would be perfect for him.

    Eager for more now you left it on a cliff-hanger.
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  • From Neptunesdemon on November 10, 2014
    Oh man, it's been forever since I read DBZ fics. And this was AMAZING. . . so far. Is this going to continue? Please!
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  • From Robyn on November 09, 2014
    :( I wish Tarble hadn't done that. I hope everyone will be okay. The second lemon was nice,really nice. The first one as - well, that General is a creepy sort of fellow.
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  • From Robyn on November 09, 2014
    Seems I'm behind a couple of chapters. :P that's okay, means I get to read longer! I love the action in chapter 15. The fight with the monster was awesome; tentical monster and voyeurism made me laugh. The description of Goku and Turles getting pissed and fighting in sync made me want to actually see it on film - that'd be awesome!
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