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By : HappilyJaded

From ANON - WOW on March 13, 2004
Though I was hoping for a 1xRx3 resolution here, but what you did, did make sense as well, plus I'd rather have Heero dead than continue to live and be forced to watch Relena and Trowa be together.

I'm not expecting a happy epilogue to this, though I can hope for one, a happy 3xR future.
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From ANON - Evil Dr. Muraki on March 12, 2004
Yay! I thought you'd never update and forgot all about your readers.^_~ But it's always worth the wait so it's okay I guess,^_^ I like the way you kept it somewhat vague but dropped hints as to who was being buried. You kept me guessing who shot who and who died. And all the time I was thinking Nooooo! Did she kill who I think she killed?^_^;;; Somehow it's sad that one had to die but methinks you did the right thing. It's so easy to play safe and trap them into a threesome but you made a choice and I like what you did.^_^ Now, I know it's not going to be all roses and we'll know that in the epilogue. I'm sure there's going to be a catch in the end.^_~ Oh and yeah...let me not forget to mention the lemon scene. Though ns des detailed and long like in your previous chapters...it's still HOT!^_^ Good luck on the epilogue. I'll be waiting for it.^_^ You really did a great job on this one...well, you always do.^_^
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From ANON - Silvermoonlight on January 21, 2004
God that was heart wrenching in places, some of the emotions Relena felt where so realistic. It was also touching to see everyone coming to her aid as hell as Hero.
This is a truly great story please continue

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From ANON - eeek on January 14, 2004
Oh man, what a way to leave us in suspense. Sorry this review is late in coming, I didn't know it had been updated. I'm a little scared now, because I have a sinking feeling that Relena was the one that got shot.

Oh god, please let Relena have a happy ending and find love out of all of this craziness. From what it sounds like, Trowa did start out using Relena, but then has come to care for her and enjoy her on some level and I think Heero feels for her too, because even though he rejected her at first, sometimes it takes losing something before you realize how much it meant to you.

So what am I saying? I'm all up for the three of them coming to a nice, happy medium and deciding to all become lovers, though that more then likely won't happen, that's what I'm hoping for. Why should just one of them win when all three of them could be winners. I'm a 1xR and a 3xR lover, so I'd hate for either of them to get hurt, or Relena.
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From ANON - Evil Dr. Muraki on January 05, 2004
Love and lust are two different things indeed. Amen to Relena for that. How could Heero assume and say he loves her when he didn't even fancy her not until he saw her getting banged by Barton?O_o That is not love. Ths lus lust and desire for something you knew you had freely in your palms before it was swiped away from your hands and learning the true value of it. In this case it's not that Herro realized he loves her but more of him realizing that she is desirable and worthy of his lust. Sure, Trowa's a bad ass manipulator but we knew that from the beginning and he's been consistent all throughout. Yes, he's the villain of this story but a good villain at that and may I add extremely sexy.^_^ However, Heero didn't seem to know what he really wants or his true feelings are and that makes an even more potent villanous character to me. There's nothing more dangerous than the perfect soldeir being all undecisive and impulsive at the same time. And it looks like someone just paid for his temper this time around. Sad to say but I feel it's Trowa.*sniffs* Oh well, I'll have to wait and see for the next chappy to know.^_^ So there's hope yet ne?^_~

Anyway, this is an absolutely stunning tension filleapteapter. I love it!^_^ I'm spellbound and it shows, otherwise I wouldn't have ranted this much. You really did a great job!^_____^

Good luck to the last chapter and may it be a happy ending for all three of them.^_~ I know I'd hate for this fic to end but even good things must come to ase ase at some point. Besides, what are sequels for?^_~
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From ANON - mel on January 04, 2004
damn it! I wanted a lemon! But this was good intrigue and I supposed it had to happen! You are ending it?!!? AW!!! Bleh. The yaoiness is revolting b/c it's so NOT heero *hugs heero* but it makes for a riveting story! Wow. Violence and action at the end! That was seriously awesome, but i hope heero at least didn't die! Trowa is a bastard in this fic (poor trowa!) but he might be too sexy to give up. i was wondering if you were going to write a 1xRx3 but this is probably more likely! At any rate, i hope heero's not banged up too much b.c i still want my 1xR lemon! and happy ending! Relena needs LOVE. and sex. Give her some good lovin' sex, heero! Okay, that's all i have to say. update soon!
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From ANON - jen on December 27, 2003
::waiting for the next chapter::
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From ANON - Spinster on December 17, 2003
The nerve of that Heero Yuy! What's he gonna do next? Rape Relena?lol There's no rape needed here cause she seems so eager anyways and I don't think she can exact revenge on him since she'd be softened by the love she always has for him. Poor trowa, sleeping still and without a clue as to what's going on.^_~

I've really enjoyed this chapter a lot so please update soon.^_^

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From ANON - Misty Barton on December 14, 2003
Ah finally it's Relena's turn to have fun! Yeah! Go Rel! Make him pay! Make him pay! Make him pay! Now get to the next one.;-) Don't let us wait that long again.;-)
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From ANON - Diamond on December 13, 2003
My God, that was delicious. Thank, He, Heero, for finally deciding not to be such a cowardly prick. Hope Relena doesn't make him pay too much...there's a point past just playing around and being truly vindictive. If she passes that point, she'll be no better than Trowa.
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From ANON - mel on December 12, 2003
ack!!! You can't leave it there!!! write the 1xR lemon I've been dying for!!!
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From ANON - Evil Dr. Muraki on December 12, 2003
True...better short than nothing.^_~ Cause no matter the length of your lastest chapter...it's still awesome as usual.^_^ I thought Trowa for the first time did something very unusual for him. To be in Relena's bed and not do anything to her but just whisper "dream of me" was rather sweet on his part. Now is he getting soft or what? Or perhaps he's starting to realize that she's more than a sex object for him to use?^_~ That'd be a great development if it does happen. But it remains toseenseen cause now we have Heero again intruding and ruining whatever hopes I have of a Relena/Trowa romance.lol

Give full credit to Heero though for that was a bold move he made yet again. To just arrive unannounced and seduce Relena knowing full well that she lacks resilience on anything carnal related.^_~

So thankies again for another fantastic chapter.^______^ It's short but it more than makes up for the wait.^_~ It keeps getting interesting as you go on. And now it seems we're gonna see Relena exorcise her demon named Herro Yuy.^_^ Will she be successful in her revenge or will Heero just turn the tables on her? And what of Trowa? What's he going to do?^_~ so mso many questions keep popping in my head.^_~

Okay, I hate to sounds cliche...but please do update as soon as you can.^_______^
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From ANON - Misty Barton on December 10, 2003
Whoa! That's another hot scene between Trow and Rel.*glomps at author* Please update as soon as you can. I'm really hooked in your story. It goes beyond smut cause it's got an amazing story as well.*big grin* Update soon kay?
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From ANON - Tessa on December 10, 2003
I almost missed your update. It's a good thing I cliked on the next page to see if you have and I sure am glad I did.;-) Maybe you can post it again so you can bring it back up on the list of ficcies...that way the people who might've missed you story will have no trouble finding it.:-)

Anyhoo, this chapter was simply awesome.:-D Love it when you make Relena submit to Trowa!;-) However, the last part somehow is indicative of a tragic ending. Please don't let anyone die. I'm a sucka for happy endings.;-)
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From ANON - Kenji-kun on December 04, 2003
Mmmmm, an absolutely yummy chapter. So what have you cooked for us in the next one? Are we going to see some hot threesome?*winks*

You really did a great job.^_^ Now on to the next one please.
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