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By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - kyokara on February 27, 2014
    I remember reading this story a very long time ago and there are missing chapters and huge gaps in this story. It could
    be I read it from another uploader. I don't know which story is the original but the one I read earlier was very well
    written. I really liked it. Another thing I find unusual is why post comments from your fellow uploader as part of the story. Some parts were funny but for the most part it was annoying.
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  • From Lici on August 02, 2007
    I loved your entire story, but one thing (not even as part of the story) had me giggling like a loon in the very PUBLIC library while my computer is down (the timing couldn't have been worse!).

    "...straight slash..." chapter 12 in the AN. That is just so wrong...*giggling again*
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  • From ANON - Dark~kakarot on September 29, 2006
    Its awesome I swear you should give yourself a pat on teh back ^^
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  • From ANON - miku on September 27, 2006
    Wow, this is amasing! xx Much love goes to te fic. xxx Poor Goten can give birth, poor guy may have to suffer the "joys" of labour. But well done! I am looking forward to reading more! xxx
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  • From ANON - Little_Bitch on September 24, 2006
    O_o

    Chapter 14 is only a paragraph long. The rest of the story is missing. x_x
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  • From ANON - Mikai on November 01, 2005
    wow! that was wondeful!! i read the whole story, AND the sequel 'Even More of Us', and i guess, the sequel to that, "frosting chronicles'. it took me about 3 days(since i have a life...) but i had a lot of free time, and i stayed up til' around three in the mornng each of those days!

    *blushes* that just shows you how great your writing and stories are!! Now im totally interesting in reading 'Hormone Therapy' and the many sequels that follow!

    wow! once again i loved you stories!! im going to go and review each one that i read now...just so you know!!!


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  • From ANON - wendyghost t on August 03, 2005
    this was a great story!
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  • From Kugatsu on June 15, 2005
    Excellent! It's one am and I love this!
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  • From ANON - Keira on February 05, 2005
    now wouldnt it be interesting if the basic events of this story happened on Vegetasai? with goku's and vegeta's parents arond? along with a lot of other experieced females around to give advice?
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  • From ANON - Bunnicle on January 29, 2005
    so... when is the next chapter? huh huh? better be soon! *glares*
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  • From ANON - yoleichang on January 16, 2005
    I went to your site and was checking out all your stories and stuff. well this story and the sequels to it aren't on there and i was just wondering if you were planning on putting them on your site because when i usually get into reading something i like AFF decides it's not going to work for my anymore and i'd really like to read the rest of your DBZ stories. i already read the meaning of pride series and that was really good and i want to be able to read the rest of them. anyway, really great stories and please drop me a line when or if you decided to write another DBZ slash.

    ja ne^^
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  • From ANON - Kallero on October 16, 2004
    When did Goku become part female? Was it in another fic of yours? I should probably go read that first... Nice story so far. Nice ance too =P
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  • From ANON - mali on September 29, 2004
    Damn, is that a cliffhanger! Shit!
    So one can presume that Vegeta has gone evil now, right? Or maybe not... Either way, I'm sure you have one hell of a twist up your sleeve.
    It's also a cool detail that Goten ended up like his father Goku-- as well as the fact that Bulla, while the most quiet, was/is the first one to
    master her ki. Well done!
    But I have one question.... How the heck do you manage to turn out so much good material for so many different stories with so many different chapters all the time? It's amazing!
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  • From ANON - LadyKATT on June 09, 2004
    Well I really love this fic so please please update soon.
    BYEBYE LadyKATT
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  • From ANON - mali on March 25, 2004
    Man.... I'm a major Chichi fan and -I- liked this fic! Damn!
    And besides a lot of explicit, erotic unmentionables about what I think of the very raunchy sex scenes, I'm just thrilled with the story, and can't wait
    to see what Vegeta's gunna do. I have to admit that at the beggining of the story I thought Goku would be bringing Turles, Raddiz, Nappa and Brolli back
    to life.... but this is just as good (though I still miss those guys bad *sniff sniff*).... Great work!
    ^_^

    ps. --- are goku and vegeta -ever- going to learn proper safe sex technique?
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