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Reviews for Saiyan Enlightenment

By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - Multifaceunecune on November 03, 2004
    Hi! I just wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed your stories so far. (I forgot to review MoP because I rushed off to read this one...heh...) This is a really neat idea, and you are doing a wonderful job! The descriptions and characters are very in depth and well written -- keep up the good work!!! *leaves to go start the sequel...yay!*

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  • From ANON - Jasmine on August 11, 2004
    Damn, 39 chapters to go... I'll leave a real comment when I seem to finish up, and have the whole story in mind... Good job so far ^.~
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on July 13, 2004
    Raditz...Raditz...Raditz! Hurray! I am so giddy...I love the big idiot. Ahh...and the lemon was so lemony fresh. :)
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on July 10, 2004
    Oh my God!!!
    I have now got a huge smile on my face... Raditz is coming back. ::faints::
    Raditz just happens to be one of my favourite characters (Vegeta will always be no. 1 ^-^). Anyways just reviewing to congratulate u on a brilliant fic, I am definately looking forward to the sequel, any fic of yours is a brilliant read. ^_^

    BTW liked the lemon... or part lemon ^.~
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  • From on July 10, 2004
    Well....i don't know what to say...I'm sorry i overreacted, i tend to do that when anything threatens Goku and Vegeta's relationship. ~Blushes~ I think you ahould give them all their tails back. ^_^ Can't wait till the sequel, i wonder what the title will be called. Ja ne!
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  • From on July 10, 2004
    IS HE MAD?!?! I think Vegeta also needs a smack round the head. ~Smacks Vegeta really hard~ Idiot, why the hell do you wanna bring back Raditsu? Poor Goku must be at his wits end. -_- And what will this do to Gohan, he will probebly not trust him even more. HELL!! Even i don't trust him right now. ~Growls~ What are you up to Card-san? lol. Ca wai wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Elenek on July 09, 2004
    I feel so loved. You're bringing Radditz back. And you are doing so shortly after I told you that I missed him in AKWC. I know I had nothing to do with your decision; but I still feel loved. Yeah for my favorite villan!!!! Who's very Hot. With all that . A. And a smirk ... that's even more evil looking than Vegeta's. If Goku decides he doesn't want to share can I have Radditz? -El-
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  • From ANON - Dr. Yaoi on July 08, 2004
    Yet another wonderful chapter. And it's filled with lemony goodness. I have yet another question. Out of all your stories which do you think is your best onnd wnd which did you have the most fun on? Thank you for updating! Keep up the good work! ^_^!!!
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on July 06, 2004
    Hehe...Vegeta is so mean leaving Goku in a cold shower...
    That was a very good chappie and I loved that spanking part. I wish Goku did spank him.
    Piccolo is such a great character I am glad he showed up.
    And G/V are just so cute. I loved how Vegeta just went into the bedroom after Piccolo left to comfort him.
    I loved when Goku said start my shower...and how that lead to the whole spanke me thing. I was nearly falling out of my seat.
    I was like omgomgomgomgomg!!!!! Goku is going to spank him...hehe


    yay I am glad that thre will be a sequel *cries joyful tears*
    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on July 05, 2004
    I have finally caught up!!!
    Took me about two days but I have. ::dances:: ^_^

    The only prob is that its 2.30 in the morning and I need to be up on time for my driving lesson. ::note to self... 'do not attempt to drive when tired'::
    Your fic made me stay up late, but it was well worth it!

    It was definitely 'refreshing' reading a lemon/lime after all that angst, but the lemon between Goten and Trunks was kinda angsty/lemony which is good too!

    Poor Goku, having to take a cold shower, I wouldn't put it past Vegeta to plan that! Perhaps Goku should spank him... ::ponders spanking:: ...kinky! ^.~

    I am certainly looking forward to the next chap, I am hoping this time I'll keep on track, of all the chaps ...

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  • From ANON - Macha on July 05, 2004
    Thanks for the heads up! And, thanks for the lime before it happened. I like tension defusing limes. OH, and lemons, mus'n't forget those.

    I didn't think that Vegeta would go fhe bhe being spanked thing. I am glad he went with the 'get even' tactic rather than the 'beat the shit out of him' tactic.

    I believe that Piccolo does have a radar of some sort. I think it has something to do with he use to be a part of Kami.
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  • From on July 05, 2004
    O_O Ahhh no Goku needs to follow Vegeta and make him beg for it!!! Evil man, how dare he do such a thing. I was looking forward to some nlemolemon and he stopped and made Goku get all cold. ~Pouts~ No fair, i have a bad day coming up. ~Crys~ ^_^ Piccolo is so insightful, he is like their life sorce in a way. Everything would fall apart if it wasen't for him. Can't wait till the next chap as usual, Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 05, 2004

    Great chapter.


    If I remember correctly, Goku and Vegeta lived in a capsule house.

    And with all of Capsul Corp's technology, I would expecte them to have some kind

    of tankless water hearter. The ones that heat the water as it flows through the pipes.

    They are far more effcient than the ones with a tank (you save money on your gas/electric bill,)

    and you nevun oun out of hot water. Also you don't have to worry about the bottom of the tank rusting

    and falling out the bottom getting water everywhere.


    Anyway enough technobabble. I'm glad that Vegeta comforted Goku when he was in emotional distress.


    I'm still working on chapter thirteen (Mental block) so I hope to complete it soon

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  • From ANON - Dr. Yaoi on July 04, 2004
    I would just like to say that I love your story. It's just so great. I originally wanted to say so much more but I guess I will just do some thing simple. *Kneels down and begans to bow down* I thank you oh great one for writing such beautiful yaoi. As a doctor i recommend more sex. Lots more. Also i have a very important question for you. If you saw Goku and Vegeta on a table having hot monkey sex and then on another table was a plate filled with small sandwiches and cheese what would you do? ^_^ Yay! Go you!
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on July 03, 2004
    Well seeing that this is one of my favorite fics in the universe, I would totally hate to see it end. I would love to see this have a sequel, but only if you really want to. ^_~ I wouldn't want you writing something you didn't really want to write, that wouldn't be fun. But I love this fic so much and I just love the relationship of Goku and Vegeta and it is by far one of the best G/V reonshonships I have ever read about.

    aww I think it's so great that Goku can concentrate. The part where he is looking at Bra just made me smile.
    I think that is so rad that Goku and Vegeta may watch Bra...give Bulma a little time for herself.

    OMG...that was sooooo sweet when Goku said that if they don't let Vegeta into heaven he will go with him to HFIL I died when I read that. I wasn't surprised though b/c he has said many times the the love he has for Vegeta was/is stronger and much different than the love as fas for ChiChi.

    So that's what Vegeta has been writing! What Radditz and Nappa had taught him!

    Ok wow, I can't believe how stupid Gohan is still being..although he does make some valid points...but he is still very very lame. I am very proud of Goku and how he held his own and didn't apologize and didn't get mad. yay Goku!

    ^_^ Trunks and Goten are so cute!!!!! Hehe..Trunks asking Goten what is it like...lmao thats' how it all starts and then BAM before you know it you're uke!

    Woo hoo! hot lemon!!! I loved it, it was soooooooo cute and yummay!
    *hugs ficcie* I love it so much!
    ^.*
    -MB-



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