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Reviews for Dark Deceptions Revised

By : Seraphyn
  • From LadyWolf on May 18, 2011
    This is some very good stuff!!! I was confused with the Wufei/Duo pairing!
    But I'm glad it will be a Heero/Duo pairing...will Wu-baby find love too? Or will he be left out again?

    Post soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - kyona kopper on February 27, 2008
    *whistle* Damn, a Carpathian slash! Been wondering if it would ever happen. You're doing a pretty good job, but there are a few plot holes. 1: You aren't accounting for the time periods that 01, 03, and 05 would be sleeping. 2: Back in the chapter where the zombies had the co-ordinated attack, the boys were talking about 03 and 05 during the day. Basically, you aren't keeping the Carpathians IC, Sometimes they see in color, sometimes they don't. Do they or do they not feel emotion? Beyond this, I think that you are doing a great job and am looking forward to your next update! :3
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  • From animegirlalways on October 14, 2007
    I really like this story and wanna read what happens next, so please update soon!!! =)
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  • From SnowKaneko on February 19, 2007
    When I first started to read this fic I thought "Well crap some fanfic writer other than myself actually reads the dark carpathian novels by Christine Feehan..."

    Well added to that fact I must say that although this is well written (and I am not saying this to be offensive or to sound snooty, so please don't take offense.) but this but some of the characters copyrighted to the author's name has been spelled incorrectly. But other than that which was the only thing that really threw me off you story is excellent.
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  • From MegumiMuse on February 13, 2007
    Wow. Great fic! Love love LOVE!
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  • From ANON - kallipso on August 21, 2006
    Oh my god please keep it coming. I love what you have so far. Is Wufei going to be with Relena? I thought that she did not have a talent or is her talent hidden? Email me when the next part is up please. Don't give up on such a great story.
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  • From ANON - fan_girl on December 14, 2004
    Hey!!
    I read your fic for the second time this year and I must say that I really -REALLY- love it!
    it's amazing, interesting and well worth my time!
    I hope u finish it soon! Im hooked :)) good job, good writing and plz give us more of those good chapters
    ^_^ 1X2 Rulz
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  • From ANON - Bex Drake on November 08, 2004
    This is a fantasitc story so far and I cannot wait for more :D
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  • From ANON - Val on July 30, 2004
    If tonight I can't sleep, it is your fault my lady. Your fic was, admittedly quiet vividing. Please keep a constant update, it was very good.
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  • From ANON - KARINA on July 21, 2004
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGHHHHHH! This thinh cut my revie short. And I put soooo much thought on my last review. ~_~
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  • From ANON - KARINA on July 21, 2004
    I love the red edd eddition as well as the old one! ^_^
    I'm sooooooo sorry for not reviewing sooner. ~_~ Computer problems. >_
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  • From ANON - Ladnighnight on July 17, 2004
    *nods heads* Yes, Lady S explained it to me and all I can say is keep reading. All kinds of good twists and turns coming. This fic gets better and better! I can't wait for the moment when Wufei and Heero realize the truth, man the sparks should fly then.


    Keep going!!!!!!!
    LadyMidnight
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  • From ANON - Just me on July 17, 2004
    Huh??? I can't follow the last two chapters, Somehow they are not in harmony with the first 6 ones. Something doesn't msenssense.
    I also can't understand Wufei's behaviour at chapter 8 as well as Q's reaction to Trow's anger. after all he's the prince! (and not Trow's lover yet!!!)

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  • From ANON - LadyMidnight on July 16, 2004
    *lets out a scream* You dedicated the chapter to me? *blinks* Thank you, it was even better then the original!!!!! I truly love the way you described the wicked trio. *melts into a happyi gii girl puddle* I love Quatre in all his forms but the way you portrayed him in the club scene is by far the sexiest I have ever pictured him. 'like a cross between a Hell’s Angel and a submissive bondage teen' That description is the best...I love that line!!!!!!! This is turning into a great story and I think even Christine Feehan would agree.

    Keep up the wonderful work!!!!!!
    LadyMidnight
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  • From ANON - Diabloangel on July 16, 2004
    I am confused :-/ Waht was with wufie Possesivness with duo, i thought he was going to be with relena, Either way it is a good chap. Please continue and maybe i will get it latter on. Ohwell just keep writing
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