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By : Bulma
  • From ANON - Liz on August 06, 2005
    *sob* too soon to end, I love cc/veg action, i wish more people would write something with those two.
    Oh well.. it was awsome while it lasted. Thanks for writing :)
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on August 05, 2005
    And it does. I am content.
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  • From ANON - Macha on August 04, 2005
    Yes, this is a much better ending than what chapter 2 would have been. I am very happy you wrote more chapters to this story.

    Yeah, I can certainly see how Vegeta would have taken offense to the gift basket. I am glad Goku was able to make Vegeta see in a different light.

    I hope to read more stories from you soon!!!
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  • From ANON - maccam on August 04, 2005
    I'm going to miss this story. I would love to have read that they had a child got married. I loved this story, anything that has to do with these two are my fav. thanks for writing it. can't wait to read more of your great writing *HUGS*
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  • From ANON - Macha on August 02, 2005
    Alright? You have to ask? That was awesome!!! You did an excellent job with the lemon. There were no ackward moments that you didn't mean to write (i.e. Vegeta giving Chichi oral sex)

    Excellent job my dear. Keep up the good work, and although I truely do enjoy lemons, don't forget plot with this baby. I think it has more potential than a drawn out PWP.
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  • From ANON - maccam on August 02, 2005
    *JOYS* well be dreaming of my Prince tonigth.. that was AWESOME VM *HUGS* girl you can write your little heart out. that was great....Please update soon......*FANS* self ^_^
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on August 02, 2005
    Uhm. Nice.
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  • From ANON - Liz on August 02, 2005
    hehe, awsome :D woot woot CC/Veg lemon - For the Win!
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  • From ANON - maccam on July 29, 2005
    YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYEYSYEYS.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Now if they could only try it together just to see if they fit for each other...oh i can't wait now to read whats next ^_^
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 29, 2005
    Yes, I liked what you had written, but now I have to think of you as EVIL. You did that on purpose!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh. Udate soon you evil person.

    What will Vegeta think when he finds out Chichi wasn't thinking about Goku while moaning in her sleep? :) Mwuahahahah, I want to know!
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  • From ANON - Liz on July 29, 2005
    Haha, "Banshee, we need to talk." hilarious. loved that line, had to clamp down on my lips not to laugh out loud, and waking up my husband.
    Anyway. Please continue, CC/Veg action ahead? I can smell it :)

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  • From JebusOfNazareth on July 28, 2005
    The set up for that was great. I like the idea of the Banshee and the Vegetable. I certainly like where you seem to be going with this.
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  • From ANON - Liz on July 27, 2005
    Whaaa? what did you do with Veg/Chi's lemon moment? I WANT IT! :/ *sobs*
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  • From ANON - maccam on July 27, 2005
    Ok i like the revision but i do want a LEMON with chichi and vegeta PLEASE. I felt there was nothing wrong with the other way. so i guess will see...I love this story..
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 26, 2005
    *pulls at hair* That's just crazy and sad. Don't get me wrong, I loved the chapter, but.... @.@ AAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaahhhh. I am glad that they all switched spouses, now I want to know if this is finally the way it was meant to be.

    I hope you have plans on ellaborating on this story. I can see a lot of experimenting going on here: Depth of emotions being only one.

    I would really enjoy another chapter. In other words, Update! I'd like to know how exactly Bulma plans on making this up to Vegeta and Chichi, and if Vegeta and Chichi see a need for anything to be made up to them.
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