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Reviews for Once A Thief

By : Kali
  • From LadyEvansPotter on April 04, 2009
    Now, to begin with, let me congratulate you on being such a fantastic author. I loved the plot, and would very much love to read a sequel/epilouge to OAT, if you should ever write it. I will also admit that I love all your stories, as far as you're written to this day's date, in the Beyblade world. I've spent the three last days reading each and every one of them, and I LOVE them, just to have that said. I love your writing style, and really hope you will write more =)

    But, as this is a review, I feel I should review the story a bit more. So, even though this is a complete work, I just keep wondering. How will it be to Kai and Takao when they begin their "new" life back in Japan? Will Hiro ever accept Kai? Any mini-Takao or mini-Kai running around anytime? Will possible write more, but right now its waaay past my supposed bedtime :P

    Great writing, and I hope you will write more =)
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  • From ANON - Latronia Twilight on July 03, 2008
    *sighing lighlty i get on my hands and knees, my bangs covering my large eyes i bow before you and place my forhead on the floor* i'm sure...you dont' like me right now, or dont' even remeber who i am. i am here to give you a well over due apology but i never knew how to do it or say it. i was a child and am very sorry for upsetting you to the point of not allowing me to review you any longer. 8sighs and keeps my head bowed*

    i have grown and am much more mature then i was back then...i had been nieve and wanted my way all the time. i despritly seek your approval for the fac tthat i lok up to you. seeing that i was not able to tell you of yoru great work any longer put me on a small stage of sadness to teh point of not botehring to even go onto ff.net any longer. my stroies slowly stopped, and my drive to continue went downhill.

    i know it is much, but it is also true. reading yoru fics inspire me...they still inspire me. goign to college now in order to majore within english and french, i pray and ask for your forgiveness...i don't know what else to say...i woudl tell you who i am as of now..btu that woudl firghten me as to if you woudl read my apology or not.

    thank for reading...

    L.T.
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  • From Kiotana on June 29, 2008
    Hurray! *applause*
    Wonderful conclusion. Hiro is just gonna have to get used to Kai ^-^
    I loved it! I gives you a kiss! Mwah! >w<
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on June 28, 2008
    PERFECT ENDING!

    I definitely shed some tears. An epic end to an epic story. I loved it, absolutely loved it.

    I'll be on the look out for more stories :)
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  • From ANON - Drake294 on June 25, 2008
    This was great ^^

    I don´t think I have more to say...
    maybe wonderful...
    ... or fantastic... ^^°


    I just hope that you will write in any time another TyKa Story *smile*

    VIVA TYKA

    yours
    Drake294
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  • From SarahTaylor on June 24, 2008
    WOW!!! I love this story, my jaw nearly dropped when I saw the update and then the part where it said 'last chapter' nearly knocked me to the floor. It was a beautiful ending, Tyson regained his honor, he has his family back and he has Kai - which in my eyes is the most important part!! XD
    The bit where Kenny warned Tala was brill, even I was slightly scared of him.
    I look forward to reading more of your stories, you're just so good at writing them.
    Baroqueangel
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  • From ANON - Drake294 on May 13, 2008
    WOW...
    What a story - and sooo good ^^
    It took a while for me to read through all the chapters you wrote (7 hours or so) but now I can certainly say...
    I´m impressed!
    You wrote your story in a way I could almost see the characters in whatever they were doing in every chapter *blushes at the thought of the lemon parts*

    Ahem...

    Anyway I hope you continue this story soon and give Kai and Taka their vacation - maybe on the Isle of Fire? Takao has the Fabergé Egg to return to Kais parents. Thuthfully I´m looking forward to this part ^^

    yours
    Drake294



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  • From ANON - phoenixandashes on May 06, 2008
    O-M-G

    I've finally caught up.

    And I LOVE IT! Fantastic work - can't wait for some more :D Easily one of the best AU TyKa fics around (along with Majesty and Running Scared lol).
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  • From SarahTaylor on March 15, 2008
    Finally, I've finished reading it. Ok, I'll make this brief owing to the fact that it's really late, sorry early, and my eyes are starting to glaze over. Wow, I couldn't stop reading, I was determined to finish it no matter what. I love this story and if this is the end??? I'm glad it was a happy one, Takao and Kai deserved that. It kinda puts mine to shame. Thank you for posting it.
    Now it's time to sleep I think.
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  • From ANON - Baroqueangel on March 14, 2008
    I've managed to read 6 chapters in one night, yay. It's really really really good so far and I'd quiet happily sit here and read all of it but I've been up for 21 hours now and if I don't get some sleep I'm gonna look like a zombie. I'll read more tomorrow, it's so good I probably wont move until I've finished it all, thank you for writing such wonderful fan fiction.
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  • From ANON - Baroqueangel on March 14, 2008
    I knew it!!!!! How sad is this, I actually shouted that when I realised that Kai was one of the UNA guys. It could only be Takao as the theif. Right, that's chapter 1 read, now to read the rest. :)
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  • From Kiotana on February 18, 2008
    O.o OMG! Ish not the end! I love these secret mission fics! Steamy sex in some parts is o-so-sweet too! TYKA LIVES ON! Everything should be fine from this point on correct? Right?
    Ch.1-21
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on February 17, 2008
    Alright this is a review for ALL the Beyblade stories you have posted up so far. Be prepared it's gonna be big.

    Yami FireKali you are the queen of all that is TyKa! I bow and kiss your feet. Don't mind the drool, it could have just been from one of your mind-blowing lemons. Let's tackle one praise at a time shall we?

    Your writing style. Perfect. I love it. I absolutely don't mind when you make the POV changes from third person to first. It always works, all the time. Your stories are so eloquent and well put together it kind of makes me sad i'll never be as good of a writer. I can constantly feel the emotions of the characters just from the descriptions you write. The characters are portayed , sometimes not fully in character, but again it just works. The way they get angry, sad and happy makes the story come alive and so much more interesting for me and any other fan to read.

    Your originality. So creative. All your stories keep me on my toes. I especially like whenyou put them in an AU storyline. But even canon it's exciting. GOD DAMN it's good either way :) I love how Tyson, Kai and the rest of the gang can go through a completely different storyline and it still feels like they're a team. I love it absolutely love it. Write a book!

    Lastly, the lemons. Dear gods the lemons. Hot, ever so hot, they are always new and exciting. When i say exciting I mean salivating. How each and every lemon you write comes out *no pun intented* delicious and different from the last, I will never comprehend. They're sultry, sexy, and defnintely fantastic to read. You make all the fangirls happy. Especially chapter 17 of 'Once A Theif' Tyson and Kai...my favorite. Holy Gods! Anybody got a fan here?! I also like how you interchange who is seme and uke in Tyson's and Kai's lemons. Whoot way to go Kali!

    I'd like to thank you for writing so many stories even when you don't get enough reviews as you deserve. Your stories are hilarious, hot and exciting all rolled into one. I will go searching all my life and never, ever find and Beyblade TyKa writer as good as you.

    Please, please update soon for Once a Theif and also I'm looking foreward to more thrilling Tyka stories to come. It would be a sin not to write them ^_^ Ja! *Dances away*

    Beautifullove348
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  • From ANON - Lady Kirei on December 05, 2007
    THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER YET!!! Everything is going great with Takao and Kai and Rei has made an appreance in the story as well. I can't wait to see what happens next!! ttyl

    Lady Kirei ^_^
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  • From TechnoRanma on November 06, 2007
    *_*!! YAY TAKAO!! Oh I forgot to mention, the Tala/Hil stuff is pretty nicely written too... I don't think anyone else could convince me about these two characters like you.
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