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Reviews for The Alchemists Guide to Relationships Part 1: Lust

By : MissB
  • From ANON - Spamento on June 12, 2010
    I am loving this story! Your portray the characters in a realistic fashion and I love how the plot has a deeper meaning than most that I read on this site. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - shetland on October 25, 2008
    That was a very good fic, especially compared to most FMA fics.
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  • From ANON - Vocarin on January 08, 2007
    Wow... I'd have to say that of all the FMA fics I've read, this one is truly amazing. You caught Edward's personality spot on, as well as the rest of Mustang's crew. I also felt you definately put a realistic spin on Clara/Psiren, and I too got the feeling that there was more depth to her than was covered in the series.
    The story had what seemed to be a few aspects of foreshadowing, and though I think I can see where this is going, I'm really looking forward to seeing more of it. Your creativity in the plot was beautifully done and all very realistic given the circumstances.
    I can't say this enough; PLEASE update and post the rest of it soon, as I'm looking very forward to seeing where this goes and how it turns out.

    Vocarin
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  • From ANON - Vocarin on December 18, 2006
    I think you have a real gem here, and I sincerely hope that you do submit more to this story. You have the ground work for a real piece of work. I always wondered what Clara/Psiren would be like outside the thief context, and I think you portrayed her beautifully, and perfectly in character all things considered, anime-based and otherwise. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next, and dearly hope that you haven't forgotten about this series or given up. Keep up the excellent work.

    Vocarin
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  • From ANON - Lilia on November 24, 2005
    This is such a great story! I especially liked the Ed/Psiren action, there just aren't enough fics about that pairing out there, if you ask me. I hope she shows up in future parts, even though a lasting relationship between them doesn't seem very likely at this point. There seems to be some hinting at Ed/Winry, though, which is really good as well :D

    I just hope the next part will be up soon! I'm definitely bookmarking this link so I can keep tabs on this story.

    You're a great author, don't let the lack of reviews get you down (it's just shameful how lazy people are at reviewing, really).

    Off to check out the rest of your stories now :)
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  • From ANON - Yial on November 23, 2005
    Great story, please continue.
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  • From ANON - random person on October 30, 2005
    extremely great fic, and cant wait 4 part 2. this story rly changes the mood from most of the ones u read. its an awsome fic, and ur a great writer.
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  • From drake220 on October 21, 2005
    i have to say, i'm glad that Clara doesn't end up happy w/ Ed. It wouldn't have been as honest as the rest of the fic. Make sure when you update to say what this used to be called! Looking forward to more!!
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  • From ANON - TVO on October 17, 2005
    Aww...ultra sadness :( .

    Well I am a professional, so it makes sense that I would figure things out ;) .

    Now I'm not sure what direction you are heading in with this story. Is the Psiren/Ed pairing being discarded in favor of Ed/Winry? Hey, I'm all for Ed/Winry-ness! Anyway, I'm not sure but I'm more than excited to find out.

    Also I'm a little confused about what Ed did to Clara. Did he burn the array tattoo off her chest?

    Can't wait to see what you have planned with parts 2 and 3. Keep up the great work, and this fic rocks so far.
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  • From ANON - emerald on October 16, 2005
    Wow. The was beautifuly done. The pairing is one I rarley see but love all the same. I can't hardly wait for either the next chapter or part.
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  • From ANON - N/A on October 04, 2005
    I love reading this fic! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - TVO on September 29, 2005
    Chapter 4

    More hilarity with Mustang and his cronies and their frat humor picking on poor Ed.

    You really seem to have a tremendous grasp on the characters. The phone call scene with Winry is exactly how I'd imagine that scene playing out with such circumstances.

    Intriguing, something seems to be going on with Clara. What happened to her to make her seem so sad at the end of this chapter? Does she plan on stealing something and feels bad for once again betraying Ed now that they have grown so close? Ed seems to be putting a lot of trust in her, so I hope they can learn to trust and love one another together.

    Great story and hope to see you continue it.

    I really think people should be reading this fic more, because once again you don't find that many FMA fanfics that are this well written.
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  • From ANON - TVO on September 29, 2005
    Chapter 3

    Alright, some more beautiful and greaty, fluffy scenes between Clara and Ed.

    Love the material between Ed and his military peers scheming against him. Hilarious when Ed threatened to use alchemy against them.

    I also hope the book Clara was reading earlier in chapter 2 wasn't foreshadowing of things to come :( .

    Great story so far and keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - TVO on September 29, 2005
    Another great chapter. I love this pairing. It seems supremely rare to find a M/F Fullmetal Alchemist pairing let a lone a well written one like yours.

    Great scene between Clara and Ed. It wasn't sleazy or dirty at all it was very erotic and beautiful.
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  • From ANON - TVO on September 29, 2005
    I'm sorry to hear you aren't getting a lot of reviews for this fic because I think its great. Its well written and you aren't going for the ridiculous and seemingly endless amounts of yaoi pairings. So thank you and please continue it!

    I love how you've started things, while I love the anime and movie, I like your premise with Ed's in his homeworld but still has his automail limbs. He's lonely and still a state alchemist. He seems to lack the purpose and direction he felt he had when he went on his journey with Al.

    Great first chapter.
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