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Reviews for Alluring Darkness

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - defy definition on January 26, 2006
    i'm so glad someone decided to do another brooklynxkai fic!!!
    it's sOoOOOooOOo good. much better than my attempt!!!

    please update soon



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  • From Saigamiro on January 25, 2006
    "I was swept into the dark heart of the wilderness..." Haru's line about getting lost in the woods for 3 days. Mystel written all over it. I never actually thought that he could just be LOST. Did he actually say he was on his way to Japan when he first met Rei? Maybe... *doesn't remember*

    Filler chapter: still good. It wasn't boring, just not as... 'interesting' as chapter five. But I mean, what can you do to top that, right? XP. We need more Hitoshi anger. XD. *wants to see Hitoshi suffer* Bwahahaha, suffer. His suffering, suffer Takao's big brother, weep and shed tears for Kai is not yours, bwahaha! *O_O;; Underdog mp3 is playing now. scary.*

    Chapter nine! Chapter nine! CHAPTER NINE!

    ~*KA*~
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  • From ANON - Kairan Akiyama on January 24, 2006
    YAY GARLAND! *hugs Garland* Stand up for Brooklyn, yay! ^^ *cheers* But Rei, man... O O;;; *ears flatten and hides behind Garland* Mad Rei is SCARY!

    ~*KA*~
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  • From ANON - Kairan Akiyama on January 23, 2006
    Ah, the review cut off after the shocked face O[]O. wtf? anyway...

    Brooklyn was playing solitaire! oO; In a room filled with other boys. Strange thought... having to play solitaire when there's boys almost EVERYWAY. *gets Brooklyn something to ah, clean his hand better than a handkerchief* Might wanna use some soap, buddy. ._.; And Kai's like "what the hell?! he fucking kissed me!" and *whoosh*, hauls ass. *wants to hug Kai* Oh, I have something for Hitoshi too *stabs him w/ something pointy repeatedly* Go away, Kai doesn't like you like that! DDDXXX!!! die die, go away. Xopying and paste 6 & 7 tomo. Make more chapters!

    ~*KA*~
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  • From ANON - Kairan Akiyama on January 23, 2006
    couldn't think of a decent response for chap. 4*

    O[]O
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  • From ANON - Kairan Akiyama on January 21, 2006
    Clever clever Brooklyn. This fix is making me like Brooklyn again. I wonder if I still that fight ep. recorded somewhere....

    Slumber party (er, sleep-over) whee! I might have to change pairing favourites now, xp. Forgot to add this to chap 2 review: Kai-watching...best thing EVER.

    Now to copy/paste the rest. yay! *does a happy dance*

    ~*KA*~
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  • From ANON - Kairan Akiyama on January 21, 2006
    Correction: only 49 pages. Still can't print it all though. ;_;

    YAY, FINISHED CHAPTER TWO! I want Rei to cook for me, dammit. Then I'd have food at my house. ^^ *needs food*

    I noticed how in his inner-musings, Kai is quick to repeat several times over how is afraid of no one except for Boris (and Brooklyn now), but said "Rei? You are scaring me." rather quickly. ^^ Quick spelling erorr, it said 'hose' when you meant 'house'. ^^ S'kay. Anyway, I wonder what kind of food Rei can cook? Is he like, cook from scratch cook or cook from a box and instruction manual cook? *wonders* ON TO CHAPTER THREE! XD!

    ~*KA*~
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  • From ANON - Kairan (again) on January 21, 2006
    Copied and pasted first 3 chapters. 59 pages in Microsoft Word. O__o;;; Yeah, can't print that much. Thusly I shall be sav-eded for reading at my leisure. Will review chappies 2 & 3 properly when they are read. ^^;; Gomen ne.

    ~*KA*~ ::it's 12:50, time 4 sleep::
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  • From ANON - Kairan Akiyama on January 21, 2006
    It's 12:30 am here... so I can't read it all.... but I am copying/pasting & printing, yus! XD. Skimmed it. Found dialogue and read. I love the phasology you use for the opening sequence. Super-awesome phrases "shattered peace and ruined night", "eating the light"; fucking awesome. I wish I came across this fix so long ago, it hurts. I just want to sit on my roof and gaze at the night, enjoying it from without rather than staring through the window now.

    Now to copy and paste the other chapters for reading at work! VICTORY!

    If this is the only Brooklyn/Kai fix I find (since I cast Kai as seme because he's badass like that), I'm happy to have found it. ^^

    ~*KA*~ ::12:36 now::
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  • From ANON - MM2 on January 19, 2006
    AAww... That was a beautiful and wonderful chapter. I would like to enjoy another of your chapters soon.
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  • From ANON - Boys-on-Boysenberry on January 19, 2006
    Pardon me while I glomp you.
    *glomp*
    This is story has me completely hooked. Everyday I check, with bated breath, to see if there is a new chapter.
    Absolutely wonderful. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anna on January 18, 2006
    This really is sad and I am so happy you updated!!!!!!!!! ^__^ thanx so much!!!! Anyway hope you update again and you really did a great job on chapter seven!!!!!! Anyway bye!!!
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  • From ANON - j.s. on January 18, 2006
    i avent checked dis story since chapter 4
    itss sooo gud
    and even though things change, u manage 2 keep da people in character
    kai...*sniff sniff* he has 2 get 2gether wit brooklyn.....
    update soon
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  • From ANON - one-T on January 18, 2006
    I love this fick! One of the best I read here.
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  • From ANON - SplitPersona on January 18, 2006
    You know, it almost sounds as if Kai has carpol tunnel. I know it doesn't go with the psychological trauma, but carpol tunnel comes from constant repetative strain on your hands. It can cause the nerves and muscles in your hands and wrists to collapse, making it extremely painful and hard to function with your hands. Usually it occurs with people who type alot or use their hands alot to move things. If you think about it, with alot of the ripcord pulling, beybladers could also be potential victims of carpol tunnel. Kai, with his constant training and the extreme stress from his battle, would be one of those most likely to get it.

    Medical jumbo aside, I LOVED this chapter. Tala/Kai moment!!! And Brooklyn is finally coming to understand his feelings and how his actions affect Kai. Poor Kai. You will torture him before this is all over right? Just so that we get more Tala/Kai and Brooklyn/Kai moments? Lots of tender care for Kai! ^_^
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