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Reviews for Alluring Darkness

By : Cepheus
  • From ANON - KamiaKotai on December 29, 2005
    Hey,

    Another great chapter, Rei is so cute getting all obsessive over Mystel. You are right Brooklyn is cool, very cool infact. Dranzer died? I thought she ended up coming back in the end? Anyway I can't wait for your next chapter. Catcha' later.

    -Kami
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on December 29, 2005
    Hey great story. It's really detailed. Garland's hair is a greyish silver. He always has it up in a low ponytail as well. His eyes are a bluish silver colour. Quite lovely actually. Looking forward to reading more. Though I wish Tyson and Tala could get together. Love that pairing and haven't seen a full story with them in it. Do you think you could add them in your story? You'd be a real star if you could. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - KamiaKotai on December 28, 2005
    I love your fic it's so good! Tala is so cute I absolutely adore him! Hey I was wondering, what is the name of Brooklyn's attack in the Italian version? Oh and you made a little mistake here....

    He’d been sure about beating him, defeating him again, mortifying him and banishing him into the shadows… but as the match continued Brooklyn found himself more and more troubled by the way the crimson HAIRED teen’s reacted.

    Did you mean Crimson Eyed? Anyway if not then sorry for bugging you! Oh and garlands hair is silver and I think his eyes are bluish-sliver but not sure on the eyes. Sorry. Anyway can't wait for your update. Catcha' later.

    -Kami

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  • From ANON - SplitPersona on December 28, 2005
    Poor Kai. He just can't get a break, can he? Brooklyn is stalking him, his friends are crazy and now he has two of them living with him. Oh well, all the better. Garland has grey/blue hair and I think either grey eyes or golden eyes. I can't remember exactly its been so long. Oh, how will Brooklyn go about capturing the attention of our elusive Phoenix? We know neither will give in without a fight.

    I think the Italian version is sexier, too. Kai as the King of Darkness? Oooh. *shivers* Love it! Will Brooklyn be able to tame him? I hope so! I also like the thought of ReiMystel. You could kinda see something going on there during the anime with those two. Which owuld explain why Rei is so afraid of Mariah's attention. I would love to see the normally serene Mystel jealous over someone else staking claim on Rei. It would be very cute. Now, I can't wait for the next chapter. You are a wonderful write and your works are just too great not to love. Not to mention the whole uke-Kai thing. (Long live UKE!Kai!!) ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kanilla on December 27, 2005

    Gomen, but I wouldn`t know how to answer your urgent questions*>
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  • From ANON - LillyLazer666 on December 27, 2005
    ...pouty Tala? Fangirl Rei? confused Kai? Obessed Brooklyn? dude! You got this fic going down! Hurry up and finish, I wanna see how this ends!
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  • From ANON - Virpi on December 19, 2005
    I love this! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - SplitPersona on December 18, 2005
    You are my hero!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I bow to you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I have been waiting to see a Brooklyn/Kai fic ever since their final battle in GRevolution. I was surprised for a while that no one else saw everything I did, particularly Kai-fans. Brooklyn was just a little TOO obsessed with Kai by the end. He was the first blader who wanted to get through TYSON to get to Kai rather than the other way around. That just says something to me.

    Beautiful writing. I love how Kai continued to deny his fear of Brooklyn and Zeus until the very end and would ONLY admit that he feared him because of Black Dranzer. And Brooklyn...sexy, sly and SO after Kai. My favorite Beyblade-uke has a lot coming his way. Kai is such a great uke. The best ones are the ones that refuse to accept that they are uke. ^_^ Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ariala on December 17, 2005
    Yay, a Brooklyn/ kai fic there aren`t much fics of this pairing. Really like the story. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Umi-chii on December 16, 2005
    ....I can't believe you end it there! O_O;; You must update, hun!! I say you must!! >.< Come on! I know that you know that I know that you know that BrookiexKai is teh best of all!! *worship teh fluffehness of BrookiexKai and Uke-Kai* ....XD
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  • From ANON - Kanilla on December 15, 2005
    Oh please do update again! I was delighted to find a Brooklyn/Kai fanfiction in this place(there aren`t too many of them around after all), so I eagerly started reading. And I`ll openly admit that your style of writing is simply really poetic and beautiful. I really like how you describe Kai`s feelings, and I can`t wait for them to get further!

    Yours sincerly
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