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Reviews for The More I Learn to Care For You: Ed's POV

By : squallstorm

From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on November 30, 2009
^_^ Ah! This fic is pure win! :D Just knowing that Roy and Ed are going to try and get back together makes me so very happy!! The part where Ed was calling Winry a bitch made me laugh so much! The girl ain't right sometimes; the name fits perfectly! LOL! I'm now very (im)patiently waiting for the next chapter and Roy and Ed's reunion! :) They'll make it this time! I just know it! *cough*hopeless romantic*cough* :D
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From ANON - radcat38 on February 18, 2009
Just read chapter 11 Roy's and then Ed's POV and am very happy. Still not sure how this will go and know our boys need to grow a little more but am happy that they are on their way. And they are really talking to each other!! THAT is a definite good sign. Winry does love to be mean to poor little Ed but such is their relationship. Hope this new part to Ed and Roy's relationship will keep on working. Wonder what will happen when Ed finds out what has really been happening to Roy after the car accident. His demotion, his classes, the way others treat Roy will all come as a shock to Ed but I think Ed will get through it but will his guilt complex kick in. Hope this new relationship works...but living together is always a learning experience (and not always a good one) especially when one needs medical help and the other is not used to it and need his own. Also loved the allusion to the forked and hissing tongue...good one.
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on February 16, 2009
I kinda had to chuckle in the beginning here when Ed first woke up you said he was "groggery". :) At first, I didn't think that was even a word but it turns out that it is indeed a real word. I think the word you wanted tho was "groggy" as "groggery" is a seedy bar! LOL The Rockbells are working Ed awfully hard (even if it is for his own good) so he's earned the right to be as snarky as he wants with them! Especially Winry! jeez! hormonal much? :) Beating poor Ed up like that just because he wouldn't gossip with her after she had the nerve to bring him milk! nosy and psycho! I LOL'd when Ed called her a bitch! so true! XDD

I liked the way Roy and Ed sent their letters on the military's dime! :D cheapskates! LOL! I read zakai's part of this fic first so I had to used Ed's code to figure out what he said to Roy. If I'd known to read your part first, I wouldn't have had had to do that! :D Meh, it was fun using a code system I hadn't seen, used, or even thought about in ages! :) It made me very happy to see Roy and Ed talking to one another again. Sometimes it's a bit hard to tell which one of them is more miserable. Ed's pain at the moment is mostly physical but Roy is dealing with emotional/psychological pain. One's just as bad as the other if not worse. :( I couldn't believe, after all he'd been thru, that Roy would drink while taking pain pills! O_O! WTF is he thinking?!? It's a thousand wonders it didn't kill him. He's lucky all he did was write pervy stuff in Ed's letter. :) I can't wait for Roy to get to Risembool so he and Ed can finally, FINALLY, talk to one another! :D
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From ANON - Briryan on February 12, 2009
Great chapter. Can't wait to read how the meeting between Roy and Ed will go.
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From IrishMoon7 on January 22, 2009
I feel kinda silly because this is pretty much the same review I gave the other story, but who cares anyway? A review's a review right? I just wanted to say that I really love this story. I think the characterization is great, and the plot is very immersing. I really hope that you two haven't abandoned these! Keep up the awesome work! Please?
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From ANON - Briryan on November 12, 2008
Great chapter. Loved Ed and Roy's first moment together. And really they kinda have Al to thank for that. Can't wait to read how the phone call Ed will make to Roy goes.
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From SarahTaylor on November 11, 2008
There first date was kinda sweet XD
Nice update, look forward to the next one.
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From DuosAngel on September 07, 2008
Aw man, I was hoping this was finished when I started it. Then again, I'm glad it isn't finished. This is without a doubt the absolute best FMA fic I've ever read. I can't wait for the next chapter! It's just so perfect! Please update again soon!
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From yellow22 on September 01, 2008
ch 1-9 great story. Please continue.
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From Icynow on July 07, 2008
It would seem that since I last came by to check your updates that the site now sorts categories. I love your stuff by the way.
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From SarahTaylor on May 26, 2008
I can't believe I didn't bother reading this before, what was I thinking???!!! This is so good, I love the way you have the two points of view. I can't imagine it's easy and it probably takes a lot of time to do just one chapter but I'm so glad you take the effort 'cos this is amazing.
I keep reading one chapter of yours and then one of zakai's so I can get the full picture without reading the two stories seperately, it's taken me a long time just to get through the 9 chapters here and 8 so far of the other but I just couldn't stop reading it's that good.
I hope you manage to update soon 'cos I can't wait to see what happens to Ed when he gets back home. Oh and I think I'd prefer the wrench to having my hair pulled!!
Ok gotta go read chapter 9 from Roy's POV.
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From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on February 12, 2008
*sigh* I meant to leave this review days ago but, obviously, I didn't. I really have no excuse. I got so frustrated trying to leave one for zakai (AFF kept chopping off and not posting what I wrote) that I put it off 'til it got ridiculous. What is it they say? The road to hell is paved with good intentions? *sigh* I'm so going to hell if that's true... :(

"Divergence is great XD Now, we almost have too different stories, but still the same" hmm. Just so long as this doesn't diverge too much I'll be happy. :) Roy and Ed have got to get back together soon right? right?? *sigh* Yeah, I really feel for Ed now. It's kinda funny, as in ironic, that Ed can't remember what happened to him just before and during the accident and I myself am a bit hazy on the details as well. :) I really should go back and reread some of this so I can remember just what made Roy so mad at Ed to begin with. I don't remember Ed doing anything that bad really. Anything he did do was done unintentionally I'm sure. You make me wanna cry and snuggle Ed while he struggles with how awful Roy is treating him! Ed calling out for Roy as he walks away from him without a backwards glance, heart breaking. stupid Roy! ;_; I mean seriously. How much of a jerk can Roy be by still insisting on breaking up with Ed while he's still in hospital! sheesh! Roy could at least wait until Ed is well and whole again to have this discussion. Pompous ass trying to tell Ed what he should or should not feel and who he should or should not be with! hmmph! So much for treating Ed like an adult and letting him make adult decisions! :P

It was funny when Ed almost cracked that nurse in the head with the IV pole! "Touch that line, and I won't be held accountable." :D Now that's the Ed I know and love! Leave it to Ed to cause mayhem everywhere he goes! XD Him blaming his tears on the drugs as funny too! :) He doesn't want to admit that he's crying because he's so in love so he has to blame it on the drugs! It's so sweet! :) Shame Roy can't see it tho. *sigh* hard-headed idiot. :(

I do love Ed's never say die spirit tho! "You're in for it when I get outta here, you know that right? I'm not going to let you outta my sight. You know all that determination I had for Al? Well, that's all on you now." *evil grin* Oh yes! Roy won't know what hit him! :D I'm especially anxious to see how Ed reacts when he opens his bag and finds that book in there. That will surely encourage him even more! There really is nothing more frustratingly boring than being alone in a hospital. hmm. Well, if nothing else, Ed now has plenty of time to plan the perfect date that will bring them back together!! Go Ed!! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
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From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2007
i love it please put some another chappies on kikiko! please please please!
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From ANON - Megan on October 04, 2007
AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON! Plz? I'll be your best friend ^_^
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From on September 19, 2007
damnit, roy needs to just fess up (cuddles confused ed). at least ed's more honest with his feelings (and he's suppose to be the inexperienced one). continue to great job (off to read zakai's side).
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