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By : nomdeplume
  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on February 20, 2008
    O_O! So Roy WAS talking about himself a few chapters back when he mentioned the double standard involved in rape cases! Ed: "But it's rape". Roy: "So few see it that way". *wibbles* I thought it odd at the time that Roy would mention a young boy being pressured into having sex by an older woman when that clearly had nothing to do with Ed's situation but it makes sense now. This is why he's able to reach Ed and understand him when the others can't. This is what Ed is picking up on that makes him feel like he can trust in and rely on Roy. They're both survivors. wow. Poor Roy. Just one more thing for him to have nightmares about. *snuggles Roy* I'm guessing that the clothes Roy threw in that lake were the ones he was wearing when his rape occurred. They were/are like Ed's hair, something that had to go. ;_;

    O_o? WTF is Olivier's deal? scary. I'm afraid for Havoc! :) I bet he's never "dated" a girl like this one before! LOL!! Ok, check this out! When I first saw her name I immediately thought of the cover of volume 17 of the manga so now that is how I picture your Olivier. I haven't read that far ahead in the manga but are they one and the same? If so, it's nice to have a visual reference for this character! If not, oops, oh well! :) Also, Olivier makes me think of Sir Laurence Olivier so I'm pronouncing her name like his. [Could this review get any more random?? jeez.]

    *giggles* Al's kissing Riza!! :) I am suddenly reminded of skydark's story (which totally rocked btw!! w00t! :D sorry. another random moment there.). Riza is a much better match for Al than Winry is any day of the week if you ask me. I like 'em together. Don't know if you intend to do anything with them but I think they're cute together! No where near as good as RoyEd mind you but still cute! :) It's so sweet how close Roy and Ed are! You have me wondering just how much closer they will become! :)
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From alleycat88 on February 20, 2008
    Wow.....wow....just wow. alot happened in this chapter. Ok....woo. Please update soon!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on February 20, 2008
    SWEET! Olivier! I fucking lover her! And I always thought out of Mustang's Group Havoc would be her type!
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  • From irishd1988 on February 19, 2008
    I Crave It. I Want It. I Love It. I NEED It!!!

    Please, (PRETTY PLEASE!)
    HURRY and update SOON!

    I'm DYING for more!...More!!...MORE!!!
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  • From Kuragari75 on February 08, 2008
    O.O WHAT A BITCH!!! that bastard!!!! Roy figures something out right? RIGHT?! hope so... WAITING TO READ MORE!!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on February 06, 2008
    *Stares at screen with big eyes*

    OH! I've been PWN'D by plot!

    Awsome!


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  • From alleycat88 on February 05, 2008
    Oh no! that bastard! how will Ed get through this one!?
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  • From radcat on February 05, 2008
    Just read chapters 8 and 9. Your story just keeps getting better and more interesting. Of course I always love all your work. Poor Ed and Roy and the whole FMA gang. I cannot wait until the truth about Anton comes out. You know Ed will remember and piece it all together and then Breda will nail him. Side note: Pinako running around out of her mind clad only in a bra and panties...this imagery does not leave the mind quickly. I like how you added dialogue between Roy and Riza from the end of the anime into this story before Roy does his striptease. Gives a whole new dimension and twist to what he really meant in the anime. Is Fuery going to end up with Havor, Riza with Al, and Ed with Roy? This is so much fun. The angst is not fun but it is interesting and thought provoking. Thanks for updating.
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  • From miirage on February 05, 2008
    OK so chapter nice was a fun read. The only think I can say is you need longer chapters, and more of them :) Too much suspense! Poor little Ed have gotta get back on his feet.
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  • From miirage on January 30, 2008
    This is a fun read :) Let Roy cuddle Ed a little will you! He needs it.
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on January 29, 2008
    Damn. Just when you think things are looking up, the bottom drops out. Since Anton here, the prosecutor from hell, is also an alchemist, he's bound to try and drag everything he can out of Ed. Poor guy never catches a break. :( I gotta hand it to ya, the mental image of Pinako running around in her underwear is hysterical! XD Oh! My eyes! ROFL! Roy in his underwear however is quite delicious! YUM! :) That line Roy said about the world being so beautiful and touching Riza's hair came straight from the anime didn't it. Yeah, it fits for Roy to do that when he's high as a kite on meds! :) I think Ed feels a bit better about his relationship with Roy (if you can even call it that) now that he knows Al is cool with the idea of 2 guys being together. He's free to get as close to Roy as he can without being afraid of Al rejecting him. I'm so totally assuming Ed even wants to be with Roy when the poor boy doesn't know what he wants about anything. :( It was really sweet of the guards who took Roy and Ed home to tell them about the listening devices and what they could and couldn't do. They still have some allies here and there tho what more they can do for Roy and Ed seems limited. I had to smile when Roy thought about transmuting the bars into "ghastly decorative features"! I remembered in the manga when Ed had to fix a balcony that was destroyed during a battle with Scar and he remade it into some ghastly gothic design that the lady who owned the balcony didn't really like but thanked him for his work anyway! Ed does have a thing for dragons and gargoyles so maybe Ed will appreciate Roy's handiwork if he does change the bars! :D
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From Loquora on January 27, 2008
    I really love this fiction. The way Roy really cares about Ed gets to me, in a good way. I can't wait to see more!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on January 23, 2008
    aww..crap!(in reference to that last part) Anton is a really good villian. And that bit about Pinako was just hilarious!
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  • From ANON - chelzi on January 23, 2008
    okay... i'm not sure where this is going to go, but i'll just have to wait and find out! i can see (though maybe i'm just looking too hard) inklings of alxriza, which really amuses me and i would love to see them play out. that stupid anton dude is...grrr. i don't like him. anyway, i'm really tired and don't know what i'm saying. please update soon!!~
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  • From alleycat88 on January 23, 2008
    Damnit...the lawyer IS an alchemist! thanks for updating!
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