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By : nomdeplume
  • From radcat on January 20, 2008
    Good chapter 6 and 7. I think you are handling everything realistically (spelling?) especially Al's take on Winry. Just because it will not work out between Ed and Winry Al is not the logical second choice. Who knows what the future will hold but right now this is Al's truth and view point. I am worried about what these JAG lawyers will do to hide their evil acts. The FMA crew are in for a bumpy ride. Keep up the good work.
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  • From yeagerbomb on January 19, 2008
    no ed!! don't withdraw! reach out! REACH OUT!!!!! *growls* damnit. well, he's getting better, just a little at a time. hope to see more soon!~
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  • From yeagerbomb on January 18, 2008
    ...i'm confused. i don't quite understand what was going on at the end of the story, but i was half zoned-out for the last half, so i'm not entirely surprised. but! i liked al's attitude of not being a consolation prize. how about riza? i think he could be cute with riza. anyway, keep writing!! i look forward to more!~
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  • From alleycat88 on January 18, 2008
    woot another chapter! nice one too! I'm so mad at them being arrested! WTF? People are so stupid sometmes! update soon!
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  • From ANON - MaryLover on January 16, 2008
    Oh, how I love new challenges, and you have your dare in writing this challenging fic.
    Politics are non-easy issues to plot, all those conspirations and stuff around are simply exciting.
    And, I like the fact more people are involved in this, that is Al and Riza, I mean, all other fics I read refering Bradley's death topic only take Roy as a suspect and don't go further. I look forward to reading your ideas.
    Are you finally putting Ed and Roy together in the same place under house arrest? uhm... well, I don't know, but before give my opinion let's read your thoughts first.
    bye
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  • From LadyRonin on January 16, 2008
    this is is really good story and i really like the premise for it. will this be a royxed pairing or someelse. will you pair up their father with someone (riza). if al is no longer interested in winry will he hook up with someone (havoc or cain i am not particular i love them with al the same). i can't wait to see the next update.
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  • From yeagerbomb on January 07, 2008
    *squeal* i... uh, i don't know... poor ed, he's so upset. well, he's not exactly upset anymore, he's just depressed. *sigh* and the alxwin angle that is starting to possibly surface always intrigues me. i can't stand edxwin, but i love alxwin, so... yeah, i don't know what'll happen there. anyway, i completely lost my train of thought. actually, i never had a train in mind, i'm just typing what i think to type. so... i'll stop now, i suppose. i hope to see more, so be sure to keep writing!!~
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  • From ANON - MaryLover on January 07, 2008
    omg I can't believe I was out of this world for so long! so many chapters written and I wasn't here to read!!!
    but now I'm back.

    My eyes were like plates when I read about Al's added age, you have to have your reasons for that and the fact Hohenheim is alive and Envy is at the Gate... I still don't understand it, but again, you must have your reasons.

    Yawn... this is getting... kind of boring... are they staying there longer? okay I know you have no idea how it'd continue and this is not an adventure fic but I think they should take separate paths some time later.

    I liked the part when Ed asked the nurses to cut his hair, his own decision after obeying and obeying and obeying before. And his self-destruction feelings made me nod from my chair, yes, he's a person in despair and doesn't think of what Mustang said about he's somebody who's worth it.
    Uhm... many steps to make one after the other... sighs... good fic as always. Take care

    MaryLover
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  • From radcat on January 07, 2008
    Chapter 5/I think you are doing a fine job of showing the time and hard work it takes to try and recuperate from mental and physical damage. Poor Ed and Roy and all the rest of those that care for them. Poor Al...sometimes he feels left out of Ed and Winry's life. At least Ed is starting to make decisions on his own. It is a start. Poor Roy. He is still haunted. Roy saves Ed from torture and he is still being investigated as a war criminal. What is up with that?! No wonder he is angry and still haunted by nightmares. Hope Ed can help him with the nightmares and everything else. If Ed and Roy end up together will Winry and Al turn towards each other? Will Winry decide that she actually loves Al not Ed? Well the last two feel like soap opera questions and will or will not be answered in the future of this story. Please continue. Would like to see where you go with this. Good work. (Still can't believe that Envy acknowledges that Ed is his brother and is unable to stay and watch Ed's brutalization but yet does absolutely nothing to stop it. Had to get that off my chest.)
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  • From alleycat88 on January 07, 2008
    everybody always underestimates Ed...he is really stronger than he looks! *thumbs up* Way to get em Ed! Nice chapter...it shows everyone's views on the whole incident and the way they feel now. Update soon!
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  • From alleycat88 on January 02, 2008
    *gasp* You cut his hair off! Oh....nice chapter. Thanks for updating
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  • From yeagerbomb on January 02, 2008
    auugh! great chapter, just kinda short. poor ed... it's so sad. i cry now. *cries* stupid hoho-papa, upsetting ed. he shall be punished!! (no he won't; it's not his fault) anyway, great job, please update soon!!~
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  • From radcat on December 31, 2007
    Just discovered your story and had to read all 4 chapters in one sitting. I think you are doing a good job. Poor Ed. It is so tragic that Al becames a healthy 19 yr old by moving up in age and their father is healed all by the P. stone but poor Ed is not so lucky. He becomes an abused broken boy. So sad. I think you are handling all the elememts of your story well. Funny that it takes all of this including his own trauma to make Roy come out of hiding and truely show concern and caring for Ed. Cannot wait for the next installment. Happy New Year.
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  • From Kuragari75 on December 31, 2007
    very good i love it!!!! please update soon ^^!
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  • From ANON - Maara on December 31, 2007
    Ah! Wonderful so far. While I'm not usually a fan of torture for its own sake, the setting it creates is perfect for hurt/comfort bonding. Will we get to see Mustang holding Ed's hand through an exam next???
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