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  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2015
    OMGerrrd oh no he didn't!
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  • From AnandaEronel on April 20, 2011
    This... this was awesome!! Took me most of a day to get through all of the story, what with interruptions and all, but it was quite mesmerizing. You did an amazing job of coming up with a unique -- yet believable -- storyline for this. The ending made me happy. *shuffles off to read more*
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  • From ANON - The Lady Meow on December 01, 2009
    Congratulations! You've been rec'd!

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  • From ANON - passing on September 22, 2009
    Ok, now you simply MUST write an epilogue! It would be an injustice if you didn't, and I just have to see how they all interact as a family. Thanks for this, its one of the very few fanfics that I've read the whole way through.
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  • From MustangsHavoc on August 11, 2009
    To bad Riza didn't kill the bitch! Those last three chapter I just got to read were so thrilling! I can't wait to see how this concludes it's been awesome!
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  • From ANON - eli on August 11, 2009
    Oh my god! I cant believe this! Thank you so much! There's really nothing better than reading 3 new chapters in one sitting. This more than makes up for your absence. Why aren't more people reviewing this story? I admit, I haven't reviewed once till now, but I have your page bookmarked and I checked everyday for updates so i think its worth saying how much I appreciate your stories and how much I love your writing. I'm so glad Liam's okay. I hope Karen's dead. Or at least alive so they could do experiments on HER, though I doubt Roy would allow that on account of their son. Anyway, I can't wait till they make up. I'll be checking TWICE a day until then! Hope life isn't as harsh for you that it would deprive you of finishing this wonderful story. That would be a waste.
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  • From ANON - passingthrough on August 06, 2009
    Sigh....I guess she's dead....
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  • From MustangsHavoc on June 16, 2009
    oOo.....what is the crazy lady up too? Is she emassing an army of chimeras or something? I'm scared almost to find out!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on June 16, 2009
    I'm sorry I haven't reviewed the last few chapters!I have been a bad fangirl!

    I love this story! Your writing allways keeps me on my toes! Karen being in the background, not being sure if she is still up to something or not, adds such a wonderful element of suspense!
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  • From ANON - Miko on June 06, 2009
    Ahh ok. That's a very interesting talent in my opinion lol. When I try writing things without a somewhat detailed outline it ends up allll sorts of confusing :)

    Yay, two chapters! :D I like how mature Ed is. The fact that he's trying to fix things even though none of it was his fault is a testament to how much he's grown up. Karen on the other hand is just messed up. Poor Roy and poor Liam. I hope she doesn't hurt him =/

    By the way, is "the lieutenant" from the livejournal chapter ever going to have a name?? I like him :)
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  • From SarahTaylor on May 28, 2009
    I am still loving this story. I can't wait to see what Roy and Ed do to Karen because I really want them to torture her just a little.

    And when will Roy get his head out of his ass and be a man?? Just apologise and ask him to come back already, he wants to!!

    Oh and I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner, I tend to find the updates right before I need to sleep and forget to review later ^^;

    I look forward to the next chapter XD
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  • From ANON - Erika on May 18, 2009
    Well, Miko was right! This is such a great story. I simply cannot wait to see how things unfold between Roy and Ed now that all of this has passed... But after reading that last chapter I was thinking about possible ways the story could end... and i realized that you could totally crush all of our hearts, if you were that evil lol.

    The most horrific ending I can think of would be that Karen would somehow go on a rampage and capture Ed, and then something would happen and he would die all alone and forced into submittance due to threats on a certain someone's life in some situation where Ed would see no other way out except to sacrifice his own life (perhaps buying time for a military unit to locate and take down Karen for good... poor Ed...). And then Roy would never ever get to tell Ed how much he still cared for him and that he was sorry and everything. And then Roy would be more depressed and upset than ever, possibly wishing that he could just follow his love into death, but being forced to live on for Liam's sake, always regretting his actions towards Ed and longing to see him again....... Gah, I depress myself... Why oh why must I have such a cynical mind??? T__T ....... PLEASE DON'T LET THE STORY END LIKE THAT!!!
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  • From ANON - Adel on May 09, 2009
    yaaaaay for new chapters!!! boo for bad internet service... That last chapter was great! i'm glad that i FINALLY got to read it! *kicks computer many many many times* ... ancient desktop computers and dial up just don't mix....
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  • From ANON - Miko on May 07, 2009
    Oh yeah, I've been meaning to ask something. Do you just make the story up as you go along, or do you already have it outlined in your head?? Like do you already know how you want to end it and such? I think this story is incredibly well planned out, even if it happens to be written with no clearly defined outline, and also greatly detailed in relation to the characters personalities and relationships. You're doing a wonderful job! I've enjoyed this fic more than any other that I've read on this site before, and I've come across what I though were some darn good stories in the past so that's saying something lol.
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  • From ANON - Miko on May 07, 2009
    Yaaay! Everything is coming together so nicely :) The fact that Roy has the whole karma thing in his head makes a lot of sense, but I hope he can get over it! I really want Ed and Roy to work things out and get back together, but it's gonna take a lot of work on Roy's part to make it happen I think. He had not given near as much to their relationship as Ed had, and if he keeps that up I see a big problem :( I feel bad for Roy, but at the same time I hope this serves as somewhat of an eye opener for him. Repent and ye shall be saved!!!! lol.

    As for Ed, he must be in sooo much pain! Goodness, that was terrible for him. The comment about his automail always straining his body makes me very sad too. I hate that :( But I guess that really can't be helped. I just want to hug him :3 And it would be so cute if Ed could spend more time with Liam! That isn't likely to happen unless he and Roy make up or unless he has some sort of excuse like the day Liam was bored and stuck in the office, but still it would be cute. In any case, I'll be looking forward to what happens next! :D
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