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Reviews for Mirrors of Yesterday

By : ZaKai
  • From deushi on November 23, 2008
    I like how the story is laced with the phrase, "Life doesn't always go your way."

    It's realistic and it tears at you, but in a way it's also fulfilling. Through adversity humanity still has such tenacity. And if Ed dies I could live with that (though it is strongly hinted that he lives). Life has that beautiful love and loss quality. That's why I truly appreciate the uncertainty of the ending. Not labeling it either a happy or sad finale.

    Beautiful story.
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  • From ANON - light on August 05, 2008
    that was beautiful and well written all the little details made life in the story seem real and it was a heavy story (emotionally). lol i enjoyed reading it it gave life some perspective
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  • From ANON - Keiko on July 29, 2008
    Wow! Beautiful story! Just the kind that I like too. Nice and angsty and bittersweet. I loved it. This is going in my favorite fanfic folder. This is the best FMA fanfic that I have ever read.
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  • From Gnome on July 28, 2008
    Thank you for the story. It was very moving and showed a convincing and plausible side to Roy and Ed that I might not otherwise have considered.
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  • From ANON - GmasAngel on July 24, 2008
    This.... was such a WONDERFUL story. You play the paradox and the characters so well, and you truely can write an amazing piece. I hope you keep writing, and I'll keep an eye out for any more of your stuff. Keep writing please!
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  • From SarahTaylor on July 21, 2008
    That was so sweet. I've got actual tears in my eyes from reading that ending, that's never happened before because it takes quite a lot to make me that emotional.
    I am so envious of your ability to write such amazing stories, you really have a gift and I wish you luck with all your writing projects and look forward to reading more stuff from you.
    XD take it easy XD
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  • From Lieriallial on July 18, 2008
    this is a brilliant story! Please send me a message when you update it!
    Lieriallial
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  • From SarahTaylor on July 15, 2008
    Poor Ed, yay he now admits his feelings for Roy but he's still so confused as well. I just want to wrap him in a great big hug. On top of all the stress from his inner demons, he also has to worry about the fact that he knows what's going to happen and can't tell the man that he's coming to love. I think I'd be hiding in a corner somewhere going slowly mad, he's doing well to hold it together.
    I liked his little chuckle when he remembered the fight, that must have really gotten Roy thinking XD
    I'm a little worried though to what Roy will do when Hughes dies. After all, he knows Ed knows what will happen and he's going to be a little upset that Ed didn't even try to change it. Ah well, the road to true love never did run smooth.
    Looking forward to the next amazing chapter.
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  • From ANON - Azumi-chan on July 14, 2008
    LadyMisaga@yahoo.com-This was a, I love this story, I feel for Ed, having to keep himself from changing everything, Hues, everyone that dies . . . I would never be able to stop myself from interfering if I were him. Beautifully written and I feel that the characters are in character, the level of maturity for Ed is fitting for his age and everything he has been through. Can't wait to read another chapter, many thanks to you ZaKai for writing so many wonderful stories.
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  • From ANON - Gmas Angel on July 11, 2008
    Can't wait for the next one! Thanks for updating, it makes readers happy.
    Great writing and situation as always too!
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  • From ultistarmon on July 10, 2008
    Wow, a Roy/Ed with a deep plot!!! I can't wait to see more! The email is ultistarmon@hotmail.com
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  • From Onyxlight on July 09, 2008
    GODS!! This gets better and better as it goes along...but all of your fics do so I am not surprised. You write the little intomate musings of Roy concerning Ed so well you have me wanting to cry for the man. Well done and I am happy to see a little curiousity on Eds part seeping in. I can't wait to hear more of his thoughts on his relationship with Alphons either...

    Nice job and great flow as always ^_^

    OnyxLight aka Lynx212
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  • From SarahTaylor on July 05, 2008
    Ed's inner turmoil is so well written, you can almost feel his anguish. He wants Roy but he's too scared to admit it.
    I love this story and I'm so glad you updated.
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on May 18, 2008
    Two thoughts run thru my head as I read this. 1 - I have no idea what to say in a review because there is all this heavy anticipation for the other shoe to drop and having all this go straight to hell in the blink of an eye. I am left just waiting with baited breath to see what happens next, too uncertain of anything to know how to respond or react! 2 - Since Ed is 34 now that means it was 1939 when he left the other world (or our world if you prefer) and that means that World War II is on the verge of breaking loose (again with everything going straight to hell) which makes me wonder why in the hell he even 'wants' to go back! Surely he knows about this! The Gate showed him so much that he must know this fact! And really, was his life there so much better than what he could have here? I know, I know. Ed has no control over what happens to him as far as being in this world or the other but, if Ed died in that car accident, then it wouldn't even be possible for him to go back! Death is what opens the Gate in the other world/our world so it's a moot point! (I may be confusing my fictions here but I think that's how it works. I blame/credit hime1999's alter_series if I am.) *heavy sigh* I don't know. I just read this and go, "and then what happens!", like a little kid. :) Just write more. Me and rambling insecurities will be huddled up in a corner waiting for the next chapter! :D
    Koneko =^.^=
    P.S. Add me to the update notice thingy - jill_emory (at) hotmail (dot) com. Thx! :D
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  • From Gnome on May 13, 2008
    A wonderful, satisfying chapter. Your portrayal of Roy and Ed's characters is so engaging. Despite so little happening the tension is almost unbearable at times. I look forward to reading more.

    Thank you for the chapter.
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