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Reviews for A Selfish Life

By : hidaritoki
  • From hidaritoki on November 10, 2009
    Thank you, topbear. It is harder to portray Goku. He is so singular in the series. He is either nice or kicking butt when he gets mad after someone dies. I always hoped that Goku would have a deeper side. That is why I try to write Goku's thoughts out in most of my stories. Sean Schemmel, the english voice actor who played Goku, said that he liked Goku, but the good guy thing was boring. I like a darker Goku. ^^

    Anywho, thanks for reading.
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  • From topbear1974 on November 10, 2009
    I love the story! I love how you describe Goku's thoughts. Too many stories focus on vegeta's POV, not Goku as it is difficult to capture him. you did a great job. Love the lemon, it was hot.
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  • From Zofo on October 18, 2009
    Good first story. I like how you write.

    It was a little rushed though, I would have preferred more chapters getting them together, rather than them falling for each other so quickly without much complaining, soul searching, and trying to resist their impluses.

    I look forward to your next story :)
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  • From hidaritoki on October 15, 2009
    Thanks for the reviews! This was my first story, so the sex scene didn't come out as well as it could have. Thanks for reading!
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  • From Julesie on October 10, 2009
    Interesting story. Not too long but enjoyable. Good job :)
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  • From Ulrike on October 09, 2009
    Wow interesting! I am very intrigued so far! I love stories that involve Goku's personality on a deeper level. I think the growing relationship between him and Vegeta is great, too. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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