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By : Aestas

From FujoshiRayen on July 04, 2010
Omg! This is the best 4th of July ever!!!! I came home to finding you updated!!!! Im so happy. ^.^
Ok, back to the serious stuff... Alright about as serious as you can get with amazing man-sex... *Stares off into the distance, drool hanging off chin. Jerks at loud noise* Uh? What? Oh yea right, story. Lol. I can tell you leading up to something. And I cant wait to see what it is. You giving that little hint of Trowa almost making his bust, is killing me. I know your going to do something. -.-
I just dont know what!!! Lol. I love the torture your putting Trowa through because of what he did to Duo, who in turn, did to Quat. Hehehe. They are taking full advantage of his Voyuristic kink. I love it. I love it when characters develop or reveal kinks. It so hot. What is really hot, is seeing Quat turn into a little sex-kitten. I cant wait to see what kinks he comes up with. OOOOhhhh. Thats going to be sooooo gooood. LOl. Dont keep me on my edge of my seat for long! I want to know what your leading up to!!!! (P.S. So you know how when you leave a review it has one of those little type-whats-written thingy there? So that it doesnt spam? Guess what this one was? "White mouthful". Is that amazing or what!?)
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From shinigamiinochi on July 04, 2010
Ahhh, I love this story sooo much! ^.^ Is there really going to be a sequel, or were you kidding, because the last chapter thing has me depressed. I loved the angst and the sex. I never really thought that a 3x2x4 could work like this, but you did it wonderfully. I don't suppose you could fit in a little Quatre topping Duo? Pretty please? It's a pairing I never see, because most people like portraying Quatre as a sub, not a dom. I look forward to the next chapter!
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From Angelkitty7888 on June 21, 2010
not one of you better lemons huh? i have to see you at your best then lol cause that was DAMN HOT!!!! please please please write more!!!
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From ANON - Djargo on June 14, 2010
What a fantastic chapter!! The chapter title was very apt. It was all about their perception of each other and themselves in the relationship. You really brought out the emotions in each of them.

I very much enjoyed how you wrote Quatre in this chapter. He was more self-assured and confident. He didn't break down when the whole truth came out. He held Trowa and Duo accountable for their roles in the deception. He wasn't as fragile as either of them thought.
When Trowa tried to leave I wanted to reach into the story to pull him back but I knew Duo and Quatre wouldn't let him leave. His fear of hurting them and his feelings of not being worthy were finally revealed. It was funny how he was surprised that Duo understood even felt the same unworthiness because of the situation. Trowa wasn't as emotionally detatched as they thought.
It seemed one of Duo's fears was that he was only a filler between Trowa and Quatre. It was really nice that he received confirmation from them both that he meant more and was really part of the relationship.

By the way, the nicknames were adorable^_^. When Trowa explained the reasoning behind the names I just melted. So sweet!
And if that was your idea of not-so-hot lemon them I need my internal temperature checked. It was plenty HOT to me and mighty well-written.
I am sooo looking forward to thee next chapter.

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From FujoshiRayen on June 14, 2010
*Blink* *blink* Wow. That was... that was amazing. I mean flat out amazing. You took this to a much deeper level and I love it. Their nicknames! Omg. I love them. The way Trowa was telling them was great. I was about ready to jump into the story and slap him when he tried to walk out. I was screaming at my computer "You DUMBASS!!!! Dont you dare leave like this!!!" And then Duo got all up in his face and Trowa was right there back in his face. It was intense. And that lemon. *Fans self* That was hot. Trowa wanting Quatre after Duo was done.... That was like Einstein smart. I felt like myself blush after reading that. And that hasnt happened in a looooong time of reading fan fics. Trowa was so gentle yet so... rough. Despite his fears he is finding the dividing line very well with Duo and Quatre. Hes rough and hard with Duo and really gentle with Quat. Almost to gentle. But I have a feeling that hes getting a taste of what its like through Duo. And I think he likes it. He may not be able to up to what Duo can do but he is deffinantly finding how good it can be. I cant wait to see what happens!!!!
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From ANON - Djargo on June 02, 2010
I really enjoyed this chapter. It did a good job of expanding on some of the inner emotions pushing at them,especially Trowa's. I was hearten to see Trowa's reaction to Quatre during his confession to Rashid. It was like he couldn't not comfort him when he felt Quatre's distress. That's quite telling for someone who is normally able to detach himself from the most stressful of situations.
My heart ached for him when he started getting anxious that Quatre was going to tell him it was over. That he was prepared to just up and leave if Duo and Quatre wanted to be together. It's awful that he feels he isn't worthy of their love;that he doesn't deserve love. He even thought he could remain detached from Duo. He hasn't realized that Duo and Quatre won't just let him disappear on them. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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From ANON - Rst on June 01, 2010
I really do love your story, it's rare to actually find a good story with keeping everyone in character while going through various phases. You've pulled it off extremely well and its virtually the only story that makes me come back to this part of the site. I really hope you update soon. x
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From CeeCee on May 31, 2010
I was floored when I read the line about Trowa deciding not to manipulate Duo or Quatre again, and that he'd move on completely if he had to. It's in character, but his manipulation played such a huge part in getting the other two to go that final step toward their arrangement. That's a real turning point for Trowa, and you really feel his panic when he realizes that they other two could possibly have found some happiness without him. Wow. Heartwrenching stuff, that, and Quat coming out. Trowa's introspection that Rashid might be right and that he might not be good enough for Quat was right on point; again, you can see Trowa feeling that way, for that purpose, it's so much in character the way you have him written so far.

I love this. I've been CRAVING an update to this and you delivered. I can't wait til they chip away at Trowa a little more, crack through his layers, hopefully before he takes off. His "void" that Quat felt worries me.
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From ANON - Djargo on May 03, 2010
When Quatre makes up his mind,watch out. I loved seeing Quatre return to his confident,playful side. Even when he wavered he was determined not to let his doubts weigh him down.

My goodness, the clothes borrowing scene and subsequent kitchen scene was soooo sexy. As I read, I could picture those scenes in my mind's eye. It was almost like I was right there and could reach out touch them. *Comes back from that image wiping away drool^_^* Well written chapter!

Dang,I'm just sad for Trowa. He's slip in and out personalities for so long that he has lost touch with his own. I'm glad Quatre's so determined because he'll need every ounce to reach our reticent acrobat.
Duo has to be dealing with a lot. Between realizing how far Trowa has retreated to his merc persona and that he'll soon be going on assingment,Duo has to be a little worried about their very new relationship.

Would absolutely love to see this story continued in a sequel. It would be extremely interesting to see the effects Trowa's type of job could have on them emotionally and physically. Great idea.

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From FujoshiRayen on May 02, 2010
Evil? Mwah?Bwahahahahah!!! *looks smug* So happy to be of survice! I still think you could make it into a Novella but I suppose I can settle for Arc, I guess. Lol I definantly understand what you mean about getting your best ideas when you cant write them down. Except for me they always happen at work, its really bad cuz im pretty sure my boss wouldnt aprove of me suddenly jotting down excellent lemon ideas right in the middle of my shift. Escpeically if it is where our customers might see them.... Yea. Really not good. Lol. Im soooo glad you updated. And with lemons to boot! I was jumping for joy when i read that you have a sequel. Which means more lemons, right? Im intrigued by your hint about the inner workings of Trowas mind. Will he be able to overcome some of the insecurities he has? I mean, i know he doesnt come right out and say it but it almost seems as if he hes afraid to show Quatre and Duo what he is really like. He said that he needed Duo to help him communicate with Quat, but there is still some stuff that he doesnt even want Duo to know right? Some things that they can understand but Trowa doesnt want to chance it because hes afraid it will push them away? I cant wait to see what happens!!!! I have weak spot for when Trowa calls Quatre "Little One". It is really endearing! Does he have a nickname for Duo too? So do we get a bit more insight to Office 2324? Because I really think Quat and Duo gossiping like old bitties are hilarious. Whats even more endearing is Trowa just sitting back and listening to it with a little smirk on his face. He loves them. I can totally see it. Even if Quat doesnt. Poor Quat. But Im sure you will help him with that right? I kinda has a lemon request too. *starts blushing* Do you think that maybe at some point and time you might be able to put in a.... doubleteamingofduowithtrowaandquatretakinghimatthesametime? *blush turns worse* I suppose that wasnt very clear.... *Takes a deep breath while hiding behind hair* Can Trowa and Quatre DP Duo? I know thats reaaaallly graphic but that would be so hot. I mean really hot. Like, center of the earth hot. If that was a bit to... crude to ask for then totally tell me. Sorry. *holds out cookie* I just have this mental image of them together.... *starts blushing again* Yea... Maybe I should stop that line of thinking before it gets me into more trouble.
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From CeeCee on May 02, 2010
Breakfast and borrowed clothes are two of my favorite afterglow activities, in fic or in real life. I adored Trowa's confession, it totally fit, and it was great to see Quat actually be really happy about the turn of events with both men, especially Duo, who deserved it. He didn't do that whole "maybe we made a mistake" thing the morning after, which made me grin.

I really enjoyed this. I'd LOVE a sequel. I also like the idea of the three of them building Trowa's home. Kinda parallels them building their relationship and sharing something with Trowa that he's done alone until now. Funny that he doesn't like potatoes.
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From ANON - Djargo on April 07, 2010
Damn! What a way to wake up. That was lemony goodness. I definitely picked up sexy/shy from Quatre. You did a good job expressing that through the chapter.
Trowa still has a ways to go before he can feel more at ease,emotionally at least,around Duo and Quatre especially. It was nice to see them both try to relax Quatre and show him,physically and emotionally,how he can be with them. It's great that he is finally realizing how his second guessing and lack of confidence has effected his life. You were so right that,as an empath, the sense of rejection would effect him more. Nice to see him get some of his determination back.
Once again, Duo kept them in the moment. He's determined to keep them from retreating into themselves. Looking forward to your next chapter.
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From ANON - QUEENPEN on April 06, 2010
LOVED IT...SO WELL DONE! NICE JOB INCLUDEING TROWA....MORE PLEASE...
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From CeeCee on April 06, 2010
I think this was definitely a strong chapter for Quat. I like his moment of self-reflection, and how he didn't just lie there pitying himself that he wasn't the focus of the other men's full attention when Duo rode Trowa. I like that he's getting some of his assertiveness back.

My favorite moment of it was when Trowa woke up and felt both men's breath flowing over his skin. That was very sexy and it brought everything into sharp focus, you could really sense three people in the bed, it became tangible.
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From FujoshiRayen on April 05, 2010
Ok, so now im curious. I had originally thought that this would be a short story almost a PWP but now you've opened up some really good plot lines... You will continue with those plot lines, right? Cuz let me tell you, Im obsessed with your lemons. They are flat out amazing. But im soooo curious about how this is all gonna pan out. You have enough to were you could prolly end the story now with one more chap but you also have enough to do an excellent novella. Im dieng to know what happens. I can totally see this working out but its the bumps along the way that make it so interesting. I will be the first to admit that im extremly nosy. EXTREMELY. And atm im completly obsessed with Trowa in this story. Ive got to know what happens!!!! So im begging you. If you arent going to keep the story going much longer, then PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give an epilouge? Pretty pretty Please? With a Cherry ontop of Quatre? Oh wait, Duo already took care of that didnt he? *grins evily*
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