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Reviews for Two Sides of a Triangle

By : Aestas
  • From Mort on March 31, 2010
    This a absolutely amazing story, thank you
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  • From ANON - Djargo on March 29, 2010
    Oh. My. Goodness. This story is so excellent that I read it in one go^_^. I absolutely love how you wrote Trowa in this story. I'm glad you didn't take the sarcastic but otherwise emotionally blank route I've read in other stories. Talk about still waters running deep. Beneath his calm surface is a plethora of emotions waiting to be discovered. He holds so much inside,at his own detriment, so he won't hurt hurt those he holds dear. When he broke down after his talk with Quatre my heart ached for him.

    Quatre's character is quite different than I've seen him portrayed. He became so fixated on Trowa that he was blind to how that obsession changed him and how he related to other people,especially Duo.
    Speaking of Duo,I felt so awful for him in this story. It seemed like he was going to be the odd man in the triangle until I read this last chapter. Instead of odd man,he seems to be the catalyst to bring Trowa and Quatre closer. He bridges the gap in their communication emotionally and physically. And what a gap bridger Duo was in that last chapter~_^. That scene sizzled. It was so sexy with such an emotional undercurrent. Quatre finally feeling Duo's emotions and determine to feel more. Also,I like how when Trowa tried to retreat Duo made sure he felt included. He's determined to make it a true relationship on all sides. Thank you for taking the time and effort to share your wonderful story. Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From CeeCee on March 29, 2010
    Goodness gracious. Ten pages of lemony perfection. I didn't come away from this wanting anything else, because it already had so many good elements in it. I love how affectionate and sexy it was with lots of psychological, emotional interaction instead of just being all about heavy breathing. Quatre listening to his space heart really sharpened this, because you wondered how he was going to get around the fact that he wasn't physically attracted - or so he thought - to his best friend, but there's no bigger aphrodisiac than seeing yourself through someone else's very loving eyes.

    On the one hand, I wanted to feel sorry for Trowa, yet at the same time, Duo was only doing what he told him to back in the beginning, namely keeping him from hurting Quatre, in a sense. I didn't think I could ever love a chapter more than I did the last one, since the tension in it was perfect and had me bouncing in my seat, but this resolved it perfectly.

    So I won't nag you to give us more or anything... *taps foot, checks watch*
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  • From ANON - JD on March 29, 2010
    Chapter 7 can only be described as brilliant
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  • From ANON - Seekah on March 10, 2010
    I can definitely see how Duo is gonna benefit this relationship. Quatre is so blind sometimes. And I like that you have a Duo/Trowa relationship going on here because you practically NEVER see this couple. It's really good so far. Yay! Quatre is gonna kiss him. Finally! It's so sad how Duo has been suffering from this three way. Hopefully it all works out soon
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  • From CeeCee on March 07, 2010
    okay...suspense much??? Meanie.

    It was fabulous. Can't wait for chapter seven.
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  • From inuyoukaigirl1984 on February 26, 2010
    Meesa likies!! Not very often that I come across a 2x3x4 relationship. To see Q as an obsessive personality with weak tendencies is a little strange, as is seeing Tro as a borderline recluse. I do like how you are going through the subtle dynamics of changing in their dealings with one another. To see them grow as a person and see the relationships take hold is really exciting. I do feel so bad for Duo. Feeling as he does right now. I hope things work out for him. He is undoubtedly my favorite character. Keep up with the great work!!
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  • From CeeCee on February 25, 2010
    I'm just rubbing my hands together in happy anticipation after reading chapter five. I can't wait for that discussion. I can relate to Trowa at this point, champing at the bit to be with Quat, even though he made a great big fuss about pretending to push him away. Love the visual of him sexy in sawdust.

    I love how Duo doesn't pull the punches when he confronts him, it's definitely a big part of his charm in this story. I almost don't know who I'm worried about more in terms how badly he might get hurt, Duo or Quatre. Poor braided guy might end up getting used by Q and Trowa both, in a sense, if the other two who are in love with each other don't let him all the way in.

    But this was fabulous.
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  • From ANON - enigma on February 25, 2010
    Cant wait for the next part of the story! The talk!
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  • From ANON - cewo on February 23, 2010
    Looking forward to the next update. Poor Duo; Quatre just kept digging the hole deeper! This is one of my favs! More soon please!
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  • From CeeCee on February 22, 2010
    This wasn't a downer. I loved it. But it makes me want to beat Trowa about the head with a big stick.

    Poor Quat! I'll be saying that a lot. I love how Trowa maneuvered him into trying to "console" Duo and plead with him to enter into the arrangement the other two men wanted, like it was his own idea. That's well played!!! And the thing is, Quatre's so compassionate and wants so much to please other people, too, so you can tell he's going to grudgingly go along with a relationship with Duo even at the expense of ruining thier friendship because he wants Trowa so much. But at the same time, you can tell Duo's not just going to settle with being the sympathetic ear when Trowa's an asshole, he'll want to prove himself to Quatre as being able to love him the way he deserves.

    I love how you come up with this stuff. It's exhilarating. The last chapter when Trowa ran off broke my heart, but this one has me on the edge of my seat. Great work, you.
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  • From ANON - enigma on February 22, 2010
    Poor Duo! Quatre really is going off the deep end there and hurting the people around him. Cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From CeeCee on January 31, 2010
    whoo...wow. WOW.

    I was that close to crying when Trowa called Quatre weak. That moment when Trowa gave himself over to his own pain at hurting him was almost tangible. Doggone it, Trowa! But I love this. I love how you set it up that Quatre will go from being obsessed to more resolute, maybe even a little more aggressive in showing Trowa what he wants. From his internal narrative, what's funny is, he might already love Duo a little, even if he hasn't processed those feelings that way. Poor guy was so hurt just at the mere thought of Duo possibly abandoning him, even if it was only for an afternoon. You just see this train wreck building but there is so much to look forward among these three, maybe even a "what do you have that I don't" dynamic between Quatre and Duo.

    But man, Quatre only needs one little twang right now to make him snap!
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  • From YojiKato on January 31, 2010
    I normally hate 'bastardizing' one of the g-boys, but it seems to me, this was done with a purpose. Trowa wants Quatre to return to the strong, confident guy he once was, right? So, it was more of him adopting an attitude to push Quatre to the edge. As long as it all works out in the end, I'm happy. ^_^ Look forward to reading more and seeing where this is going.
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  • From ANON - enigma on January 31, 2010
    Wow! an update. I love the way you are working the characters. Its sad to see Quatre reach the stage he has, torn and weak in front of Trowa. Trowa really had no choice to do what he did even though it hurt him and Quatre. Hopefully things will work out for good. There looks like a long spate of angst coming up. Wonder how Quatre will work his way over all this. I foresee him going over the deep end to accuse Duo of his supposed failed relationship... more please soon!
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