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Reviews for Soldier Boy

By : Robyn
  • From tetisheri on July 14, 2012
    Well i actually finished reading this last night but i was too lazy to write the review then. This is a great story, and i'm not including the amazingly written smut either. I enjoyed reading this, especially the Goku/Gohan. The way you got their relationship started was actually pretty believable, more so then i have seen other's do. Anyways loved the story.
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  • From ANON - SchizophrenicPsycho on May 19, 2011
    Can you please write more GokuxGohan? .___. Pleeeeeease? -Puppy eyes.-
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  • From ANON - topbear on February 13, 2011
    Woohoo! A month away I can see the complete story!
    My heart was broken when see Gohan like that. Your wrote the angst very well. I felt so sad for both of them. Vegeta's plan is so cunning and he is so intellegent. This story is full of mind quiz which I love. The final plot of using Buu to separate them is ingenius!

    I absolutely love this story which must take a lot of your brain to fabricate. Love the way to unveil the secrete one by one. Please keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - luv-blonde-bunny on January 27, 2011
    omfg, i totally thought u were going to do a sequel! i mean, with only a couple more chapters added on,i thought there was no way it would be over so soon, but it is! and holy cow it was AWSOME! i totally got all sappy around the time that Gohan starts trying to distance himself and then his accident! WAAHHH! ToT but it was still a totally awsome story! way to go!

    keep on writing,

    luv-blonde-bunny
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  • From TheGreatChickenbone on January 23, 2011
    Yes, I love what I read by you, so I do have to take the chance to read this... even if I'm so awfully behind now. XD
    I loved this chapter and I should definitely not take to long to get the rest of them down!
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  • From ANON - topbear1974 on January 13, 2011
    An update!!! Gosh, how I love goku plays 'the big daddy' it is so dominate and protective. Totally love it. Vegeta, is surprisingly understanding and handy in this situation. I felt sorry for those guys who dare to drug gohan. @ cringe@

    I miss gohan being super saiyan, must be sexy as hell. Vegeta such a pervert, watching the video. I felt sorry for him too. Now kakarott is gone, he is loverless. I absolute lobe the drama when goku wakesup. He is such a gentle seme that gohan had him wrap around his fingers. I can see his love towards gohan runs deep. It is all very sweet.
    Now I wonder what vegeta' s next plan. This chapter is a bit short. I very much look forward to your next update.
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  • From Danyealle on January 11, 2011
    As an archive moderator, I would like to point out that we are having problems with the server and database (if you are on during peak hours you will notice the lag or have to refresh pages that time out-that is because the server is overloaded by the massive use of database space). So we are now suggesting that all authors that put big authors notes and answer reviews in their stories please start using the forum for that. In the fiction part all you would need to do is start a topic in the right area and you can answer reviews, interact with readers, start polls and everything else.

    The forum is far better able to handle the traffic and load that the archive can't right now (we are working on that but it's taking time to do). Signing up for a forum account is quick and painless, no worse than signing up for your AFF account. All you need to is sign up, start the thread then post the url in your stories.

    Please think about this and help us out a bit.

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  • From ANON - luv-blonde-bunny on January 11, 2011
    oooo! what have u got planned in that dastardly little mind of yours? ;3
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  • From 66Hiei08 on January 10, 2011
    In regards to wondering what to do with Tarble, perhaps you can spark up some action between him and Vegeta. Since you already have the incest warning in place and since it seems to me that Vegeta's not all that 'appalled' by what's going on between Goku and his son it wouldn't be much of a stretch that he'd have no aversion to some 'fun' with his 'little' brother. Just a suggestion. Ever since I've heard of this new character to the DBZ 'family' I've been fascinated. I haven't been able to see that special because all the ones I've seen are only available in Japanese. It would be nice if they'd bring an English version of it here.
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  • From topbear1974 on January 06, 2011
    Darn. this website is definitely again me!! I finally put an review on and it is only half of it. The rest of the reviews are here:

    I am glad that Gohan and goku made up. Howeve I can feel the issue has not gone away and will come back and affect the two. What if Vegeta offer to be uke? would Goku take the bait? that can be a test/proof of his love to gohan. They are actually so cute together!!

    Somebody sets their eyes on gohan. Oh dear god. I worried that they are going to face goku's wrath then. Mmhaha. Looking forward to you next update!!
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  • From topbear1974 on January 06, 2011
    I actually reviewed three time already and it is still not on. *crash the mobile phone.

    I saw this update the first day it has been put on. I was really excited. Somehow my long review got lost before posting I got frustrated. But anyway, I want to say is it is a lovely chapter. Yaya. You got me checking everyday to see if there is any update.

    So Vegeta has a plan then. I wonder whether he included Sons. Will he get objection from them, or rather helps? I look forward to see how this evolve.

    Vegeta is not mad then. I was a bit surprised. I wished he has more dramatic reaction but he took it rather well. However he drown several drinks, that must be covering the turmoil inside
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  • From ANON - luv-blonde-bunny on January 04, 2011
    yeah it's alwys difficult to write in a personality when u haven't been given much to work w/ from the canon. i think yur doing a marvolus job of it though :) i'm curious how you're going to work this story. u seem to have a lot of different angles, so the possibilities are mind boggling ^^

    keep on writing,

    luv-0blonde-bunny
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  • From ANON - Rinrins on January 03, 2011
    I was denied my GohanxGoku lemon! But I'll forgive you since this chapter was written so wonderfully. I was a bit surprised by Vegeta's seemingly easy acceptance of their relationship, but I can also see how he'd be plotting on how to use that to his advantage too.

    This story draws me in each more with each chapter!
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  • From ANON - Moon on December 29, 2010
    This is a great and original story! I love the setting and I love the way the characters are interacting. Gohan and Goku are two of my favorite characters from the DragonBall Z series so putting them together is excellent for me. I like the idea of them as a pair and I am excited to see how it works out for them later in the story. I will continue reading! Thank you for writing it!

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  • From ANON - luv-blonde-bunny on December 26, 2010
    once again, f-ing hot! XD this is one hell of a story! now i'm all curious if Tarble'll tell Vegeta what he saw >) heeheehee

    keep on writing,

    luv-blonde-bunny
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