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Reviews for Trinity

By : Aestas

From animecrazed117 on August 14, 2011
Hello! I truly enjoy your writing. I think I have read just about everything that you have written and posted on here. This fic, the prequel, and He Goes Running are my current faves. I am always blown away by the amazing way you can wind an intriguing plot line and wondeful lemons into a story. And I love the difference in Duo's character in this fic and He Goes Running =P You are a very truly gifted writer and I eagerly await the next chapter =)
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From ANON - Djargo on August 09, 2011
I would never call you crazy for creating emotionally complex characters with strengths and weaknesses we can relate to;I would call you a dang good writer. I don't just read your stories for the smut,though you write write it so well^_^,I read to see how the story and characters will develop. I'm a sucker for a story and characters with substance.

I found the scene with Quatre rather cathartic, for the characters as well as myself. It makes sense that submission would be if not Quatre's kink( for now) his release. Quatre takes care of everyone around him but holds all his stress/anxiety inside.I liked how you used the scene to address his feelings of guilt about his pacifist upbringing and his decision to go to war.
Leave it to Trowa to figure out how to relieve Quatre.

Call me mushy if you want but I thought the last scene was so warm and sweet. Trowa gave into his need to hold Duo and really let him see how shaken he was about the whole situation. After the emotional fallout of Duo's actions it was good to see the guys get back their footing in the relationship. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2011
Ahhh I'm dying for the next chapter! No one writes GW fics here anymore...or barely anyone. I'm so glad your fic is still alive. And Quatre's kink...I'm so excited about Quatre hotnesssss. He's my favorite.
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From ANON - Serenity Rayne on July 16, 2011
I think I nearly cried when I came to the end of the chapter. ...Such an evil cliff hanger!!!! I love that Trowa and Duo are alright now. That they worked everything out. And I really can't wait to see them gang up on poor Quatre!

Hope to see more really soon!
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From ANON - Djargo on July 14, 2011
So happy to see an update from you! This was a great chapter. I liked how you kept the tension just so. It gave the impression that if Duo didn't handle the situation right he really could severely damage his and Trowa's relationship. I loved how sincere Duo's apology came across. That he unintentionally confessed his love for Trowa while also threatening to kill him if he jeopardized Quatre was a bonus^^.
I also enjoy how you keep their emotions flexible within the relationship. No one has a set role. They each have their moments of strength,vulnerability,or uncertainess that you write so well. Looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder if Quatre could be more kinky than Duo or Trowa^o^.

P.S.: Don't apologize or stress about slow updates. Everyone should understand real life trumps story updates. You can only write when the muses move you and time permits. Be well.
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From ANON - Aiya on July 13, 2011
Yay~ I can't wait for them to find Quat's kink~ ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter and great work so far~
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From ANON - SensationalK on July 12, 2011
I totally love this story. I only come to Aff to see if you updated, sure I have a couple of stories that I check up on, but yours is defiantly number one on my list of favorites. Update soon!! I've been freaking waiting on Trowa and Duo finding Quatre's kink!!!
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From ANON - originalceenote on July 12, 2011
I won't blame anyone for not sticking to a writing schedule. I don't think I've uploaded a word of fic to this site in at least a month. I've been up to my neck in real life and fan art, and my kids are constantly clamoring to get on the PC every time I get up from my chair.

I enjoyed this, as usual. Duo's apology was well done, and I love the tension you created even with something as similar as a "wood picnic." That made me chuckle. Leave it to Quat to come up with that. But once again, I like the changing roles, Duo's vulnerability when he's been the one who's not easily phased up until now, and Quat's new hint of aggression and the glue who holds them all together.

The revelation that Duo has shot Trowa was shocking, and of course, brilliant.
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From CeeCee on June 06, 2011
Chapter seven worked well, continuing what you had in the last and picking up the thread of angst, expanding it and fleshing it out more. I like how Quat became the mediator, and Duo slid into Quat's role as the vulnerable one of the group. I'll be interested to see if some of Trowa's tendencies rub off on the boys as a result of being closer to him, too, since we've already seen him open up - slightly. I love his POV in the woods, and I'm interested to see what will happen when he goes back to the house.

I won't nag you about updates, since I haven't touched my own GW fic out here in several weeks, going on a few months. I'm stuck. I'm stuck on just about everything that I've written, and I even have sketch ideas backed up in my head that I haven't done anythign with, and painting canvases that are barely started with only a couple of layers of paint each or that are still in rough sketch form. It's hard when you have stifled creativity and too little time to untangle it, or when you're just emotionally exhausted.

Good to see you online and updating, though. I love this story.
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From zekesbabe on June 06, 2011
You will not believe what an incredibly happy bunny I was to see not one but two updates from my favourite ever author! (That's you by the way :D)

I will review He Goes Running in a few minutes but first I want to say that I absolutely adore Trinity. In fact I check the anime2 section of this website every day hoping to see it updated. You promised dark and I saw what I am sure was nothing more than a taster when Trowa almost shot Duo while in character. And a bit of not-quite-developed angst with Trowa berating himself about it. I love how Duo's trying to be a big boy and brush it off, keeping his true intentions hidden. May run and hide certainly comes in to play with this. Only problem I have with it is that it's too short. Also that I'm dying to see the main parts of it, I don't know whether you were actually going to write Trowa's mission as your chapters but either way I'm ready for the main course...please don't tease me anymore! *puppy eyes*

Can't wait for the next one my dear!
Zx

P.s I am not on the wappy pills :D
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From ANON - river girl on June 06, 2011
This was a well written chapter, raw, painful and yet beautifully honest. Please keep writing. For once I felt like we got into Trowa's head and it was perfectly done.

Please keep writing. So want to know what happens when the other two come back with the pizza. I wonder if it will actually get eaten or not.
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From ANON - Djargo on June 06, 2011
I bet Duo thought he'd be the one doing the reassuring,in this relationship,not the other way round. I liked how Quatre was able to read Trowa then relay to Duo how Trowa felt about the situation and Duo's reaction to his concern. I get the feeling that Quatre defused a mini Duo-plosion^^.
It's a measure of how upset Trowa was that he didn't recognize Duo's cavalier attitude for the mask that it is. Duo uses it to cover-up his fears and insecurities like Trowa uses his emotionless mask to cover his. Can't wait to read what happens when the guys get back.

I hope you're not stressing yourself too much. You don't need to apologize for taking the time to work on your story. A story comes as it comes and it damn hard to force when it chooses to be uncooperative. Your a wonderful writer whose hard work shows in the effort you put into your stories. I,as one of your readers,appreciate this and thinks your stories are worth waiting for.
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From ANON - Cee on April 25, 2011
Amazing. I love this new transition in Trowa's psyche. Duo's really seeing the persona that Trowa's been building in private, despite Trowa's efforts to hide it from him and Quat. That brief moment where Trowa drags him inside the room and holds him, only to have to push him away, was brilliant.

I can't wait to see what else you do with these characters.
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From zekesbabe on April 24, 2011
Happy Easter!

And you're welcome. Philosophical assistance is always here when you need it!

I love Trowa's darker side that was shown in this chapter, though I have a feeling that he will be going a lot lot darker. And you know, where he was trying to sample what his 'crew' would be like in an explosive and 'risque' situation with his fluctuating moods, that was something I'd never really though about before and totally makes sense!

I really am looking forward to the next update but I'm praying so hard that everything is turning out ok for you now.

Zx
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From ANON - Djargo on April 24, 2011
What a lovely Easter surprise! Getting this update was better than finding the gold egg on an Easter egg hunt^^.
This was a terrific chapter. Your re-write was well worth the wait. The way you described Trowa during his address to the recruits was almost snake-like. The hiss under his speaking voice,the sway to his stance lent to the illusion. And like a snake,he struck faster than the eye could follow. I thought for a second he would really put a bullet in Duo.
Though Trowa should've suspected that Duo would take it as a personal challenge to find info on the mission. Duo is just being Duo after all.

You really can't blame Trowa for being angry even if it was partly an act for his recruits. If the roles were reversed,Duo would be pretty pissed if Trowa endangered a mission to satisfy his curiosity. Duo has yet to fully realize that the emotionless mask is how Trowa deals with being scrutinized and having to almost always watch what he says and how he reacts. I can hardly wait until the next update to see how this tension plays out.

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