Click Here!

Reviews for Trinity

By : Aestas
  • From snowdragonct on April 24, 2011
    I liked this chapter a LOT. Cool to see Trowa in his "mission" mindset, and also cool that Duo had the skills to sneak into a "secured" area. But then, I should've known he could do that. (Duh!) I wonder if there isn't something he can contribute to the mission, though...some of his observations passed along to Trowa maybe? Or...maybe Trowa wouldn't listen at this point. He's GOTTA be pissed that Duo showed up. And for good reason. This was an excellent chapter. Guess your re-writes were well worth the effort!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - LunarG on April 04, 2011
    I've just gone through the prequel and this in one sitting. Kudos to you for going for psychological realism in a threesome! I love the layered, complex Trowa you're slowly drawing for us, and the contradictory blend of fragility and iron-strength that is Duo's emotional core. Didn't like Quatre so much at the start, but I'm starting to like him more as the strategist returns. The smex is hot -- I'm not sure if it's just that it's my kink so I respond better to it or if you really do write Trowa dominating Duo even better than anything else. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with the plot -- is it too much to hope that Duo ends up having to interact with Trowa's undercover persona? As Duo is a field agent, I figure it is possible... with Q back at HQ, finding a way to keep them both alive. And as a matter of policy, I never trust Zechs...
    My big quibble is how quickly Quatre found lust and romantic feelings for Duo. I'll buy the speed of the relationship between Trowa and Duo -- the similar backgrounds, the complementary kinks, both of them have holes in them that the other fills. (By the way, I found Duo's negotiating for a kiss after the sex in chapter 2 to be a beautiful and telling detail about the kinds of relationship's Duo's had in the past, and how little his needs were respected in them....)
    You also have a few problems with homonyms... "site" is a location, "sight" is a view. But overall, brava and I look forward to reading more!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - anonn on April 02, 2011
    interesting read, curious to see where this is going, waits for more!
    Report Review

  • From animecrazed117 on March 29, 2011
    ah i can't wait to see what happens between trowa and duo!! the mission sounds amazing and the psychological stuff is so intense!! and of course, duo wants to play spy, it's his favorite game =P it's all really good!i hope life slows down so you can update soonest =D
    Report Review

  • From Angelkitty7888 on March 28, 2011
    Yay new chapter!!! and i like the new guy :) nice and sneaky in a very trowa sort of way lol can't wait to see what else you've got planned!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Djargo on March 28, 2011
    Words cannot express how musch I enjoyed Trent's introduction. He has all the makings of a character you want to dislike but secretly have a soft spot for. I liked how their interactions left Duo flat-footed and squirming like a worm on a hook. Never seen Duo Maxwell on the short side of any conversation. Usually the only one that does that to him like is Trowa. Great work,I am looking forward to the next chapter.
    Report Review

  • From CeeCee on March 28, 2011
    I automatically hated Trent, which means you did a fabulous job of introducing him. I'd love to watch Duo or Quatre match wits with him, I enjoyed the dialogue in that scene and Duo's reactions to him, and his own internal monologue.

    And Zechs made me laugh. Subtle, but effective.
    Report Review

  • From snowdragonct on March 28, 2011
    Oh, always something new...a bit of a twist. I loved this chapter.
    Report Review

  • From zekesbabe on March 28, 2011
    We're getting closer to the big bust! It's so exciting! I'm dying to see Trowa in his role, you write so well that it's almost...believable. I actually feel like I'm there with the characters...maybe as a ghost or something...we'll see lol. Some authors have started creating forums to answer reviews and linking to it on their story page. Don't know if that helps?

    I'm sad life's being sucky, but all clouds have a silver lining. I don't know what's going on in your life but I find that philosophy works for almost everything.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
    Zx
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Djargo on February 23, 2011
    Oh my gosh, that was beyond smutty and so damn good. Trowa is sexy incarnate. He can be commanding/demanding with Duo and Quatre yet still tender. Speaking of Quatre, our little feather has come a long way since the beginning of this relationship. I totally agree with Trowa that confidence is so sexy. And do I have to mention,although I will, that Duo is just a wet dream come true^_^. Hope I manage to convey how I thouroughly enjoyed every syllable of this chapter. I think the boys earned the extended sex since Trowa is going away so don't feel bad about there not being lots of plot. Looking forward to the next chapter.
    Report Review

  • From zekesbabe on February 21, 2011
    I know what you mean. Not the best of formats, though I've not actually uploaded anything in it yet but hey ho. I'm beginning to think there's a serious problem with the GW side of the site as I didn't see chapter 3. Best thing is I got to read two chapters. Bad thing is I thought it took you two months to update so I was about ready to pounce and complain :P.

    Chapter 3 was fab, you really get a feel for how much this final mission means to all three of them. Chapter 4 was...well...smutty. Which is a change, nice though :) torturous :P.

    I'd actually missed your stories so much I re-started Two Sides of a Triangle last night...please don't leave it another month to update?? I want to read it so bad! No complaints with these two chapters, love them both and no spelling or grammar mistakes that I've picked up!

    Zx
    Report Review

  • From ANON - animecrazed117 on February 06, 2011
    I followed this story from the "2 sides of a triangle" and I just love the development of this story. I am continually amazed by the development of the characters! the psychological, the emotional, the relationship - ah, its all so good!! I look forward to Trowa's mission and the impact it has on him (he's my fave g-boy lol) and his return to their relationship. and you are sheer jeanius with the lemons - can't wait to find out quatre's kink ^^ please update soon!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Djargo on January 27, 2011
    *melt* I'm am so a puddle right now. The exchange between Trowa and Quatre left me with wonderful warm fuzzies. I loved how you used that simple touch to show Trowa's growing affection and ease with Quatre. And I liked that Quatre was more his old self,able to see the bigger picture, when Trowa told him about having to be alone those last few days. Even though he didn't like it as long as it helped Trowa come back safe he could accept it. Also, I could've just hugged Trowa when he realized what he had been feeling was lonliness but Quatre beat me to it^_^.

    I know this may be redundant,since many others have commented on it,but that bedroom scene was H-O-T. Then you took it up a notch when Trowa broke out the silk ropes. *fanning self* Can hardly wait to read the next chapter to see what fun the guys get up to.
    Report Review

  • From Angelkitty7888 on January 27, 2011
    i realise i revied earlier but since you updated i reread some of your other fics :) (namely Break Me Down, My Ride Home and Becoming Whole) and i felt the need to tell you again that you write the most fantastic Trowa i've ever had the privilege to read and i absolutely love all i've read of your work. The wonderful style and thought you put into your work is a pleasure to read and i enjoy every sentance of it! So thanks for doing what you do and i can't wait for more :)
    Report Review

  • From Angelkitty7888 on January 25, 2011
    Ooooohhhh!!!! Updates!!!! (and it was an incredibly hot update!) i liked how you had Quatre handle the news! it proves he really is back to the old smart Quatre :D and i loved how you had Duo play on Trowa's voyer kink with the contest. it will make Trowa's part all the sweeter! (which i can't wait to read being very appreciative of that particular kink) please hurry and write more? i can't wait to see where else ou take this!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!