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for Koneka's Excellent Vacation

by Vicci

person Onitsu
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well damn, I've read this thing twice and both times it's made me feel sooo sorry for Koneka. I love this story, it's so well written and even though I have to read it at work on my phone most of the time I always am astounded by how well thought out the plot was. I look forward to anything else you might write. And thanks for the awsome story!
person Onitsu
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh DAMN! This was freakin awsome! Dude, you gotta do a sequel. Come on. Like get into GT or something. hehe. I really liked the way you kept him as close to being IC as you could. Concidering.... hehe. Dude, it makes me want to draw Vegita :D
person mariah
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that story was awesome. you MUST do a sequal!
person Sea-Angel
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
(it was very well written i liked it, But you should
have made the ending with dra drama in it but other than that it was really good keep up the good work)



~.~.~.~Sea-Angel~.~.~.~.~
person Silver Spirit
schedule March 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ohg! ::fighting tears:: I\'m a sap for stories like that. I absolutly LUV it! Is there going to be a sequal?

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