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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm a big fan of AU's. I like what you've done here. Very original, I would actually like to see more of this to come. *smiles*
Keep up the good work.
-Keisha A. MaKainn
Keep up the good work.
-Keisha A. MaKainn
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow it was pretty good story a few spelling errors but good i think you should continue it i wanna know what happens like if they dated or when the family found out crazy shit could happen woot it was pretty hot MORE DETAIL PLZZZZ
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i reallt hope u r righting another 1
it was kind of good but it dident really do much
inuyasha18
write another chapter
it was kind of good but it dident really do much
inuyasha18
write another chapter
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! the most beautiful and most well written dbz yuri ever! plz make more chichi and bulma
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude!!!! so awsome and very sexy write more PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WRONG!!!!!!!!!!! no offence author but according to the anime he didn\'t he made it out and found the planet where he learned instant transmission.
HE SAID HE HAD FOUND A GENYU FORCE\'S SPACESHIP
HE SAID HE HAD FOUND A GENYU FORCE\'S SPACESHIP
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked that story u should make more
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually if you recall to the Saiyan Saga Goku was revived when Vegeta and Nappa came to Earth and Shenron can\'t grant the same wish twice, but enough of that this is an awesome story you nweed to write some more
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an alright story, though it seemed a bit rushed. I think you sorta pushed Chichi and Bulma, and it was choppy. I think that the story idea was good and the overall story was very sweet to read. So I think you did alright ^__^ you should try writing a story like this again, it was pretty interesting.
Anywho,
I gotta jet,
see ya later!
~Lady Melanie~
Anywho,
I gotta jet,
see ya later!
~Lady Melanie~
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, great, really great. I think you should continue the story. I\'d like to see what happens later on.