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oh, love it! but is it done? yes, no? if so, that means i can get on to the next part but if not, HURRY UP!

well i've allready read all of the "more of us" stories and i was waiting till i reached a story that wasnt completed but that doesnt seem to be happening anytime soon so i'll just make my presence known and say that i've thoroughly enjoyed all the fics i've read so far (more of us series and hormone therepy) and i'm looking forward to reading more. i've written 2 fics of my own that are (as of yet) incomplete i havent published them anywhere yet because they are not finished and i have a bad habit of re-editing over and over again(yeah i'm a bit of a perfectionist) but should u be interested i could send them to u (i'm desperate for feedback, which is strange since i havent published them i seem not likely to get feedback,but i'm lazy and dont get much time to write so i'd prefer not to be cruel and keep readers waiting for months) one is DBZ the other is original......this is a long review......anyway i loved more of us(and its various sequels) although it was a bit confusing after the 12th kid but i think my favorite part was the little notes at the end they were hilarious. Mercedes lackey is my favorite author and the last herald mage trilogy are my favorite books by her i also like lyyn flewelling and.......i read too much....i should end this now.....its turning into a babble.

Goku: *points* That's mine.
Vegeta: ......
Goku: But it is!
Vegeta: *shakes head despnglyngly*

Oh, this was nice. Me liked the sex, especially. Lemony lemonish lemons, for the lemon'd lemon-lemon devourer of lemons. Lemon. Wow. If you say lemon that many times, it stops sounding like a real word. Anyways, I really liked the sex. And I really liked Goku's sort of he-man attitude. And I liked the lemon. A lot. Lemony lemon. Man, I'm going lemon. I mean nuts. Ah, heck.
If you want to make me really happy, you'll have to continue this someday. I love lemons. And lemons love me... 0.o; Er, on the other hand, Goku sort of pissed me off sometimes. What with his whole, stupidness. I felt like Vegeta... "He may be an idiot, but he's MY idiot, and god, he's great in bed." *pouts childishly*. Why oh why was the Chichi squishing so short? I wanted her to suffer, yesh, precious, suffer...
Mercedes Lackey? Dude, I have all those books too. Vanyel and Tylendel/whoever that redhead thing was rocked the socks off of me. Hotness. And of course the gayer than gay Hawkbrothers, "Moondance" and "starsomething". Hey, Vanyel, I like ya, I think I'll snog you in the tub. Kay, nice meetin ya! Hm? My name? Well, I decided that if I couldn't get gayer *physically*....
Hah, Moondance, my darling little bishounen. *huggles imaginary bishie* Er.. don't mind me, just sort of... you know... hugging the not-there guy.... oh come on, we all do it, don't we?! *crickets chirp* Oh. well. In my opinion, Mercedes Lackey could have used a little lemon there, with Vannie and his lifemat An Another good author for yummy slashy stuff is Tanya Huff. Yum. Slash. Less romance, but man the angst the angst the angst. So hawt. *drools* *cough* *choke* *awkwardly sponges up the drool* No one saw that.
Heh. You write nice lemon. How many times have I said it? Oh well. Not gonna bother countin. Too long. Much better to just worship at your feet. I loved the way you managed to develop the baka's personality without making him learn long words, like "modesty" or "abstinence". And I love how Vegeta is still a bitter, mean old bastard to everyone, even a little bit to Kakarott. Yeah! That's my boy! Go get em! *slaps geta on the back* Never quit leaving the sour taste in their mouths, m'laddo. It's so you.
Ho hum. Gah, to think that I might have skipped this... lemony goodness.... *shudders* Well, luv ya, bye bye!

bwahahahahahahahaha! That was great! I can\'t wait to read more fo your work KEEP IT UP MAN

I am declaring myself your biggest fan. More of us and its sequel were great and this is just too hilarious. It took me a while to deal with Vegeta\'s submissiveness, people have actually been banned from my house for not respecting the Prince of all apa-- I mean Saiyans. Keep up the goodwork, I have more of your story to read. : )

~Angel

@_@ *sobs* The...the..end...NO!!! Geta come back!!!!!
Well I must say that was a superb story with a wonderful ending and a nice lemon too!

(This after Goku launched into a discussion on what it was like to be mato suo such a sexy person and not get any sex.) --rofl poor Gohan

“Did it ever occur to you that not everybody spends all their time thinking about sex?”
“No.”
“You’re impossible, Kakarot.” GAH!!! rofl that kind of reminds me of Homer Simpson!

Maybe he liked to see Kakarot trying to convince him. Maybe not. It was a mystery. One that he di int intend to ponder.-- awe the Ouji si so cute he likes to see Kakarott whine...

Spared a moment to be impressed with Kakarot.---heh heh I\'m impressed too, and very turned on! WOO HOO GO GOKU!

Vegeta just made a noise. Like he agreed, or didn’t, or didn’t care. Vegeta’s noises were confusing like that.--rofl I agree his noises can be confusing.

I loved it, although I am very sad it\'s over. *sighs* Your writing is so believable...you made me feel as if these two are really a couple, and I love that!
Thanks for such a wonderful fic!
^.*
-MB-

I can\'t believe that is the end! But I suppose all good things must come to an end. Great fic!

\"Smelling nice again—not quite as nice as he did when he first drank the hormone therapy—\"

Ah memories...those were the days...how Is ths them :-)

\"(This after Goku launched into a discussion on what it was like to be mated to such a sexy person and not get any sex.)\"

LOL! Poor Gohan, that kid is so going to need therapy :-) Still, if I was mated to Vegeta, I\'d be raving about his sexy bod all tim time too ;-)

\"that was not a ‘hey idiot, come screw me until I’m pregnant’ type smell.\"

LOL! I\'m loving the whole pleading for sex and pouting scene between Goku and Vegeta...could almost feel the tension in the room after Goku told Vegeta that he sounds like ChiChi. Oooh, that was a low one Goku. LOL!

Love Vegeta...he\'s messing with Goku! Love the fact that he\'s not even sure why...I can almost see the evil glint in his eye as he stands back to enjoy the view of pouty Goku...They truly are the perfect couple :-)

God, I love how Vegeta bares his neck to Goku so that he can bite him where he was claimed...it\'s so erotic.

\"Spared a moment to hope nobody went past them, wherever they were.\" LOL!

“Thanks Geta.”
\"Sure, he thought dizzily, anytime.\"

Indeed :-) That was amazing, as usual. :-)

“He’s Not a GIRL, DAMMIT!”

Again I loved the tie in fr...r...this time with \"Cross Eyed\" :-)

\"Vegeta just made a noise. Like he agreed, or didn’t, or didn’t care. Vegeta’s noises were confusing like that.\" LOL!

*Sobs* The end...I can\'t believe it...I am so going to miss this fic. :-(

But I like the nice hapnd :nd :-)

Thank-you for this wonderful journey!

Thanks for the info on dracula :-)

As usual...a big grin from the word go :-)

My heart goes out to Vegeta, he so longs to get back into warrior mode and Goku keeps treating him like a woman, and asking him inane questions about the babies...why is it that men don\'t get that mothers can be maternal AND still possess a functioning brain. I\'m not complaining though as far as this fic goes...I like this aspect of their relationship...keeps Vegeta sulky and sarcastic and Goku...confused and dominant :-)

BTW Vegeta...Good luck with the after birth f***ing plan...I can\'t really see Goku agreeing to that. LOL!

\"...And then Kakarot huffed, slid his arms under Vegeta and picked him up. “Come on, Geta. I think we need to go inside.”\"

Oh damn, I love this! Completely. He\'s so bloody loving and affectionate. Sometimes, it\'s good to be treated like a woman :-)

I loved how Goku was with Vegeta...for someone who didn\'t want to do this, his instincts certainly kicked in at the right time. Much better choice than Bulma :-)

\"These parts of Vegeta were his. (and Vegeta’s too, but mostly they were Goku’s.)\" LOL! Loved this!

\"“Give me my damn son, you stupid ass.”\" LOL! Doesn\'t motherhood just bring out Vegeta\'s softer side? :-)

\"...and wondered if it would make a huge impact on history if he named him something silly like Hubert or Ernie.\"

ROTFL! Oh Gods, this was funny!

Yes! The twins have arrived! I really loved the whole birthing scene...it was wonderful :-)

Looking forward to the next chapter :-)

\"Mercedes Lackey is a fantasy writer.\"

Ah, I might give her stuff a look next time I\'m in the library...I love fantasy...have only ever read Eddings, Feist, C.S Lewis, Tolkien and Jordan though...many more out there to read.

\"...But its good to read to see the origin of some of the vampire myths.\"

Hmmm, I was told once that the origins came from a real nasty piece of work named Vladimir.
The Vampire myth apparently came from the fact that when the villagers finally rose up against him and killed him, he was thrown off a cliff, but when they went to retrieve his body it was gone.
The stakes came from the fact that Vladimir was a bloodthirsty creature who often, during battle, would impale his victims on stakes of wood...earning him the nickname: \"Vladimir the Impaler\"

Is any of this referred to in the book...or have I been told a lot of rubbish?

YEAH!!! *does a happy dance and cheers* They are born!pee!pee!!!!
Poor Goku having to clean up the mess and poor Geta having to push kids out...*shakes head* not even I had to do that b/c I had a c-section.
anyway I loved this chapter I loved when Goku said you\'re leaking! How Vegeta yells for Goku to give him his son...how cute! ^.^
this is excellent and I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!
^.*
-MB-