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What\'s up with Kakarot? Did the rabbit die?
Good chapter, post MORE!!!

Okay, I think it might work now, I have removed the two as ons on either side of the partial quote from CardDragonBall\'s reply. This is where it always seemed to mess up - just didn\'t connect to my brain straight away. CardDragonBall, if there is anywayremoremove my blunders, then my embarassment factor should drop dramatically :-) Onto the review:


\"* well, I could, but that would give it away * so I suppose you’ll have to endure the lemons until we figure out why Goku’s so horny.\"

LOL! Sigh, well if I *must* I suppose I\'ll have to just put up with them...oh, the hardship ;-)

Loved this chapter! The only thing missing was the sex, but I guess I can wait until the next chapter :-)

It seems to me that Vegeta seemed to blittlittle disturbed by the fact that Goku wasn\'t jumping his bones. Who\'da thunk that the Ouji would stop a spar to enquire about sex? Methinks he may be protesting too much ;-)

OTOH: Why doesn\'t Goku seem as interested? Surely no one could ever get enough of Vegeta? Goku did seem a little twitchy though, but he\'s just giving his mate a rest, right? Right?

I love Goku\'s paranoia where Bulma is concerned, although, she does seem to pop up only when the Prince is alone :-)
I loved Goku\'s little taste test on his mate, very cunning and way cute.

\"Goku was feelingnaninanimous-and very proud that he even knew how to pronounce that word\" LOL! Loved this!

I wonder how long Vegeta is going to be able to hold out on his threat if Goku can\'t learn more discretion where their sex life is concerned...should be fun to see.

Let the games begin :-)

ROFL!!!!!!! that chap was so funny!!!! I lost it when Goku asked Vegeta if he ever had sex in the air and Vegeta responds by thinking Oh yes, he thought dryly, everday. Sometimes twice. That was great...although sex in the air might not be so bad...

When Krillen comes and says do what...I lost it again... Goku\'s lack of discretion cracks me up!!!! Poor Vegeta...
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Once again, fucking hilarious. I wish that I wrote things this funny. I usually can come up with funny dialogue but by the time I type it up. It isn\'t near as funny as it was when I first thought of it. Hmm. Anyway. I can\'t wait for the next part. I love how Vegeta thinks that he is the one in control. He\'s so cute when he\'s oblivious. :)

*Ha ha* Vegeta makes great woman!!!
That chap was great! Goku really does need to learn to be discreet doesn\'t he!

Sorry I haven\'t reviewed, so my review for all the chaps so far would be...
THIS STORY\'S F*CKING GREAT!!!

Looking forward to your next update! ^_^

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Vegeta is PART woman!!!!?!?!?!? Has hell frozen over, melted, and froze over again creating the most deadly of icicles which one has stabbed me through the heart??? Ok not really that dramatic, this story is F*CKING FUNNY!!!!! Veggies comment on sex in the air, just great, priceless comedy. ::bows to you:: If only I could be half as funny as you.

Ah bliss. I came back here to lighten my mood and found that you have updated already...and two chapters for \'More of us\' I\'m in heaven :-) I just got through reading a story where Bulma cheated on Vegeta with Goku and I\'m not a happy camper, when it comes to het fics, I\'m V/B all the way. I need your story so I won\'t hate Goku or Bulma anymore...and this was a godsend :-)

Starters, I had the hugest happy grin all the way through this one, I love horny Goku, poor Vegeta...sex every two hours, I\'m surprised he can still stand let alwalkwalk...thank God for Saiyan physiology...*chuckles*

A fertility drug for Vegeta? Hmmm, I hope Bulma knows what she\'s doing...Goku may not be so much as interested in impregnating Vegeta as just screwing him silly...he has alot of years to make up for. LOL \'sides, Vegeta is delectable ;-)

Suspicious and Jealous Goku is wonderful...Bulma had better watch her step :-)

Genius Goku is a complete crack up...I love his way around giving Vegeta his much needed extra 2 hours, whilst not actually having to go through the wait himself. ROTFL

Ahh, that glorious lemon! I love the way you write the sexual interaction between our two Saiyans. ChiChi really knows how to stick her nose in at the wrong time, doesn\'t she? Vegeta\'s attempt to kill her with thoughts alone was hilarious. Totally love possessive Goku.

Oh dear, poor Vegeta, now Yamcha knows as well...still, gotta love Vegeta\'s equally territorial nature, Yamcha\'s gotta learn to look away when a naked Goku is present. *chuckles*

Need more, but will patiently wait \'cause you\'re so good with the updates already. *hugs*

Sex, Drugs and Male Pregnancy. What more could a girl possably ask for? Good story, write more!

Ok, ytryitrying to kill me aren\'t you!?!?!? I just about died when Goku kept saying mine, mine, mine, etc.... AHHHHHH!!!! I love it sooo much! Oh and I was laughing so hard when you wrote Vegeta tried to kill her with just his thoughts...how cute!!! I wish Goku did just kill ChiChi, but I know Gohan needs her and bla bla bla....
Anywho great chappie!!!!!!!
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!!!!!! ch2 was so hilarious! I loved it! but I do have to admit I am a preggy Veggie hater...but I liked your other fic soooo much, I couldn\'t resist, I had to read! Needless to say I wasn\'t dissapointed. I just loooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeee dominant Goku, I love Vegeta being protected! *sticks tongue out at everyone who hates dominant Goku* It\'s just so sexy! Like when he says he doesn\'t want anyone seeing or sniffing his mate, I could sooooooo picture him saying that...especially as a super saiyajin. He just looks, so dominant and in control when he is like that. Like the evil kid baga,aga, I think in episodes 263, or 264 and there is this lightning behind him...*drools* he is sooo hot! but VEGETA IS HOTTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well you are corrupting all my morals of hating preggy Veggie...even though he isnt pregnant yet...but I love this fic too much to stop reading it! So update soon!
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