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for Hormone Therapy

by CardDragonBall

person Getarian
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo! Another update. You\'re the best :-)

I am so loving the way Goku is turning out. \'Can we do it again, now?\' Can\'t blame him, Vegeta is such a turn on ;-)

\'Better than food\' For Goku...the ultimate compliment.

I love how he realised that Vegeta still had his \'male needs\' seeing to, and wanted to do that for him. So sweet, yet still, at the same time, he really just wanted to get back to the \'nicer part.\' So Goku :-)

Goku is so protective of Vegeta now, wonderful! I love a dominant, possessive and protective Goku where Vegeta is concerned. :-)

Goku is turning out to be quite the horny little bugger and I love this...feed his mate, then ask for sex. Dinner and sex. LOL Still, the completely open way that Goku is about sex, I can see some pretty embarrassing situations for Vegeta if he doesn\'t learn to look around before asking. LOL!

Keep it coming :-)
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok....maybe it was a bad idea to read this while I am still in class. I was again laughing and fainting! My friend thinks I\'m insane. I loved the part about the cataclysmic battle *shakes head* I need to calm down. When Goku thought what is Vegeta going to to with this alleged time, I was nearly falling out of my chair. These are the two hottest saiyajins in the world, and they only get hotter when I read your fics!
You always have sme nice and juicy lemons, that make me die and wish I was Goku...uh..except I\'d still be a girl, so nevermind I don\'t wish I was Goku, I just wish I could have sex with the OUJI!!!!!!!

Well I am happy and sad that Vegeta doesn\'t have to be totally obdediant to Goku...as much as I was turned on by that it just wasnt fair to Geta.

I love the little notes between Goku and Vegeta that you always have at the end of your stories, they are very funny!
^.*
-MB-
person jaygoose
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, now that was damned hilarious. I love the way that Goku\'s mind works. And Vegeta\'s is even funnier. I love this one. But I still can\'t decide which one is better. So I won\'t. You know I totally forgot about ChiChi. Hmm. Wonder what she will think of this.
person Getarian
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot! Very Hot! Lots of hot Saiyan sex, even with female parts added, Vegeta is still the number one hottie :-)

Goku is a scream. Now I know why Goku kept wandering in the series...having sex with ChiChi is like a hand j LOL LOL

I loved how Goku was considering messing with Vegeta and flustering him, but decided against it \'cause it would only delay the sex...Vegeta created a monster when he decided to show Goku that sex could be good...even if the poor guy was driven to it by mating hormones...heh heh heh.

I cracked up when all Bulma said to Vegeta w"So."So...\" and Vegeta responded with \"Shut up, woman\" That\'s the Vegeta I know and love :-)

I\'m pleased that Bulma at least felt bad enough to give a hint to Vegeta as to how he could possibly prevent that total compulsion to obey Goku...although, I am going to miss some aspects of that :-)

As for discretion not being Goku\'s strong suit...good, I am so hoping for some fun in that area ;-)

You\'re the best!
person Getarian
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is getting so good. I love the idea that the bond has made Vegeta compliant to Goku, could definitely make for some fun times ;-) Still, I can\'t help feeling sorry for the poor bastard, having a dominant mate who is pretty clueless has to be the height of frustration, and for the Prince, just a dash of humiliation...Goku needs to wise up. Still, his \'education\' was a treat. :-)

I loved how Vegeta went to mentally threatening Bulma\'s life to wanting to give her an honourary title...what a crack up :-)

Loved hegetegeta needed recovery time whilst Goku was all gung-ho for round two.

You are really good and I am thoroughly enjoying your work.

Looking forward to more :-)



person jaygoose
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. It\'s good to see the other side without it seeming to much like the other story. Poor Vegeta! I can\'t decided which one of the fics is funnier. So I won\'t. Great fic. This one might even have more \'Banging\' than the other one. Cool.
person Ladylupin
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Vegetas not going be so submissive and slave-like this whole fanfic, is he!?
He will get his free will back right?! Right!?
I don\'t know if I can continue reading if he doesn\'t!!!!!
person SilverYaoi
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fic so far! I just love the idea you got! Update soon!!
person Getarian
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, weird as ever :-) I am absolutely loving \'More of us\' so I had to give this one a read ;-)

Starters: Damn Bulma to hell for deliberately messing around with the only bod anywhere, which could be described as perfect. But now that she has...and Goku is looking mighty interested, I am looking forward to more zany fun and hot lemons between our resident Saiyans.

Keep it coming :-)

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