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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been laughing so hard I fell out of my chair. I think my brother doesn't want to know why anymore after the last time he asked...
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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do you love me??? Gave you 1000 hits. lol well, 1now.now. See ya on monday!!!
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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I realise that you are done with this story, but I thought that I would let you know that it was very good. I liked the part where you had the twins saving themselves. That was cool. Now on to your next saga. I seem to have a lot of catching up to do.
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I don\'t know what it is about male/male dbz lemons that makes them so fascinating to read, but ur story is one of the best i have read in a long time. when i had to restart my computer, i couldn\'t wait to get back online and finish reading it. I hope there is more to come.
A new fan,
Sierrecat :>
A new fan,
Sierrecat :>
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The End? Awww
Well thanks for such a great fic. I am happy all is good and well and the twins and Trunks got to go back to a normal future and also play a very funny game of guess Frieza\'s gender! I love that. And awww lil Vegeta had to put his baby brother to sleep, how cute.
Well it was a great story! I enjoyed reading it!
Well thanks for such a great fic. I am happy all is good and well and the twins and Trunks got to go back to a normal future and also play a very funny game of guess Frieza\'s gender! I love that. And awww lil Vegeta had to put his baby brother to sleep, how cute.
Well it was a great story! I enjoyed reading it!
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this cer!
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Loved how Trunks got into the whole \'Freiza was a girl\' argument. :-)
Really enjoyed the whole arriving home scene. From the flicking on of the lights to Vegeta shoving the baby in young Vegeta\'s hands demanding that he get him back to sleep, and then turned and stormed back in the house, and Goku\'s grinning explanation of how they\'d just got the baby to sleep, before he too walked back inside. I really love the way you write scenes, I can always picture them so well, sometimes I can hear and smell them too - and no I\'m not insane - I know what I mean...I\'m just not sure that I\'m articulating my thoughts too well :-)
I love how Vegeta is with Gina...he is so totally smitten. She\'s going to be a good addition to that crazy Saiyan household :-)
Now this Trunks is a real cutie - I like him and I\'m so glad that he\'s in such a wonderful world and is now surrounded by family :-)
\"Trunks had never been so grateful for being born with a nice ass in all his life.\"
LOL! He can definitely thank his father for that - genetics can sometimes yield such wonderful things :-)
“Trust me,” Goten said, “Nobody on earth will be passing us by.”
*chuckle* Can\'t imagine why not...Four battle crazy Saiyans, 20 Dogs and *possibly* a mad scientist... LOL!
Really like the fact that Trunks and Vegeta are becoming friends :-)
Sorry to see it end, but it was a happy one, so I\'m happy :-)
Once again...thanks for the wonderful journey :-)
Loved how Trunks got into the whole \'Freiza was a girl\' argument. :-)
Really enjoyed the whole arriving home scene. From the flicking on of the lights to Vegeta shoving the baby in young Vegeta\'s hands demanding that he get him back to sleep, and then turned and stormed back in the house, and Goku\'s grinning explanation of how they\'d just got the baby to sleep, before he too walked back inside. I really love the way you write scenes, I can always picture them so well, sometimes I can hear and smell them too - and no I\'m not insane - I know what I mean...I\'m just not sure that I\'m articulating my thoughts too well :-)
I love how Vegeta is with Gina...he is so totally smitten. She\'s going to be a good addition to that crazy Saiyan household :-)
Now this Trunks is a real cutie - I like him and I\'m so glad that he\'s in such a wonderful world and is now surrounded by family :-)
\"Trunks had never been so grateful for being born with a nice ass in all his life.\"
LOL! He can definitely thank his father for that - genetics can sometimes yield such wonderful things :-)
“Trust me,” Goten said, “Nobody on earth will be passing us by.”
*chuckle* Can\'t imagine why not...Four battle crazy Saiyans, 20 Dogs and *possibly* a mad scientist... LOL!
Really like the fact that Trunks and Vegeta are becoming friends :-)
Sorry to see it end, but it was a happy one, so I\'m happy :-)
Once again...thanks for the wonderful journey :-)
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So that\'s the end huh? Ah, well I don\'t know if I could have taken anymore of Gina anyway...Hmm...It\'s just wierd reading hetro stuff now :)
So Goku and Geta had aer ber boy huh, I guess that\'s cool. They did name him Bardock...That\'s always cool.
So Goku and Geta had aer ber boy huh, I guess that\'s cool. They did name him Bardock...That\'s always cool.
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Those opening paragraphs with Trunks thinking...are very touching...very sad. I loved that we got to know what he thought and how feels, and how he feels awful that he couldn\'t have just saved his world on his own...but then again he would have never met Goten.
Trunks just stood there. Realizing that he was part of that bond between them now. Felt outside of it. Didn’t feel much of anything. --Trunks makes me so sad.
“Look,” Goten said, blowing smoke out of his mouth, “I’m like a smoke stack.”--GAH!!! ROFL poor guy
Vegeta was busily scrubbing his arms still. “You’re the only one that finds that amusing.”--Actually I found that to be quite amusing ^.^
And then as the skin started to heal even more rapidly than it already was, Mom smacked him upside his head and Vegeta punched him in the gut. “Stupid ass!” they said together.--rofl very cute...loved that
And I liked the whole ice cave thing, thought it was very creative. I don\'t see why more ppl dont read this, it\'s great!
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Trunks just stood there. Realizing that he was part of that bond between them now. Felt outside of it. Didn’t feel much of anything. --Trunks makes me so sad.
“Look,” Goten said, blowing smoke out of his mouth, “I’m like a smoke stack.”--GAH!!! ROFL poor guy
Vegeta was busily scrubbing his arms still. “You’re the only one that finds that amusing.”--Actually I found that to be quite amusing ^.^
And then as the skin started to heal even more rapidly than it already was, Mom smacked him upside his head and Vegeta punched him in the gut. “Stupid ass!” they said together.--rofl very cute...loved that
And I liked the whole ice cave thing, thought it was very creative. I don\'t see why more ppl dont read this, it\'s great!
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Always enjoy a peek into the twins world :-)
Poor Trunks, I actually feel his semi-detached confusion. Imagine a lifetime spent in the presence of the twins :-) He\'s never going to be sane again. LOL
I really like the way Vegeta is with Goten, he really is the \'carer\' of the two isn\'t he?
\"“So we’re dead?” Vegeta doubted this. But he was willing to listen to the rest of the stupid explanation.\"
LOL! I did enjoy this :-)
Okay! The truth about the ice-cave. I really like this somewhat paradoxical explanation. The idea that the twins couldn\'t go back to their own time until they saved the younger versions of themselves is somewhat nifty :-)
Would still like to know who the hell the ice beings were though. :-)
\"...Because there was a very small list of things their parents hadn’t told them. (Those things being what their Mom had managed to keep their father from saying about their sex life.)\"
LOL! Can just see these moments so clearly in my head :-)
\"Mom smacked him upside his head and Vegeta punched him in the gut. “Stupid ass!” they said together.\" LOL!
\"I heard so many good things about…er… Actually. Well; I heard that you had a very nice ass.\"
LOL! I enjoyed this and the follow up stuff also but this really cracked me up :-)
Really enjoyed this chapter...looking forward to the next one. :-)
Poor Trunks, I actually feel his semi-detached confusion. Imagine a lifetime spent in the presence of the twins :-) He\'s never going to be sane again. LOL
I really like the way Vegeta is with Goten, he really is the \'carer\' of the two isn\'t he?
\"“So we’re dead?” Vegeta doubted this. But he was willing to listen to the rest of the stupid explanation.\"
LOL! I did enjoy this :-)
Okay! The truth about the ice-cave. I really like this somewhat paradoxical explanation. The idea that the twins couldn\'t go back to their own time until they saved the younger versions of themselves is somewhat nifty :-)
Would still like to know who the hell the ice beings were though. :-)
\"...Because there was a very small list of things their parents hadn’t told them. (Those things being what their Mom had managed to keep their father from saying about their sex life.)\"
LOL! Can just see these moments so clearly in my head :-)
\"Mom smacked him upside his head and Vegeta punched him in the gut. “Stupid ass!” they said together.\" LOL!
\"I heard so many good things about…er… Actually. Well; I heard that you had a very nice ass.\"
LOL! I enjoyed this and the follow up stuff also but this really cracked me up :-)
Really enjoyed this chapter...looking forward to the next one. :-)
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-And then as the skin started to heal even more rapidly than it already was, Mom smacked him upside his head and Vegeta punched him in the gut. “Stupid ass!” they said together.-
Mother/Sonded ded ass whippings have to be the best huh?
-Meanwhile, Dad was chattering at Trunks good-naturedly. “Oh, so you’re Trunks. I heard so many good things about…er… Actually. Well; I heard that you had a very nice ass. But I’m glad you decided to mate. I like it. Lots of sex.”
“DAD!” the Twins shouted as Mom roared: “KAKAROT!”-
The silly Goku, always with the sex.
Those by far had to be the best parts of the story. I like how you handled the ice cave thing. I can\'t say that I blame you. I do it all the time in mine. If you explained everything all the time the story would become ginormous. The readers might be a little peeved at first but I think that they come to realize that what you didn\'t explain was not as important as they thought it was. What was important was what you did tell them.
Oh i also loved when Trunks asked if Goten told everyone about his ass and Goten said that Trunks\'s ass was world famous. A hoot!
Mother/Sonded ded ass whippings have to be the best huh?
-Meanwhile, Dad was chattering at Trunks good-naturedly. “Oh, so you’re Trunks. I heard so many good things about…er… Actually. Well; I heard that you had a very nice ass. But I’m glad you decided to mate. I like it. Lots of sex.”
“DAD!” the Twins shouted as Mom roared: “KAKAROT!”-
The silly Goku, always with the sex.
Those by far had to be the best parts of the story. I like how you handled the ice cave thing. I can\'t say that I blame you. I do it all the time in mine. If you explained everything all the time the story would become ginormous. The readers might be a little peeved at first but I think that they come to realize that what you didn\'t explain was not as important as they thought it was. What was important was what you did tell them.
Oh i also loved when Trunks asked if Goten told everyone about his ass and Goten said that Trunks\'s ass was world famous. A hoot!